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 It All happened so fast, A non-rhyming poem
TryinMyHardest65145
Posted: Jan 6 2008, 05:36 PM


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It all happened so fast...how did I get like this? I'm looking down, what's this I see? There's blood all over the floor, I'm wondering whose it is, I look a little closer, I'm lying on the floor, It's my blood that I see, How did I end up like this? Was it something I said or something I did? I want this just to all end. The pain is too intense, everything is quiet now, I see chaos all around, people running in a panic. A women is coming toward me... Mom is that you? No one hears me...Don't leave me, I need you, please don't go!, I cry, but again no one hears me. The doctors have me on a stretcher now "She's not going to make it" I hear one man say. It can't be me he's speaking of, I have so many things left undone, Daddy needs to know I love him. I have to see Johnny one last time. "She has a matter of minutes now, I'm sorry miss." I hear another man say. Everything is fading now... "MoM!" I choke, A lady runs over to me...her image is faint...I can't see...It's all black now. This can't be! I've had it, it's over.




Yea this just popped in my head one day plz don't think I'm psycho or something
~*Amber*~
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Gannonbarf
Posted: Jan 8 2008, 05:30 PM


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no one will think ur psycho.... if they do then they'll think im insanely psycho lol andnot rhyming poems are call free-verse poems
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TryinMyHardest65145
Posted: Jan 29 2008, 10:15 PM


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The reason I said for no one to think I was psycho was because People have said some thing about my poem b4 but only a couple people lol

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