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Ashers
Posted: Feb 2 2006, 03:10 PM
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Audials swiveled upon her cranium, emerald gaze dancing around lazily. She hadn't been long in departing the others and she silently wondered where Fukkatsu had gotten off to. He had acted strange right before his departure and she had a suspicious feeling.

Fur bristeled lightly as she stole one more look around, confirming that the surrounding land was indeed barren. Doubts were lain aside for the current moment and she bent down with ease, mug being lowered beneath the waters and the fae drinking her fill.


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opeth
Posted: Feb 2 2006, 03:41 PM
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Kannya had led her father and herself away from the outskirts of the territory and into talons lake, God knows how they ended up there so quickly.. she snarled as she shoulder butted her father out of the way and snapped her maw toward him just missing his maw by mere inches

Infernus: He growled at his daughter for advancing toward him again but he was getting quite used to her tough talk and slight action.. he nipped at her plume as she passed him as nares caught scent of another femora in the territory, ''Wait a minute daughter do you smell that''? he gruffed.

Kannya stopped in her tracks and grinned a malicious grin ''indeed'' she snarled but ignored the scent as she padded forth but soon stopped in her tracks as she caught a glimpse of the other femme, she gave a hard stare at this female before looking toward her father ''i wonder if she is the alphess or just a wanderer such as we'' she told her father with a grin

Infernus: he looked at his daughter to see what she was talking about then he too stopped in the midst of his footing and stared over at the femora with warm content she was beautiful, he stood there looking like a fool he almost tripped over his mitts then stood there in sheer silnce looking at the pretty femme

Kannya growled at her father ''come on'' she nipped at his mug piercing his flesh ever so lightly and marked a bite mark upon him anough to drop a small amount of blood from him to wake up and stop dreaming

Infernus: he winced and snapped his maw at his daughter ''will you stop already''! he snarled as he bared his hooks and wagged his tassel in na low position with a submissive snarl via whimper.
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Posted: Feb 2 2006, 06:59 PM
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Head was suddenly raised, a dainty paw held in midair the sounds of others flooding her senses. Leathery nares flared and she brought in the scent of two wolven long before her gaze sought them out.

Emerald optics gazed at them wearily, salmon pink tongue finally daring to lash out and remove the remnants of water upon her muzzle. Tassle wavered high above her signaling her rank and she turned, feet being planted in the soft earthen beneath her.

" 'Ello."

She offered softly, remaining silent as the two continued to approach her.

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opeth
Posted: Feb 2 2006, 07:48 PM
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Infernus: he seemed mezmerized by the beauty of the femora, he smiled foolishly at her as he took a few steps toward her ignoring his daughters aggression toward him

Kannya: she watched in horror as her father seemed taken away by the femme quivering lips peeled back to reveal deadly hooks as hackles rose over spie as well as tassel.. the agressive femme plucked her ivory hooks into her fathers nape to pull him back and away from the femme she was afraid of her taking him away from her

Infernus: he was pulled back and snarled to his daughters direction as he wipped his dial to face her hue to hue he snapped his maw shut toward her ''stop it Kannya whats gotten into you''?

Kannya: she growled louder for the femme to hear and hues glared toward her ''you will not steal daddy away from me hes all i got'' she rumbled another snarl from her throat.. then she nipped at her father again but this time snapping her maw shut hard upon his mug

Infernus: he shook the bite from his daughter and reared up upon hind limbs and pushed her away from him ''iv had it girl.. thats enough''! he barked out in gruff

Kannya: her father pushed her away for the first time she glared at her father and dominantly proceeded after him she snapped her muzzle upon his tassel to grab his attention further more ''no''!

Infernus: he ignored his daughter's plead for him to not leave her for another femme a femme that could cause fatal wreckage to their realationship..he proceeded forward to the femme ''greetings my name is Infernus, and this is my daughter Kannya please you must forgive her as she is highly and overly aggressive as she fears of lossing me''

Kannya: she watched with a weary hue toward her father then shot a glare toward the femme she growled lightly as mug pulled apart and she half revealed the tips of her top hooks ,,she yapped once toward her father as she fell upon front pillars into a bow position and yapped again as she sprung toward her fathers muzzle as plumage rose over spine wagging in aggression
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Ashers
Posted: Feb 2 2006, 09:32 PM
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The fae was suddenly fed up with the unknown fem and her lips peeled back, a low growl echoeing within her chest, emerald optics narrowing slightly.

