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 CBUB or FPL ideas, this is criticism corner
Bassetman
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 02:20 AM


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QUOTE (Bloody_Freak @ Jan 11 2009, 02:11 AM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Jan 10 2009, 10:01 PM)
Stop making matches! The old matches aren't moving!

I noticed that too. Why is that?

The CBUB's dieing.

WOO!


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darkender
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 02:49 AM


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I told you guys I'm taking out CBUB! teu42.gif

You didn't believe me! teu42.gif

Soon it will fall! teu42.gif


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ND4
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 03:04 AM


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QUOTE (darkender @ Jan 11 2009, 02:49 AM)
I told you guys I'm taking out CBUB! teu42.gif

You didn't believe me! teu42.gif

Soon it will fall! teu42.gif

Aww man.I am already writing my newest match. sad.gif smile.gif
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treacherous
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 03:25 AM


Let Hammy have his Bison. I've got Zod.


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Move this conversation to the CBUB section in rants.


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QUOTE (SilverSurfer092 @ Apr 9 2009, 03:27 AM)
WTFYES  Treacherous is full of pwnage.
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Guardian of Nesh
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 03:46 AM


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QUOTE (darkender @ Jan 10 2009, 09:49 PM)
I told you guys I'm taking out CBUB! teu42.gif

You didn't believe me! teu42.gif

Soon it will fall! teu42.gif

Somehow I doubt it was you.


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'I'm going to die; if this wasteland doesn't kill me the Avatars will. I'm the last Technomancer; as I go so goes my culture.' The thought was serene, not fearful at all. If he was going to die, he'd die fighting; he'd make sure that the Technomancers were never forgotten. Morshan Sakru: The Last Technomancer would be a name all Avatar would shutter at the thought of for etenity. Morshan now knew what happened to a man who had nothing left to live for but vengence: he became a monster.
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ND4
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 04:43 AM


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Thank the gods !! I did it guys!!! I finally did it!!!I made my longest setup yet!!!
Plakton vs Danny Phatom on Cbub.

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darkender
Posted: Jan 11 2009, 05:50 AM


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QUOTE (Guardian of Nesh @ Jan 11 2009, 03:46 AM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Jan 10 2009, 09:49 PM)
I told you guys I'm taking out CBUB! teu42.gif

You didn't believe me! teu42.gif

Soon it will fall!  teu42.gif

Somehow I doubt it was you.

I dont give a crap what you doubt.


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treacherous
Posted: Jan 12 2009, 03:41 AM


Let Hammy have his Bison. I've got Zod.


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QUOTE (ND4 @ Jan 11 2009, 01:24 AM)
QUOTE (treacherous @ Jan 10 2009, 11:54 PM)
Wow.  That was really good.  Epicness.  It's so sad.  So much death.  Everybodys getting stabbed in the chest.  There are little spelling errors and this and that, but it doesn't distract from the story.  Very impressive Bloody.  Very impressive.  Who cares about the length really.  It's good.  Post it. 

It is sort of like a battle for the video game universe.  Mario's Kingdom is caput if Ganon can do all of that to the Zelda world.  I don't know who half these characters are, but you seem to really know them well.  I like it.  Continue it.  Post it.  Go Bloody.

Um Trech I have a another CBUB match that I want you to look at .

Noob and Smoke vs Sub Zero.


Sub Zero had been chased by Scorpion long enough. The Lin Kwei Grandmaster found Scorpion and challenged him to a final Mortal Kombat. Scorp started the match with a fireball which Sz ducked under.Sub Zero then froze Scorpion's feet .
Scorp noticed this and put his right hand around the hilt of his hell sword the Mugai Ruy and waited fro Sz. Sz then slid down to break Scorp's feet off.

Scorp then glared and Sz then thought he saw a little speck of remorse in the Specter's cold white eyes. But the Specter didn't care that he felt a little remorse.
"Get over here!" The specter yelled as his trademark spear punctured the armor and flesh of Sz.

Sz then tried freezing the spear and Scorpion .But the specter had seen Sz use this maneuver before so he brought his spear 1 second before Sz was gonna freeze it . The Grandmaster of the Lin Kwei then fell to his knees .Coughing blood into his mask and holding his spear wound.

Scorpion walked over the fallen grandmaster and spoke .
" Lin Kwei I am Scorpion and you killed me in cold blood.You also slaughtered my clan . But I shall get my revenge. Sz had enough .If he was gonna die he wouldn't die alone. With that Sz reached for his Kori blade .Scorpion saw this and picked up his blade .Swish!! "Aahhahhaha" Were the only sounds the now dieing Lin Kwei made after Scorpion had used his Mugai Ruy to slice his arm off.


Scorpion:'Goodbye Lin Kwei .For good!" Snap!! Went Sub Zero's neck as the specter snapped it in two. The body fell to the ground with a thud.
Scorpion:"Hmm. No it cant be .He is not the one. Noooo!! " The Specter yelled having killed the wrong person. Meanwhile in the Netherealm the recently decreased Sub Zero had came to. Sz then got to his feet but was too busy on focusing on where he was to notice a dark figure sneak up behind him.


