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trubiekatie
Posted: Jan 6 2012, 07:53 PM


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Hi everyone! :* I'm Kate, just recently discovered Neopound.

www.neopets.com/~jehovas

^ that's my application

It's obviously not done, but I would love any direction or thoughts thus far!
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skyekittie
Posted: Jan 7 2012, 09:16 AM


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Welcome to Neopound, Kate!

Your layout doesn't work for me in IE, but it looks really nice on FF! The div for the adoptables doesn't align with the rest of the layout though.

I feel like you should include a bit more art, or get rid of your 'art' section and spread your drawings throughout the page. Maybe some premade faerie draik adopts as well?

I also noticed one thing:
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Greek should have a capital 'g'.

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trubiekatie
Posted: Jan 8 2012, 03:51 PM


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Ah yes, I should have mentioned that in the first post. I have a bunch of pictures in mind that still need to be done. For example:

- Kind of a creepy ice cave picture with her glowing blue eyes in the intro
- A dislike/likes picture and a cool split quad of the innocent/evil nature
- Probably some story art (I have some in mind in my head, just need to draw it out)

I also have the layout made for IE @ www.neopets.com/~nallise just as a back up :D

And thank you about the adoptables div, I will have to fix that.

And the capital G. Thank you kindly :D
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