She wasn't in the mood nor did she have the time for something as foolish as this. Emerald optics stayed locked onto the fem's even as she heard the two speak, choosing to ignore their words.

Fur bristeled lightly, hackles raised, as she growled lowly again.

"It would do you good to take heed that you are a stranger upon these lands. There is nothing to stop the law from saying that your life is in my hands."

Her voice sounded odd. She actually sounded angry.

Jostli was never angry.

Or maybe it was a new personality she had inquired within the long years of living with three unruly brothers.

Tassle wavered high above her in a dominant stance and she spoke again, her voice but a mere hiss.

"What point would I have in taking your father when I know nothing of him? Further more, perhaps, it would be best seeing as the way you respect your elders. If that is how you would respond to the alpha then perhaps you should pass through and hurriedly."

Her words slowly dwindled but her stance did nothing of the sort, her on guard stance remaining as did her bristeling fur and raised hackles. She wouldn't allow a /foreigner/ to make a fool of her.

She had played nicely for the past week and she was growing quiet moody for unknown reasons.

Ok so maybe we all know but I'll keep that to myself, kk?
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opeth
Posted: Feb 2 2006, 09:43 PM
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ooc: lol

BIC:

Kannya: she sneered at the femme not giving a damn what she thought about her nor did she care what she thought she could do she hissed back

''i have dethroned and killed many Alphas my day that is why iv been......''

her words where cut short as her father placed his maw iver hers to keep her silent she shook free from her father and nipped him back

Infernus: he raised a brow with an embarassed look about him and tassel went under his belly as he had the look of humilation he looked toward the femme who snapped back at his daughter he grinned at her

''she does not mean what she says...''

Kannya: she growled at the femme with a look of danger about her and a grin of mailce struck her face...

''sure i do iv killed many and not many mess with me either'' she hissed with delight

Infernus: he rolled his hues at his daughter then fwaped her her one across the maw with a large mitt

''you are my daughter you must listen to me we are on strange lands and she is right she has rights to kill us or you in your case''

he looked over to the pretty femme sheepishly

Kannya: she snorted not caring anymore

''bring it''

she had indeed killed many in which held higher power then she as she had the lust for blood and had a deep sinister side to her.. unlike her father who was soft and gentle.. she rubbed her cheek with her left mitt and snpped at her father again colliding her hooks right next to his right sonar just missing him by a centimeter
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Posted: Feb 3 2006, 03:42 AM
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Perhaps it was an understatment to say he was interested in her. Much more than an understatement. And even know, he couldn't find the word that would describe their situation.

Brow rose as the brute stared silently from the golden plains at the scene that was taking place before him. He'd only just arrived, so to attemp to speak to Jostli, in hopes that someone wouldn't butt in. However, luck wasn't on their side. Go figure.

At the sudden tone of the white wolfess, he tensed. Auds pressed back against his head, eyes snapping towards the other wolves. Sapphire eyes narrowed as he listened to their words. Such fools, they were. He frowned slowly, shaking his head. Jostli could be a fighter, if she wanted to. With the new side he had just seen, she could fight like hell. However, he knew he would feel guilty if he could have done something different about the situation. And so...

"Jostli?"

He leapt from the golden cover, beautiful, gray, shaggy coat being shaken free of debree.(sp) Large pads carried him forward, casting an emotionless glance towards the others. It had seemed to male had taken a fancy to Jostli. He didn't like that.

He came to her right side, frame lowering slowly onto haunches quite close to her. Muzzle gently brushed her neck, a quiet growl escaping him. His gaze shifted from her to the others, and stayed on them.

"You've found trouble, I see..."


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Posted: Feb 3 2006, 07:08 AM
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The growling had yet to cease and suddenly a snapping bark was given.

Her features had turned from delicate and serene to angry and contorted.

Emerald optics danced like wild fire and just as she was about to step forward Fukkatsu's voice broke the air.

Emerald optics flickered to him before shooting back to the other fae, not giving her a chance to attack her without being warned.

