Unknowingly Tresspassing, new cat

Icy air whirled around the barren rocks. Simple, white snow frosted the stones, making them slippery. Clouds of soft gray and dark gray filtered warm sunlight. No birds stirred, no prey moved. Silence had become.

Through the frozen air, a brown shape appered. Scent was unlike anmy of Thunderclan cats knew, it was one of the ocean, one of salt, one of many miles away. This cat was like no other, for she was Brackentail.

Then while cheetahtail ran he notised what had happened to every thing that lived.
Forzen still, since a new cat came in townor should i say forest . Anyways cheetahtail had noticed everything. *pulled out a water gun and shot the cat like crazy jk* He whent to a place were the cat could not smell him. He walked in front of the cat. "Who are you?" he asked the strange cat.

Fright. Fright chilled Brackentail down to her bones. Hazel eyes blinded with fear. "B-Brackentail..." She gasped for air and words as the fright of the cat nearly choked her. The nimble cat's limbs slowly began to back up into a bush.

"Hmmmmmmm"Cheetahtail mewed. "U smell different from thunderclan" He wandered. "U new?" he asked. Bluetail had speedin his eye ready to run at all times.

occ: I don't think you're suppost to you chatspeak

"I'm afraid I don't know about this Thunderclan you speak of. I'm not really from around here.." She confessed, these cats words were clueless to her. Thunderclan? What was that?

ooc: is that better idk if it is

BIC: "Thunderclan is a clan whose territoryyou are on" Cheetahtail meowed.
"SO you are new"Cheetahtail mewed. "So how u get here?" He asked.

"How did I get here? i got here from moons of traveling. " She meowed, overcoming the state of shock she was in. "I came from a far distant land near the ocean. "

Ooc//Cheetahtail when some one says dont chat speak you dont ,talk properly or not at all .The rest off us role plat literatly and you role play like a darned noob .Please for gods sake dont chat speak if you have read the rules you would no !

OOC: I'm sorry guys, but this is going to turn into a flame war very soon. Gare heeldvig*, peoples! Cheetahtail's last post was absolutely fine, so just calm down.

*Think nothing of it

occ:// is somebody going to reply?

ooc: Mind if I join?

Dustcloud padded through the forest in his usual growly mood. A scent he recognized as Cheetahtail and another scent her couldn't tell hit his nose. He trotted towards the scents, but as he got closer he slowed down his pace to a walk. He stepped out of the undergrowth to stand beside Cheetahtail "Who do we have here?" he snarled. Cheetahtail's apparent kindness to this intruder ruffled his fur.