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 Shattered Moon, My Story!!
HOTROBIN
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 11:20 AM


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Oh man! A cliffy! I LOVE this! Now that chant.....

Trena masi hasi ha. Trena masi hasi ha. Trena masi hasi ha. Fire Flame!

That is the best i can do. Actually It is one of my own chants i use when meditating.
White Birds
Posted: Mar 22 2006, 02:07 AM


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Sorry for the wait! I haven't got much time to work on it now. Sorry for the shortness of this chapter, I promise I'll make my next one longer! Heres chapter 8.

Chapter 8: Plans

Nina slowly opened her eyes, to see a masked face smiling down on her. "Hi Robin," she said quietly. "Is she...awake?" akded Starfire from behind Robin. "Yeah, I'm awake," Nina said weakly. She slowly sat up.

"Who was that guy?" asked Beastboy. "I don't know, I've never seen him before," Nina replied. "Let's get you back to the tower, before that guy comes back," said Raven.

Nina carefully started to stand up, but started to wobble. Before she fell down though, a hand caught her, and helped her to an upright postition. Robin smiled warmly at her, and she returned the smile. Then they began to walk back to the tower.

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"My lord, I have returned to recieve further orders," said Draik to a dark figure. "Good, now we have to figure out how to get rid of her little friends," the figure replied.

"Master, that shall be no problem," Draik said smiling evily. "Rember, you musten't kill the girl, or the prophecy will not be complete,"

"I already have a plan to lure the girl to you," Draik replied, holding a small bottle. "Good."

HOTROBIN
Posted: Mar 22 2006, 07:55 PM


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Love it!
White Birds
Posted: Mar 28 2006, 02:12 AM


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Okay, here's chapter 9. It took my a little bit to write, and the ending isn't great, cause I couldn't think of a good way to end it. So here you go! biggrin.gif

Chapter 9: Nightmare

Meanwhile, Nina was in her room. Robin had told her she needed to rest, and he'd make sure no one would disturb her. She felt embarssed. 'They must think I'm weak,' she thought. "Maybe I really am," she said, this time outloud.

She rolled over on her side, and fingered one of her golden-blue strands of hair. Nina missed her family. She missed her mother's beautiful chocolate brown hair, and her father's deep blue eyes. .

She closed her eyes, but she didn't know why. She wasn't even tierd. And before she knew it, she was fast asleep.

~Dream Sequence~
Nina was sitting in a small house, in what looked like a kitchen. "Nina did you do your chores?" asked a gruff voice from behind her. "Oh sorry I forgot, can I do them later?" Nina asked looking up into her father's eyes.

"So you wan to wait to eat?" Her father asked. "Well, no," Nina replied quietly. "Well then, neither do the horses," he said. "Okay," Nina said sitting up and rolling her eyes.

She walked outside, to see her three year old brother, Lucas, playing with one of the kittens. "Hi sissy," Lucas said getting up, and walking over to Nina. "Hello Lucas, are you being a good boy?" she asked her little brother. A smile grew on Lucas's face as he replied, "me and Ticey are playing."

Nina smiled, she loved how her brother called the kitten Ticey, who's real name was Icey. "Can me and Ticey, come with you to feed the horseys?" Lucas asked. "No, but when I get back, I'll read you one of your favorite stories,"Nina replied to the child's question.

Suddenly, her world went dark, and it comes back into view, the sight is horrible. Her house is in ruins, and slowly burning. Dead animals, ash, and smoke, are all visible.

Then Nina could hear a voice from behind her house. She slowly walked to the back of her house, afraid of what she might see. But before she can see what's happening, a voice sounds from behind her.

"Amazing how one little flame can be so destructive." Nina turned quickly to see the man who had attacked her from earlier. "You, your the one who did this," Nina hissed from clenched teeth.

"Yes, I was the one," he answered smiling. "Who are you?" she asked. She wanted to rush forward, and attack him, but she felt something pulling her back. "My name is Draik, and I work for a man, well if you could consider him a man, by the name of DeMont," Draik answered.

Tears of anger and frustation filled her eyes. "All your friends are going to die like this," Draik continued, smiling wickedly, "and it's all your fault." Suddenly, Nina rushed forward, but before she could attack, Draik dissappered.

~End Dream Sequence~

Nina shot up in bed. She had to fidn Draik, before he killed everyone, but she couldn't let anyone one else get involved. She knew what she had to do.
White Birds
Posted: Apr 2 2006, 09:00 PM


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sorry for double posting, but why hasn't anyone replied? Your making me sad. Does no one like my story, or what?!?
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Posted: Apr 3 2006, 06:12 PM


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I like it! Looking forward to future chapters. laugh.gif
White Birds
Posted: May 7 2006, 05:29 PM


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I'm sorry for the LONG delay, but I have been gone on and off this year, so I should have the next chapter up soon, hopefully. biggrin.gif


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