She felt the nudge on her kneck and for a moment she almost turned and snapped at him, lost within her own anger.

"No, it seems trouble has found me."

She hissed, continueing to glare at the fem.



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opeth
Posted: Feb 3 2006, 11:24 AM
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Infernus: he looked to the other male who syddenly approached which seemed out from nowhere.. he grinned an embarassed grin due to his aggressive daughter .. he looked to Kannya

Kannya lets go''

He gruffed toward her as he nipped lightly toward her to coax her away from trouble he looked back toward the male

''please forgive us sir as its my daughter who loves to fight and kills firsts asking questions later..'' he lowered his stances as he backed away tassle held low showing he was not aggressive

Kannya: she felt the connection of her fathers nip and she swirled around and slammed a mitt hard into his jaws and reared up upon hind limbs and fully attacked her coaxing father.. she connected her hooks deeply into his windpipe and shook him wildly...

Infernus: he gaged as he felt his daughter strike him like a flying bullet and connect her hooks into his windpipe.. choking he lowered his torso and pulled his mitts forward onto his daughters shoulders to try and pull her off of him..

Kannya: she knew she had her father ..like always.. despite him being male and stronger then she ..but she was quick and swift.. she could feel blood beginning to spit into her maw as she moved toward the jugular region and pulled herself away after she realized what she was doing.. she had gone mad indeed and attacked without warning especially her dumbfounded father who was a gentle creature comparred to herself she was ruthless and mercelless.. she was dangerous..

Infernus: he coughed and gagged as she finally broke free from him he looked to his daughter

''What are you doing''?!

He exclaimed in fear as he lowered himself into a submissive posture to his daughter for the first time sonars pinned to the back of skull and he refused to look toward the two stranger as he was put to shame by his daughter..

Kannya: she soon forgot about the other two that where standing there she looked at her father with hatred but yet she loved him deep down inside.. she seemed to be bi-polar or seemed to have multiple personalities...
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Posted: Feb 3 2006, 04:30 PM
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Ooc| Opeth, I don't mean to be rude, but you need to revise some things. I'm not trying to single you out and be mean, but... You need to work on your grammar. I believe that was one of the requirements you needed to get into here, but you still have to use them while you're roleplaying, too.You hardly ever use comma's, and you don't use much capitilization. Your quotation marks are in the right place, but you put your ending puncuation outside of it, when it should be inside. You skip a space when your characters talk, which you're supposed to whenever someone different is talking, but you skip again, and then add onto it in the next paragraph, when it should be with the words. For example:

((''What are you doing''?!

He exclaimed in fear as he lowered himself into a submissive posture to his daughter for the first time sonars pinned to the back of skull and he refused to look toward the two stranger as he was put to shame by his daughter..))

Note that there wasn't one period within that entire paragraph, until the very end. Usually, when you read something, you only take a breath at a comma, or a period. You're supposed to be able to do that, not read an entire paragraph without breathing. Also, you put alot of '...', into things, and it doesn't help the words flow. Don't worry, I used to do that alot. However, it's fine to do those things if someone's thinking, but not at the end of every paragraph. As I said, you don't use much capitilization, so you should work on it. Also, I notice that when you're playing two characters, you put 'Infernus:-etc'. There's nothing wrong with that, but that too, doesn't seem to flow. It would be much more easier if you typed up one post, with the top half one wolf, and the bottom, the other. You don't have to play out the reactions to your wolves in one giant post. I believe in quality over quantity, and that mean's that the quality, such as grammar, puncuation, spelling, etc, is more important than how long it is.

Going back to the half and half post, you don't have to do the 'Infernus:' gig, you can always just make each wolf a different font. To do that, at the beginning of that wolf's paragraph, or whichever part is them, simply put [ ], but with color= green Or whichever color you want. Once you've finished with that they've done and said, you MUST put [ ] , with /color inside of it. That can only work if you put the ending to it. And, once you've finished with that, make another one with a different color for the other wolf. Keep in mind that it's best to stick with the first colors you've used for them. And, if you mess up or want to change something, go to the top right hand corner and hit 'Edit', and you can change it. Seem simple enough? -.^ Dun worry, you'll get the hang of it.
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Posted: Feb 3 2006, 04:44 PM
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At her growl, he tensed. What had he done? Hearing her words, his gaze shifted back to the two wolves as they began to bicker, and soon enough, it seemed to have turned into a real fight. At the uprising hackles of Jostli, he immediatly rose, a low growl escaping him as he pressed Jostli aside.