Bammm! The dark figure had just given one swift blow to the back of Sz's neck .
Which rendered the now decreased former Lin Kwei grandmaster uncounsious.
Two hours later ....
Sz had awoke to being hovered over a pit of spikes. "What is the meaning of this!?" The dark figure which knocked Sz uncounsious then walked up from the shadows. Sz gasped at who the figure was or used to be . " Smoke .I It cant be."
Then soon after Sz had said that a dark voice then spoke up from the background.
"Hahhaha. It is or used to be your fellow Lin Kwei Smoke."
Then it was found out that the dark voice belonged to the Wraith Noob Saibot who also used to be the former Sub Zero before his death.

Sz took that it was hard to accept that the cyborg was indeed his old friend Smoke. But he just couldn't believe that his older brother had become a wraith.
"Brother what has happened to you after your death?!"
Noob:"Brother?I have no brother for I am Noob Saibot!"
Sz sighed at the ego his older brother had got when he had descended into the Netherealm.


" So what do you plan on doing brother?" Noob simply chuckled and responded to his little brother." Sigh. Are you that simple Lin Kwie? Your going to die !"
Sz's eyes got big at this comment and then noticed he had frozen the ropes that tied his arm together.But he had to keep his brother talking so he wouldn't notice.
"Brother why?" Noob just laughed again and brought out a practice dummy made out of remains of past fights. Noob:"To earn a rep in the Netherealm fool."
Noob then disappeared for a quick second and then the dummy's head fell to the floor .Noob then reappeared. Sz had seen enough .He wanted to leave at once.He broke the ropes and kicked his former big brother to the ground .
Noob :"Grrr. Smoke! Assist me in slaying him!"


The cyborg had no choice but to obey.Sz was saddened by this and brought out his Kori Blade and got ready for the fight of his well afterlife. Noob then got into his Monkey fighting stance which greatly freaked out his brother. Noob must have saw this because he barked this at Sub Zero. "Do not look at him that way peasant!!"
With that Noob and Smoke who first sighed and charged with his master.

Sz then charged as well. Okay it is Noob and Smoke vs Sub Zero on the Falling Cliff area were the combatants can fall of and get impaled on spikes.

Who wins?Rate.Comment.Oh and most important of all enjoy!

You know ND4, I'm going to tell you like I tell everyone. You really know these characters (Mortal Kombat, horror movies) well. I want to see you go outside the box. Try some characters you're not used to. Mix it up. Try some that aren't your usual. Okay. Okay.


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Ursa: You are master of all you survey.
General Zod: [bored] So I was yesterday. And the day before.




QUOTE (SilverSurfer092 @ Apr 9 2009, 03:27 AM)
WTFYES  Treacherous is full of pwnage.
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ND4
Posted: Jan 12 2009, 04:02 AM


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Jan 12 2009, 03:41 AM)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Jan 11 2009, 01:24 AM)
QUOTE (treacherous @ Jan 10 2009, 11:54 PM)
Wow.  That was really good.  Epicness.  It's so sad.  So much death.  Everybodys getting stabbed in the chest.  There are little spelling errors and this and that, but it doesn't distract from the story.  Very impressive Bloody.  Very impressive.  Who cares about the length really.  It's good.  Post it. 

It is sort of like a battle for the video game universe.  Mario's Kingdom is caput if Ganon can do all of that to the Zelda world.  I don't know who half these characters are, but you seem to really know them well.  I like it.  Continue it.  Post it.  Go Bloody.

Um Trech I have a another CBUB match that I want you to look at .

Noob and Smoke vs Sub Zero.


Sub Zero had been chased by Scorpion long enough. The Lin Kwei Grandmaster found Scorpion and challenged him to a final Mortal Kombat. Scorp started the match with a fireball which Sz ducked under.Sub Zero then froze Scorpion's feet .
Scorp noticed this and put his right hand around the hilt of his hell sword the Mugai Ruy and waited fro Sz. Sz then slid down to break Scorp's feet off.

Scorp then glared and Sz then thought he saw a little speck of remorse in the Specter's cold white eyes. But the Specter didn't care that he felt a little remorse.
"Get over here!" The specter yelled as his trademark spear punctured the armor and flesh of Sz.

Sz then tried freezing the spear and Scorpion .But the specter had seen Sz use this maneuver before so he brought his spear 1 second before Sz was gonna freeze it . The Grandmaster of the Lin Kwei then fell to his knees .Coughing blood into his mask and holding his spear wound.

Scorpion walked over the fallen grandmaster and spoke .
" Lin Kwei I am Scorpion and you killed me in cold blood.You also slaughtered my clan . But I shall get my revenge. Sz had enough .If he was gonna die he wouldn't die alone. With that Sz reached for his Kori blade .Scorpion saw this and picked up his blade .Swish!! "Aahhahhaha" Were the only sounds the now dieing Lin Kwei made after Scorpion had used his Mugai Ruy to slice his arm off.


