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Title: ELIZIBETH DAVIS
Description: Hunter


EL DAVIS - March 18, 2012 02:00 AM (GMT)
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Elizibeth Soffiel Davis ,
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<td style="width:150px; font-family: verdana; font-style: italic; font-size: 10px; text-transform: lowercase; padding: 0px 8px; color: #b3afa8;"> full-time hunter</td>
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<div style="vertical-align: middle; font-family: verdana; background-color: #1f1f1f; color: #b3afa8; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; padding: 5px;">El was born in Detroit, Michigan and spent her early childhood there. As El got older she started traveling the country with her father, and continued traveling alone after his death.</div>
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<option selected>I LIKE</option>
<option>Fall</option>
<option>Cats</option>
<option>Maroon</option>
<option>Antiques</option>
<option>Old Cars</option>
<option>Dreaming</option>
<option>Rain and Snow</option>
<option>Inventing things</option>
<option>Soft Rock and Roll</option>
<option>Steak Medium rare</option>
<option>Mythology and History</option>
<option>Platform Shoes (nothing like being a few inches taller) </option>
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<option selected>I DISLIKE</option>
<option>News papers (use a lap top instead) </option>
<option>Self-righteous people</option>
<option>Possessed children</option>
<option>Broken finger nails</option>
<option>One night stands</option>
<option>Abandonment</option>
<option>Spicy food</option>
<option>Alcohol</option>
<option>Dogs</option>
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<option selected>MY STRENGTHS ARE</option>
<option>Kind</option>
<option>Smart</option>
<option>patient</option>
<option>Very loyal</option>
<option>Long Endurance</option>
<option>High pain tolerance</option>
<option>Good at making connections</option>
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<option selected>MY WEAKNESSES ARE</option>
<option>Get connected to things/people easily</option>
<option>Believes deep down everyone’s good</option>
<option>Doesn’t believe in phone calls</option>
<option>Doesn’t like to ask for help</option>
<option>No self preservation skills</option>
<option>Poor people skills</option>
<option>Out of touch</option>
<option>Stubborn</option>
<option>Clumsy</option>
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<option> Dogs</option>
<option> Angels</option>
<option> Mirrors</option>
<option> Flowers</option>
<option> Abandonment</option>
<option> Being buried alive</option>
<option> Losing her ring or car</option>
<option> Nothing coming after death</option>
<option> Old People (Blaming Disney for this one) </option>
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<option selected>I ASPIRE TO</option>
<option> Make things easier for other hunters</option>
<option> Help people protect themselves</option>
<option> Find someone who won’t leave</option>
<option> Create a hunter data base</option>
<option> Save the world</option>
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<option> Talks to herself</option>
<option> Sings in the shower</option>
<option> Sits with one leg up</option>
<option> Recites number patterns when panicking</option>
<option> Rolling eyes to far back when rolling eyes</option>
<option> Bites her bottom lip when slightly nervous</option>
<option> Places her tongue on her teeth when thinking</option>
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<option>not really</option>

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El has calm mood personality. She’d prefer to be alone, then again that may be because no one can leave you if you’re alone. Usually El is pretty mellow with things, and at this point she’s just going with the flow. But El can be very passionate when upset and has the tendency to say things she doesn’t mean… or rather things she means but shouldn’t have said.
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While El may seem like your typical hunter she doesn’t share their stereotype of fun. She’d prefer to sit in her hotel room doing something productive (like working on a hunt or making something), than hooking up at a bar in the middle of nowhere. She has a low self-esteem, but she’d rather blow up at someone than let them see that.
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Don’t me wrong, El can be fun. She admires a good prank or slam, as long as their well thought out with some complexity to them. Once she set her whole hotel room up with domino’s… not exactly the cool kid on the block. And although she’s not overly dramatic in her own life; she likes spur of the moment pretend things, such as pretending to be a ninja on her day off (like LARPing by yourself). She’s not too clingy… just a little over protective of those she’s close too.


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in process of remaking

(Thank you for reading my character. I've decide to remake her. I can see where you had problems with her. I think it's mostly because I was trying to take a character from a Supernatural dream I had and write her, which just came across as confusing. I don't know if I'll have her done tonight but if not I'll sleep on it and reply to your post when I've finished. Thanks again.)

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Arius - March 18, 2012 02:35 AM (GMT)
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This app has been denied for several reasons, but these are the biggest:

You have El listed as "Unique" but you never explain what she is, or how she got to be that way. You have a handful of powers but never explain how she got them or how they work. The history for the character was all over the place, making mentions to characters, organizations, etc. that we have no idea what they are since you never really say.

Over all, it would take more effort to correct this application than it would to simply start over with a whole new idea. So, while we are denying this character, we welcome you to try again with a different character more in tune with the SPN 'verse.




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