"Don't," he stated calmly, eyeing the two with a sagacious, unblinking stare.

The large, gray wolf shifted forward, long tassel held behind him as he moved forward. With a mistifying grace, he'd leapt between the two, his broad side blocking each other from view. His usual calm and melancholy sapphire eyes had hardened into a stormy blue and gray, flexing lightly with a tinge of indigo. The low growl had only risen, and yet deepened all the same. His tone had shifted from it's calm and melidious tone, into a more cold and hardened one, anguish and pain melted into very seams.

"I'm quite sure that this peaceful land doesn't need two wolves with a troubled relationship such as yours. And obviously, they don't need fighting, either. I suggest it wise that you get your attitude under control; show respect to your elders. You seem to love your father so much as to protect him. And from the false assumption that this lovely young fea behind me so suddenly has taken interest in a stranger, too.

"As well as that, despite how much you seemed to have love your father, you attack him blindly out of your own ignorance. My, how bold... However, you're quite wrong. Jostli here has only welcomed you with open arms, and you assumed that it was free. You're mistaken, my dear. Don't take such things for granted."


He eyed her wearily once more, before his gaze shifted to the male, pools washing over the brutes figure.

"And perhaps it's best if you learn to get your daughter under control. You'd be doing us all a favor."

Stormy gaze turned to glance towards Jostli, features hardened with a sort of wisdom that even he couldn't comprehend. Slowly, it faded, and the cold express shifted to a lighter one, large pads carrying him from the two, back to stand at the white fea's side. However, he did not sit down, only shifted a foot or so away from her. Perhaps, just maybe, she was still upset...
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Posted: Feb 3 2006, 05:19 PM
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Kannya bounced away from the male who approached, that got in between her and her father, she glared toward him with anger and frustration. She looked toward ehr father with a saddened look about her. She lowered herself in shame as she knew she was lossing it.

''I'm sorry''

Was all Kannya could utter out toward the strange male. She lowered her cranium with a short growl, then backed away from her father and the strange male.

Infernus looked at his daughter then over to the bruja, he smiled lightly to him. Then looked over to the fea . He wasnt fased by the male jumping in between him and his daughter , though he was glad that he had done it. He sighed lightly and shook his crown slowly , as he watched his daughter back away.

ooc: for some reason colors are not working on my comp..bold works though...grrrrrr
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Posted: Feb 4 2006, 12:08 PM
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He frowned at the fea's words, stormy gaze shifting to the calm and gentle sapphire.

"You should be apologizing to Jostli, or your father. Not me."

A sigh followed his words, features becoming weary. The gray, shaggy coat was shaken lightly, eyes traveling towards the whtie fea beside him, awaiting a response.
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Posted: Feb 4 2006, 12:45 PM
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Emerald optics remained on the fae long after Fukkatsu had jumped between them, their words sinking in slowly.

Ever so slowly fur began laying back, hackles resuming their normal stature. Angry gaze, however, did nothing of the sort and remained cold upon the hovering fae.

Audials tuliped forwards at the brute's last words and she snorted slightly, a low growl echoeing within her chest.

"Save it. Feel free to walk upon the Hell's Flame wolf pack lands with ease. However if you should ever cross me again in such a manner it will be assumed that you are threatening my authority and more over my rank. I shan't be as kind in our next meeting of this kind so I would warn you to thread lightly."

The she-wolf gave the fae another long look before gaze shot to her father, a small dip of her muzzle.

"Welcome to the pack."

And with that she turned, making haste as she jumped from the sandy bank onto solid ground, pistons propelling her forwards as she decided she had somewhere else to be.

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Posted: Feb 4 2006, 12:58 PM
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Sapphire pools watched the white fea leave, and he turned to give two a cold stare, muscles tensing as he took a step back. Features suddenly became hard once more, a low growl escaping him.

"You'd better watch your back. 'Cause next time, I'll be chewing on it."

With that, he turned round, and with an easy leap, was bounding after the fea. Sometimes, the hard way is the best.
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