{OOC: Nah, s'good =) Different rats of course see the world in different ways, and your post well reflected Ace's hostile thoughts, though in general it'd probably be a pretty tough place. I saw a full rat nest once. I shall... Never forget it; the bit about the mother not going after her drowning child was no fiction.
Nice use of the Rat Language, also ^^ }}
IC:
Mally's mismatched eyes were focused entirely on her work. Her tiny pink paws moved swiftly, touching springs and feeling the tension on certain wires; a prod here, a nibble there... Delicacy was everything. One wrong move could kill her. No, wait, make that
would kill her. She was inside the trap; the wolf's mouth; the lion's den; and her every move had to be calculated, controlled, precise. This was a basic human rat-trap - a 1990 Snapper V. 2 by the looks of it, though the label was too faded to read. She had disabled a thousand like it. It was easy. Easy. But then why did she always get such a thrill when she pressed and prodded? One wrong move would kill her. It would crunch down on her back, and the spiked metal teeth, rusted with age but still strong, would dig straight through her - a quick estimation in the she-rat's head figured that they would come out the other side. And then she would be gone. Whether it was instant death or a slow bleeding, infected-ness she was unsure; though the teeth were rusted, and the spring didn't have much force behind it any more the trap was still strong, and she knew about the 1990 Snapper V. 2s. They were powerful.
And she was only a Black Rat. A Kee-kee. Mally knew that she should be grateful that she should be born in this 'New Age', when both Black Rats and females were allowed places in life, and she was not one to be bitter, but still some things burned. Her eyes, also, should have granted her an instant-kill pass by her mother. One a pale, swirly pink-brown, the other black as her sleek fur, she could barely see. That was why she was such a good Squad Two; though her vision was bad, this only enhanced her powers of smell, hearing and the ability to feel. She could smell the amount of rust on a trap ten brown-rat-lengths away; she could hear the vibrations the spring made before it slammed shut; she could feel the pressure on a trap-wire, and knew where to push. Ahh, the Squad Twos! Her own creation! The current leader, Grak, nor his long-standing mate Nikki had neither been too bright, and she had managed to slip in her ideas to them; young rats were starting to get principles nowadays, and with careful planning and being sure to use the right length of words* Mally had had the Squad Two band set up. It provided a beacon of hope for rats, young and old. All that it required was a dab of intelligence and a knowledge of when to keep your mouth shut, and they could escape the life of persecution and starvation they may have otherwise been subjected to - because they were useful.
Traps. Dog attacks. Barricades. Human diversion. Now that the Mischief was growing, they had needed to settle down fully; this duty had fallen to Grak, and he had done so successfully - except that with permanent settlement came permanent dangers. As a Squad Two, you had no need to fight, or fear other rats, or scavenge in the gutter. You could be out and about in daylight, and as long as you had a dab-paw at disabling traps you could make a good living out of it, but that did not mean that you were in no danger. Because really, it was just like the real world.
One mistake and you were cat-meat.
Or worse, rat-meat.
That was another thing Mally disliked about the whole rat-ness; eating other rats. It just seemed...
wrong. She had hardly raised these concerns with any, and in general it didn't come up much - cannibalism was quite the delicacy, and only the biggest, the baddest or the killer got to eat, and she was none of these. But still, she knew by instinct that few would agree with her - but at least she had managed to make one thing... Okay, two things... Maybe three things clear to the entire Mischief(quite an achievement, getting through to all of them):
1. If you don't know what it died of, don't eat it;
2. Don't insult the meat if you want to eat;
3. And most importantly of all,
don't eat the green wobbly bit!She was in the light now - well, almost. It was hard to get and dangerous, and she was hardly the most adept at predator-dodging, but at least she had managed to get out without one of the brainless Squad Ones standing over her. There was only one Black Rat in the Squad Ones, and even he was only half-caste, and none in the
Dominas, and then again he was only a single one in the hundred Squad Ones there were.
Kee-kee. She never got called anything else by them. She hated to distinguish between the two sub-species of rat - they were all rats, after all, she had often reasoned - but still there was always a definite 'us' and 'them' in the air, everywhere one went.
And then a shout came up from the gaps in the grille twenty tail-lengths behind her that could be heard from even where Mally lay pressing and nudging, outside in the warm, fresh air, near the sunlight.
With bad sight came good hearing.
But she wished she hadn't heard.
"Where is Grak . . . I am leader . . . Graaa-aaaak . . . You useless
Kee-kee!"
It was Ace.
Mally felt her pounding heart sink, but she refused to allow herself to settle on it until she had pushed the final place to de-activate the trap - a few moments later, with a deafening squealing creak, it swung away from her and fell apart. Then she focused on the matters of the Mischief, and what she had just heard.
Ace was now she-leader.
Ace hated Black Rats.
Ace was now she-leader.
That meant Nikki was dead.
Ace was now she-leader.
Ace was smarter than Nikki had been.
Ace was now she-leader.
Ace hated Black Rats.
Ace was now she-leader.
Ace was smarter than Nikki had been.
And crueller, too.
Ace was now she-leader.
What would happen to Mally's beloved Squad Twos?
*Too long and he got upset that he couldn't understand you, too short and he might guess what you were actually planning.