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Aion
Posted: Jan 16 2008, 07:02 AM


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Ive been dreaming. The same one, all the time. I see this girl
only, she doesnt see me. I want to shout, to say someything,
I cant. I want to move, but, I am frozen. SHe is crying, tears
accompanied with cries for help. I cannot help her. I can only watch as this, monster can barely describe its appearance. This hideous creature
descends and shatters the earth. The girls falls, her tear streaked face now silent
into a chasm. The monster turns and faces me, almost as if it knows I am watching.
It slashes the ground, and fissures appear snaking twoard me.
They meet right under me. I cant run, cant get out of the way.
I fall, into the bottomless chasm. No light no sound, no nothing. I awaken. I am on my floor again.
I live pretty much alone. Its just me and Koro. Koro, she is kind of my sister.
She was lost and scared when I found her. I cant forget what happened.
SHe was under the bridge, and it was raining. I was running past, and she cringed. It was then that I noticed someone was under here. I stopped right in front of her, and she backed away, frightened. I stepped back to shoi her I was friendly. She noticed. I gave her my hand, and she took it. I pulled her to her feet. It was all too easy. Seems like she hadnt had a decent meal in a long time. I told her to follow me and she did.
I brought her back to my house. I have her some good clothes.
Much more decent than that rag she was wearing. The clothes, they were my mothers. who died, not that long ago. I made her a meal. She was way too thin, as she probably hadnt had a good meal in a long time. She came out of my mothers room. I was surprised that the clothes fit.

Ook here half of it ill post the rest later the story kind of goes downhill in my opinion. Tell me what you think after I post the rest
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Everett Minanasha
Posted: Jan 16 2008, 05:45 PM


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I'd like to comment now.
It's fairly good... did you get the Idea from Chobits?


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Aion
Posted: Jan 16 2008, 06:23 PM


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It is based on Phantasy Star

the one is Sega Smash Pack
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Everett Minanasha
Posted: Jan 17 2008, 05:45 PM


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It's a manga. but you shouldn't read it.


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Aion
Posted: Jan 19 2008, 09:35 AM


The Skitsophrantic Angel


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Nevermind
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Everett Minanasha
Posted: Jan 19 2008, 12:26 PM


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QUOTE (Aion @ Jan 16 2008, 07:23 PM)
It is based on Phantasy Star

the one is Sega Smash Pack

you edited your post! ohmy.gif


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Aion
Posted: Jan 20 2008, 09:08 AM


The Skitsophrantic Angel


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You actually think its good?


Meh......... I always think my stories are terrible
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Everett Minanasha
Posted: Jul 18 2008, 12:22 PM


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It's not bad!


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