I tried to post on your site and got an error page. And now I forgot what I wrote. Mostly that I'm enjoying the story so far, and laughed at the "oh, she is so dead" and, "well, it's either you or Goopy." Both very funny.
It will be interesting to see what Trey does next . . .
I love how you incorporate the thought bubble pictures into the conversation. Very clever. And the baby is really cute. I will be interested to see how Trey gets out of this situation.
Thank you both for the feedback!
SBW, I'm sorry your comment got lost, I checked the error logs and I can't figure out what happened there.
I am glad you are both enjoying the story. I have been struggling all day with an awkward transition and just stopped by to read some new stories here and get back 'into the flow'. The comments were a nice surprise :D
Oh, I love Abducted! You've heard mots of my comments by now, on the blog and on boolprop, but I wanted to say it again, great story! I love it :)