Description: Yurima's background
Yurima - November 28, 2007 08:44 PM (GMT)
ooc: just something quick, so it's going to be a bit patchy. Comments welcome.
Yurima was born into the Ripped Maw kindred, the only child of the kindred's leader, Shaper Turka. The first winter the newborn went through on the world of Pech was one of the hardest in the memory of the kroot, the chill winds and icy terrain causing many of the kindred to die. When the camp was attacked by a group of beasts from the deep forests, the kindred suffered so many casualties that it was unable to assemble a force for the next year's campaigns and without the new genetic material, the Ripped Maw would stagnate. Yurima was the only child to survive this string of disaters, coming through with only a scar down one side where a beast clawed at the infant.
The next ten years passed without major incident for both the child and the kindred. Yurima displayed impressive skill when out on hunts, often leading expeditions into the deeper parts of the forest to track down the larger predators of Pech. On one such expedition, Yurima became seperated from the rest of the expedition after one of the nastier beasts attacked them. Chased by the creature for several days, it finally cornered the young kroot. Bringing her weapon to bear, Yurima killed the charging beast after a breif but vicious fight that left her with another scar down the opposite flank. Carrying the corpse back to her home, Yurima soon rose quikcly in the kindred, commanding her own warshere in a few years as well as earning her own kindred. The Silver Wings now travel the galaxy, selling their skills to whoever wants them in return for various payments. In each engagement, Yurima leads her warriors from the front, slaying all that get in her way.
Mont'ka - November 28, 2007 09:16 PM (GMT)
Well, a shaper who leads a group of kindreds is called a Master Shaper, but other than that, good.
Der Mond - November 28, 2007 10:00 PM (GMT)
Very nice, youre right though, it is patchy at times. Revise the writing a little bit and it could be A+ material.
Yurima - November 29, 2007 12:38 AM (GMT)
Yeah I need to go over my kroot background etc again as it's been a while since I used them anywhere. Too much time using an Imperial force that I came up with in ten seconds for Medusa V (true story)
Mont'ka - November 29, 2007 09:10 PM (GMT)
:lol: Little did you know...
Yarp, development of story would be nice. Maybe you could set up a roleplay for people to join, and do it that way?
Yurima - November 29, 2007 09:41 PM (GMT)
Errrrrr ideas for the set up of such?
I'll devolped the character n various ways, such as storys and such. The roleplay does sound like an idea.
Der Mond - November 29, 2007 09:49 PM (GMT)
I'd join an RPG, they are so much fun.
Especially if you have technicolor ninjas. :ph43r:
Mont'ka - November 29, 2007 11:30 PM (GMT)
Well, why not pick up where you've left off...She's just got her first warsphere, so she'll launch an expedition soon-ish. Pick a world, any world, and we'll develop some interesting narrative as we go...Anything you don't like, you can tell people to stop.
Yurima - November 30, 2007 12:33 AM (GMT)
Righto. I'll set it up soon.
Der Mond - November 30, 2007 01:37 AM (GMT)
|Anything you don't like, you can tell people to stop. |
Or I can just delete it for you. I cant wait to join the RPG!
Yeah, in an RPG I was in once had technicolor ninjas because it was supposed to be a spoof RPG. It was hilarious. One of these days I will add a link to it (if I remember where it is).
Are any of you joining one of the Tio'ves?
Yurima - November 30, 2007 12:18 PM (GMT)
Which one is which?
RP will be up today.
Mont'ka - November 30, 2007 03:40 PM (GMT)
I believe I'm already in one...I don't think its up yet, its the non-combatants one, because I'm committed to the Tip. I'll do my best to provide auxilliary narrative support in a campaign when i can, though...
GdGd, can't wait!
Der Mond - November 30, 2007 10:30 PM (GMT)
Kav'isun is mine and the other one is Commander Coldwind's. Join mine, its cooler than Coldwind's.