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CAT
Posted: Jun 26 2011, 04:20 PM


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Scurrying (Run! Run!) through the tunnels, the darkness consuming the last fragments of hope, he could see the opening ahead. The others had grown silent, their footfalls no longer echoing through the obsidian stone, their hearts no longer giving the drum beat to their march. (Iím alone). Looking back, the fact that they were gone sank in. (But wait. Thereís still noise. Thereís still the spider). Facing the light, the warrior turned his back to it for the final time. He drew his sword. (I will see you soon, my friends).

He descended into the darkness, never to rise again.




The word count is exactly 100, and I struggled to make it that short :P I never realized how difficult these things could be. Any ideas for a title?


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Posted: Jun 26 2011, 04:26 PM


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Nice, Coty :D A whole story leaving so many questions tantilizingly unanswered and yet complete in and of itself! I had the awfullest thought - like, what if that was Jason?? lol
I know, isn't it difficult to keep it short?
As for a title . . . how about "The Lair" or "Fragment"? Just some abstract ideas :)


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Posted: Jun 28 2011, 05:52 PM


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Thanks :) I think I can safely say it isn't Jason, since he doesn't use a sword :P

Hmm, thanks for the suggestions. I might have an idea, now...


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