Critique Me! Please!

[Appologies]

This is your opportunity to chew me to pieces, plz 2 b taking it.

[swiftstart]

First impression: very pretty :D
I like your layout quite a bit, and the cloud links are very cute and not distracting which is always a big thing for me when people make ~pretty~ links :3

Notes:
I wouldn't mind knowing what the basic three types of Dae'Allete look like or just more in general about them, I imagine your pressed for time (not sure when your deadline is) so maybe do 'scientific' sketches as a way to bs a general idea?
Like, are Raptors much bigger than Songs? :o

Next, it might just be my computer (I'm on the 10 yr old crummy one), but your 'my actual pets' boxes are a bit disheveled. Some have a blue background, others have no bg at all and and two of your pets have no info inputed for them at all but "Row 8, Column 2" type things.

The word 'serious' in the why section is very hard to read :c -Try a darker color?

But other than that, looks very good- I might break up some more of the text with images, but your stories intriguing and sounds realistic :3

[Appologies]

Thanks a bunch, Swift! The deadline was the 10th, but the owner will be taking a week or two to look at the apps, so I can probably add a few more images. The differences are really only in colour and wing shape.

The pet chart is intentionally done like that... the background is to differentiate accounts - Appologies has a background, Soccerox doesn't - then Acoiris doesn't, Failess does - and Cryptids does. I might add a purple background to the Soccerox/Acoiris, if that would help clarify the intent?

I added another icon so the empty cells now have something in them.

And I changed the italic font to a lighter colour, I beleive it's clearer now. I went lighter rather than darker.

Thank you again for taking the time to review!

[Bosco]

I just love everything you did with this!! :):)
Congrats, and i hope you get her :):)