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MasterOfCards
Posted: Mar 13 2007, 07:41 PM
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This is the third installment in my series of Fan-fics, that correspond with my Comics, too.
TRAVEL TO THE HUMAN WORLD!

Here is the guide to know what people are saying:


~ Means what the character is thinking what is said in his or her mind.
EXAMPLE:
Mario: ~I love pizza... hmm... pizza...~

* Describes what the location is or what the character is currently doing.
EXAMPLE:
*At The Teams' House.* Or:
Mario: *Picks up a rock.* It's in the shape of a snail!

" Means what is happening in the background.
EXAMPLE:
"Crickets chirp."
Mario: Hey! I hear crickets!


Quick Summary:
The Team is a team that fights evil. This Fan-fic, however, does not revolve around The Team. It revolves around Pinky The Hedgehog. A hedgehog who made a promise to Metalwario, a member of The Team.


Terms:
If this is your first time reading a Fan-fic of mine, you'll need to know these terms.

Shroomous- A disease caused by going into another "world". A person might not always get the disease, but if someone does, it can be deadly.

"The Pipe"- A pipe hidden somewhere in the Mushroom Kingdom. According to Metalwario, it leads straight to The Human World.

"Traveling through worlds technique"- Hence its name, a user must run at lightning fast speeds, where you're creating a gust of wind behind you AND in front of you, towards an area with a contaminated air current. The user must then jump in the air in the middle of the area, turn into his or her super form using the Chaos Emeralds, and go through the opened dimension hole. Like going through "The Pipe", this can also cause Shroomous. The only one known to do this is Pinky the Hedgehog.

Human World- The world where humans live.

Shadow World- The world where the evil side of all spirits live in.



Chapter 0: Prologue.


It was a quiet morning in the Mushroom Kingdom. Everything just seemed peaceful. The Team had just recently got back from their journey trying to retrieve the Ultimate Star from an evil scientist, named Dr.Omesh.
I didn't like Dr.Omesh. He made one of my best friends into a metalish figure, luckily he could still walk and talk. But every day he would become a little more stiff, and metal. Any day now he could've turned into a metal statue. A doctor has given him the cure to this, "illness." So now he might stay metal, but he won't turn into a statue one day.
My name is Pinky, Pinky the Hedgehog. And I made a promise to that friend. I promised I would get revenge on Dr.Omesh for turning him metal. I don't care if it's halfway cured, this madman WILL be stopped!
But, unfortunately, the person who made him metal in the first place... is in another world.


*In a Meadow.*


Pinky: *Gets up.* I don't care if he's in the Human World, and I don't care if I have a high risk of getting this, "Shroomous" disease if I follow him... I NEVER break promises. And this promise is no different! *Runs off.*


*At The Teams' House.*

Mario: *Stretches.* Is it true, that MasterOfCards returns from the CardMasters Convention today?

Metalwario: Yeah. I bet MasterOfYoshis is worried sick about him... it's been a while.

Rollar: *Walks down stairs.* Metalwario, I've completed creating the two Shroomous antidotes!

Metalwario: Alright!! *Grabs them.* Now when Pinky uses his travel through worlds technique, he'll be prepared!

Rollar: I personally can't believe Pinky is going to do this... Traveling through worlds, or going through The Pipe can both give you Shroomous. Pipe traveling would give it to you almost instantly, with the sudden change of atmosphere going through your lungs. And traveling through worlds is a more dangerous way of doing it, because you're basically floating in a void of nothingess, then-

Metalwario: Yes, yes, I know... but with these antidotes, Pinky won't have to worry about it. I don't think Pinky's body would be able to handle Shroomous more than ten minutes, though... *Puts head down.*

Mario: Well, are you going to give them to him, or not?

Metalwario: *Picks head up.* Right! *Runs off.*


*At the Below Grounds of the Glitz Pitz.*


Pinky: Metalwario was right... the air current IS different... no wonder my technique works perfectly when I use it here!

Metalwario: Heh, I knew I would find you here...

Pinky: *Turns around.* Oh, hi Metalwario. What are those things in your hands?

Metalwario: *Grins.* They're the antidotes to Shroomous!

Pinky: *Steps back.* Then that means... I CAN GO TODAY!!

Metalwario: YEAH!

Pinky: *Grabs the antidotes.* Tell Rollar I said thanks. I gotta find a good place to run from... *Runs off.*

Metalwario: *Sits down.* Today's the day...


*At the Borderline Between Hyrule and the Mushroom Kingdom.*


Pinky: *Stretches legs.* Alright. This looks like a good spot. *Runs as fast as he can to where Metalwario is.*


*At the Below Grounds of the Glitz Pitz.*


Pinky: *Is still running.* ~Now!~ *Jumps and takes out all seven Chaos Emeralds.*

Metalwario: *Backs away.* ~He's doing it!~

Pinky: *Turns into Super Pinky.* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

"Dimension hole opens."

Super Pinky: I'LL SEE YOU LATER, METALWARIO!! *Flies up into dimension hole.*

Metalwario: GOOD LUCK!!


I don't remember what happened after that. But I had a rude awakening...


?: LOOK AT THE SHINY THING.

Super Pinky: *Opens eyes.* Huh? ... *Gets up.*

?: IT'S ALIVE!!

?: GET BACK, EVERYONE!!

Super Pinky: Wait, what?! *Flies up.*

?: IT CAN FLY?!