Scorpion:'Goodbye Lin Kwei .For good!" Snap!! Went Sub Zero's neck as the specter snapped it in two. The body fell to the ground with a thud.
Scorpion:"Hmm. No it cant be .He is not the one. Noooo!! " The Specter yelled having killed the wrong person. Meanwhile in the Netherealm the recently decreased Sub Zero had came to. Sz then got to his feet but was too busy on focusing on where he was to notice a dark figure sneak up behind him.


Bammm! The dark figure had just given one swift blow to the back of Sz's neck .
Which rendered the now decreased former Lin Kwei grandmaster uncounsious.
Two hours later ....
Sz had awoke to being hovered over a pit of spikes. "What is the meaning of this!?" The dark figure which knocked Sz uncounsious then walked up from the shadows. Sz gasped at who the figure was or used to be . " Smoke .I It cant be."
Then soon after Sz had said that a dark voice then spoke up from the background.
"Hahhaha. It is or used to be your fellow Lin Kwei Smoke."
Then it was found out that the dark voice belonged to the Wraith Noob Saibot who also used to be the former Sub Zero before his death.

Sz took that it was hard to accept that the cyborg was indeed his old friend Smoke. But he just couldn't believe that his older brother had become a wraith.
"Brother what has happened to you after your death?!"
Noob:"Brother?I have no brother for I am Noob Saibot!"
Sz sighed at the ego his older brother had got when he had descended into the Netherealm.


" So what do you plan on doing brother?" Noob simply chuckled and responded to his little brother." Sigh. Are you that simple Lin Kwie? Your going to die !"
Sz's eyes got big at this comment and then noticed he had frozen the ropes that tied his arm together.But he had to keep his brother talking so he wouldn't notice.
"Brother why?" Noob just laughed again and brought out a practice dummy made out of remains of past fights. Noob:"To earn a rep in the Netherealm fool."
Noob then disappeared for a quick second and then the dummy's head fell to the floor .Noob then reappeared. Sz had seen enough .He wanted to leave at once.He broke the ropes and kicked his former big brother to the ground .
Noob :"Grrr. Smoke! Assist me in slaying him!"


The cyborg had no choice but to obey.Sz was saddened by this and brought out his Kori Blade and got ready for the fight of his well afterlife. Noob then got into his Monkey fighting stance which greatly freaked out his brother. Noob must have saw this because he barked this at Sub Zero. "Do not look at him that way peasant!!"
With that Noob and Smoke who first sighed and charged with his master.

Sz then charged as well. Okay it is Noob and Smoke vs Sub Zero on the Falling Cliff area were the combatants can fall of and get impaled on spikes.

Who wins?Rate.Comment.Oh and most important of all enjoy!

You know ND4, I'm going to tell you like I tell everyone. You really know these characters (Mortal Kombat, horror movies) well. I want to see you go outside the box. Try some characters you're not used to. Mix it up. Try some that aren't your usual. Okay. Okay.

I am. I am using cartoons.
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greatness3045
Posted: Jan 12 2009, 03:51 PM


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No CBUB mean i have nothing to live for *tries to commit suicide by jumping of car*


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treacherous
Posted: Jan 12 2009, 05:40 PM


Let Hammy have his Bison. I've got Zod.


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QUOTE (greatness3045 @ Jan 12 2009, 03:51 PM)
No CBUB mean i have nothing to live for *tries to commit suicide by jumping of car*

They're working on it.


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Ursa: You are master of all you survey.
General Zod: [bored] So I was yesterday. And the day before.




QUOTE (SilverSurfer092 @ Apr 9 2009, 03:27 AM)
WTFYES  Treacherous is full of pwnage.
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Bloody_Freak
Posted: Jan 12 2009, 05:50 PM


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Jan 12 2009, 01:40 PM)
QUOTE (greatness3045 @ Jan 12 2009, 03:51 PM)
No CBUB mean i have nothing to live for *tries to commit suicide by jumping of car*

They're working on it.

To late, he's dead.... Moving on. sleep.gif


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greatness3045
Posted: Jan 13 2009, 08:45 PM


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Sorry but wahts FPL i dont know what it is but keep hearing about it. Is it a forum like this one or what. ANd what is the site it is on.


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darkender
Posted: Jan 13 2009, 08:51 PM


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QUOTE (greatness3045 @ Jan 13 2009, 08:45 PM)
Sorry but wahts FPL i dont know what it is but keep hearing about it. Is it a forum like this one or what. ANd what is the site it is on.

It's on Electric ferret. Its a site where you make a super hero/ villain and fight others creations. The catch is that its based more on Grammar and a good story, rather than powers.


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treacherous
Posted: Jan 13 2009, 09:20 PM


Let Hammy have his Bison. I've got Zod.


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CBUB = minor leagues
FPL = major leagues

Simple as that.


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Ursa: You are master of all you survey.
General Zod: [bored] So I was yesterday. And the day before.




QUOTE (SilverSurfer092 @ Apr 9 2009, 03:27 AM)
WTFYES  Treacherous is full of pwnage.
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