The Darkness Within, Rp in the modern world
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*OK people, I haven't got a clear beginning so I'm just virtually thinking out loud. it doesn't have to be in the same place with everyone together - it can be in different places, but they definitely meet later on. So just get your charries to explain to us why they're there and what they're doing*
The first thing Aiden noticed wrong about the hospital waiting room wasn't the number of patients there, or the thick smell of smoke, which was probably from people earlier on smoking in the room. It was the faint high pitch noise coming from a closed staff room door, and it concerned her that it might be from something dangerous. Just then, a nurse came trotting over to her from the opposite direction. As Aiden stood up she said, "You must be - gosh am I saying this right? Aiden?" Aiden didn't really mind it when people did this. it happened often enough to get used to, so she just said "Yes" simply. "Your brother's fine, he'll be back in a minute. And apparently next week you won't have to come because the doctor's away" One of the many things Aiden didn't like about hospitals was the smell of perfume most of the nurses were wearing. It made her feel sick. "Thanks. I'll just wait over there then" just as the nurse turned round, Aiden added "Oh, and I think someone's left the fire on in there," With that, she walked out of the waiting room to hear a yell and a short scream from the nurses after a minute. Aiden was so desperately trying to hold the laughter back that she hadn't noticed Tyro right next to her. "What are you laughing at?" Aiden wanted to tell him, but she'll have to wait till she gets back and use the translator to tell him, because Tyro couldn't hear properly. They started home, Tyro wondering why all the nurses were running about outside the waiting room
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*sorry I'm here! Aiden's in Britain, Edinburgh*
The first thing Aiden did once she got home was switch the TV on, but soon regretted it as she watched the scenes with grimace. All the high-tech was stabbing their own backs, she thought as she turned around, hearing the innocent beep as she turned it off. Her Grandfather's house wasn't a huge one like the ones the Americans have, but a comfortable small house with two floors, her room on the first floor next to her brother's. She took her cup of tea upstairs, thinking about the attack on the plane all along. People who did the sort of thing just made Aiden feel that she no longer wanted to be a human, like them. "But I'm not," Aiden muttered out loud, slamming the door behind her at the same moment. "I'm not…" leaning her back on the door, she slowly dropped down on to the floor with angst in her chest, and an empty mug in one hand.
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"You lost him?!" he heard himself shout down the phone. Now wasn't the time to lose his temper, he needed to be professional. "Right, we're approaching the city now, the bus you identified is about 6 cars down in the queue," he switched the walkie talkie onto full blast to all groups. "all groups to you copy? WE're going for plan B. Team A will stay in the van, we'll pursue him. Team B continue on foot, but be careful, remain 3rd party aware at all times and make sure he doen't suspect anything. Team C, can you find anything about the identity of the person/s who are carrying the files. Did anyone manage to get any DNA on the boy?" It took a few seconds for a reply to come crackling through. "Yeah boss, he's William (? dont know surname) 16, son of target suspected of carrying the documents. We're trying to get a track on his mobile to pinpoint his location accurately." He smiled as he replied. "Keep me informed if any more information comes up." "Will do boss."
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Aiden yawned. It was late afternoon, and the sunset crept out of the clouds as she decided to take a walk on the street as she had nothing much else to do. She thought she heard the deadened echo from the train station, stating that a train had arrived. But Aiden, being her lazy self right now, just went ahead to the nearest shopping street to see if there was anything exciting. She did this quite often, and once in a while a little watch or an antique would pop in to one of the shops. Today, there were enough people for the shop owners to earn a good deal, Aiden one of the customers, but she also worked here before. She still keeps in touch witht the owner, who was a very friendy guy. Another yawn crept up, making her look like a teenager than usual. She had reached the end of the street, and saw the road, but Aiden snapped awake at once when she recognized something in the air. A signal usually coming from a Walkie Talkie, but this one was a pretty old machine… coming from the road, one of those cars. But it was against traffic rules to be either on the phone, or walkie talkies. Besides, who uses it on a car? she tried to make out the talk, but her concetration failed once she realized that she was into private matters.
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