Query An Agent With Haiku, win query letter critique
JeanLauzier
Posted: Feb 18 2009, 10:33 AM


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Haiku Query


Thought this might be fun. Deadline Friday night.


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JeanLauzier
Posted: Feb 18 2009, 01:32 PM


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I've decided it's as much work as it is fun but I think I have a possible entry. Thankfully I have time to polish and play with it.


The agent called it an exercise in thinking concisely and it sure it:-)

Even if you don't plan to enter...why not give it a try anyway. Do it for a short story if you don't have a novel:-)

Here's my first shot at it...

Bodies, missing girls
Dark descent, search seems hopeless
Empowering end.

And it only took about 2 hours:-)


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