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Title: These Shattered Remains

.:Raven:. - August 8, 2008 01:42 AM (GMT)
You took my heart.
Like we promised you could.
I gave you my heart,
Like we promised I would.

You melted my heart,
Like a lover should.
You reshaped my heart
Like I knew you would.

Then you shattered my heart
Like they never could.
You shattered my heart
Like you said you never would.

So I take back my heart
Just like I should.

And I stab you with the shards:
The shards of my broken heart.

Ashley - August 8, 2008 01:46 AM (GMT)
I like it a lot. It's simple, but it gets the point across better than some long rambling poem would.<3

.:Raven:. - August 8, 2008 01:53 AM (GMT)
Aaw, thanks. I like getting the point across XD And short and simple poems have that angst-y feel to me, which I was going for.

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