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daisie
Posted: Nov 10 2009, 06:10 AM


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Hello,

This is my last WIP before declaring it done.

Areas of concern were the eyes, the bicep, and the R side ear. I tried to touch them a little but I'm sure there's still lots of room for improvement (at least for learning purposes). Please give me your feedback and thank you:)

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sketchart26
Posted: Nov 10 2009, 06:34 AM


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Hi Daisie she is beautiful mate. I think her right shoulder looks a little bumpy I think because of the white gap you have on the edge. Maybe blend this a little and I reckon shes perfect fr me then. I have really enjoyed your wip mate thank you so much for sharing this way.
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daisie
Posted: Nov 10 2009, 08:50 AM


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Hi Rose,

Surprise! That's no shoulder ... but it is my fault for assuming it to be a part of her dress even though it didn't make sense since the other side clearly depicted a sleeveless garment. Upon re-examination, it's actually the back of the chair she's sitting in. In good taste and to avoid similar confusions, I will simply do away with it. Thanks for the wake up call:)

And Jane, if you're out there, this is where my "la la land" is...hehe.

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sketchart26
Posted: Nov 10 2009, 09:28 AM


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Hi Daisie it's amazing what we can see when we go back to recess things. I'm glad I was able to help mate. Don't be to hard on yourself. I think this is a good learning experience for all of us.
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