Super Pinky: Gah... I need to get outta here... *Flies off.*


Next thing I saw, was a bunch of blushing faces.


?: GET OUT OF HERE!! THIS IS THE GIRLS DRESSING ROOM!

Super Pinky: Girls dressing room... then that means...

?: *Slaps Super Pinky.* GET OUT!!

Super Pinky: Uh... Sorry... *Flies out.*


*In the hallway.*


Super Pinky: *Falls down.* Ahh... darn it... I... *Coughs uncontrollably.* Why is it happening so quickly?! *Turns back into Pinky.*


I felt weak... Now I knew Shroomous was a serious thing.


Pinky: I need the medicine... *Checks self.* Where are they?!

John Anderson: *Walks up.* Oh, you mean these things? *Holds out antidotes.*

Pinky: Where did you come from... and yes... those are mine... *Takes a pill.*

John Anderson: You're the thing that just suddenly appeared in my homeroom class, aren't you?

Pinky: *Gets up.* I don't know what you're talking about.

John Anderson: Well, anyway, one of my friends took those pills from you. He was going to sell them off the Internet. Until I took them from him, of course.

Pinky: You took back what was mine, and you knew whatever I was, it's still wrong to steal... You're a good kid.

John Anderson: Thanks. But, I better get you out of here before the other kids come out into the halls and see you... *Tries to pick up Pinky.*

Pinky: Uh... I have legs, Y'know.

John Anderson: *Flinches.* Fine. Suit yourself... *Runs down hallway.*

Pinky: *Follows.*


*Outside the School.*


John Anderson: We better hurry before someone catches me skipping school.

Pinky: No problem! Whatever "skipping school" means... *Picks up John and runs.*

John Anderson: WHOA!!


I don't understand why this kid helped me. He didn't know what I was, where I came from... yet, to me, he seemed familiar... Like I've heard about him somewhere before...


To be Continued...




Chapter 1: Exposed.


John Anderson: Take a left, and it's the house with the red roof.

Pinky: *Screeches to a stop.* This is your house?

John Anderson: Yeah... *Looks around.* Now where I am going to put you...

Pinky: I'm not a pet. I can live in a house just like anyone else!

John Anderson: That's not the problem! I might not have freaked out when I saw you, but that doesn't mean my mom won't!

Pinky: *Scratches head.* Oh yeah...

John Anderson: *Opens garage.* Hide in here for now.

Pinky: OK... *Walks in garage.*

John Anderson: *Closes garage door.*

Pinky: HEY! IT'S DARK IN HERE!!


*Inside the House.*

John Anderson: Mom gets home in two hours... How am I gonna explain this?!

"Phone rings."

John Anderson: Hello?

Telemarketer: Hello! Is your mom home?

John Anderson: I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS! *Hangs up.*


*In the Garage.*

Pinky: He didn't have to put me in the "garage"... *Trips over something.* OW! What the heck was that?!

"A big crash."

Pinky: *Sigh.* I guess it was on the bottom of a big pile of stuff... Eh? *Feels the object.* It's in the shape of an... ARM?! But it feels like metal...


*Inside the House.*

John Anderson: OK, I can tell her I felt sick and I wanted to come home... So I walked 6 miles from the school to my house. DARN IT! I can't think of anything good. I can say I bought the pink thing at the school and I took it home... There IS an animal drive going on at my school.

"Doorbell."

John Anderson: ~Who could that be? ...~ *Walks up to the door and looks through peep hole.* Miss Nosey?

Mrs.Nose: HELLO? Is anybody there? I was looking at your house through my telescope, and I thought I saw Johnny and a pink doggie come by!

John Anderson: ~People don't call her Miss Nosey for nothing...~ *Walks away.*


*Outside the House.*

Mrs.Nose: That's odd. I thought for sure Johnny was here...

"Pounding noises."

Mrs.Nose: Oh! That's right... Johnny had put something in the garage before he went inside!

Pinky: LET ME OUTTA HERE!

Mrs.Nose: I hope my back can take it. *Lifts up garage door a little bit.*

Pinky: AIR! *Sticks face through the little opening.*

Mrs.Nose: OH MY GOODNESS! *Runs off.*

Pinky: ... Oops... *Crawls out.*


*Inside the House.*

"Doorbell."

John Anderson: Persistent old hag... *Looks through peep hole.*

Pinky: Hey! Let me in!

John Anderson: ... !! *Opens door quickly and shoves Pinky in.*

Pinky: How's it goin'?

John Anderson: STUPID! You were supposed to stay in the garage! Somebody could've seen you!

Pinky: Somebody did. *Lays down on couch.* An old lady. She helped me out of the "garage".

John Anderson: ... No... *Runs out of the house.*


*In the Streets.*

Mrs.Nose: MONSTER!! I SAW IT! A PINK MONSTER! IT WALKS ON TWO LEGS! IT'S PINK! IT CAN TALK! IT'S PINK! IT WEARS SNEAKERS! IT'S PINK!!

John Anderson: *Frozen.* This... can't be happening... *Runs back in the house.*


I don't know why this guy is freaking out so much. I mean, why would people be afraid of a pink hedgehog? ...


To be Continued...
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Posted: Mar 15 2007, 04:45 PM
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Bravo! It's great.
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Posted: Mar 15 2007, 07:30 PM
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This is awesome! :D But doesn't Pinky act a little too much like Sonic?
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