Perfect Grave, Anyone can add to it...

[EvIlMcShOrTy]

Charpter One. A girl and her friends that were her body grauds were out hunting. They were what you call vampires. Don't believe what you hear about them, there is only one way to kill a vampire, and that's to cut their brain and hearts way to connect. She had black hair with blood-red high-lights in it. Her eyes they were black instead of white and the color ring of the eye was blood-red also. She was about five foot five. She wore a level twenty-seven shrit that hung Tripp pants (you get these at hot topic) from a black studded belt. Mcfluffy hasd icey blue hair. His eyes were icey blue also. He was in a black t*shrit that had a saying that read: Gone to my happy place be back... Never. His tripps were hung from a green studded belt. He was about five foot even. "Helena!?!" cried Mcfluffy. Helena looked at him. "Who are we hunting?" He asked. Chapter two. She gave the directions. As they walked down his sheet she heard a sound; a branch break. She turnned her head. She saw the male slayer, Andy. "Guys!!' She said. They got away from the slayer. As Helena knocked on the door,that this human was suppose to be. The door opened slowly and Helena saw a black wiccian cat. "Blessed be." She said. The cat meowed as the screen door opened. "About time..." a voice beamed. Chapter three. She turnned to see a guy about five foot eight. He had darkish brown hair. His eyes were brownish green. he wore all black. "You must be Cory..." Helena said. As he nodded he added,"I'm ready..." She bit him and took a little bit of his blood. As soon as she stopped, she bit her wrist and had him drink her blood. Chapter four. They walked into the vampire's coven. "Thy shall oday thy master.." a girl that had long black hair down to her sholders, said.

[Yado]

It is an interesting topic but is hard to follow. We also have a wonderful thing now adays known as PARAGRAPHS. Use them, they help. And that seemed the length of one chapter instead of four.
But i will read if you post again

[McFluffy]

^what he said.. paragraphs, 1 chapter, not 4 (i'd hardly call that four ) post more, keeping that in mind.