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darkender
Posted: Oct 2 2008, 01:33 AM


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QUOTE (granobulax @ Sep 30 2008, 02:10 PM)
Ok, we have the characters and their powers... what's next on the agenda?

Theres one more son...the last child, and after this we'll have to get their bios. Age(Well yea they would prob be hundreds of years old but look the same.) Hieght and that stuff.

But we could give the last kid...I dont know you wanna scratch him or you could come up with a power I cant think of any right now except maybe he could have a transportation power.


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granobulax
Posted: Oct 2 2008, 05:02 AM


He's even got his hand over where I live...


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QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 2 2008, 01:33 AM)
QUOTE (granobulax @ Sep 30 2008, 02:10 PM)
Ok, we have the characters and their powers... what's next on the agenda?

Theres one more son...the last child, and after this we'll have to get their bios. Age(Well yea they would prob be hundreds of years old but look the same.) Hieght and that stuff.

But we could give the last kid...I dont know you wanna scratch him or you could come up with a power I cant think of any right now except maybe he could have a transportation power.

Hows about super strength and super speed. The catch, however, would be that the faster he goes, the more strength he would expend. So, he may have two powers, but cannot use both at the same time.

Sound good?


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Aug 16 2008, 12:12 PM)
RRRAOAAOAOAORRARRAA!!...  Blue lights and sirens rang through the night!! Yeah, they all wanna kill each other... HERE ME CITY!! THE STREETS BELONG TO THE GANGS NOW!! THIS IS THE NEW ORDER!! PREPARE FOR CHAOS!!

Solomon and I may be gangsta, but treach is the gangsta of the year!
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darkender
Posted: Oct 2 2008, 08:55 PM


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QUOTE (granobulax @ Oct 2 2008, 05:02 AM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 2 2008, 01:33 AM)
QUOTE (granobulax @ Sep 30 2008, 02:10 PM)
Ok, we have the characters and their powers... what's next on the agenda?

Theres one more son...the last child, and after this we'll have to get their bios. Age(Well yea they would prob be hundreds of years old but look the same.) Hieght and that stuff.

But we could give the last kid...I dont know you wanna scratch him or you could come up with a power I cant think of any right now except maybe he could have a transportation power.

Hows about super strength and super speed. The catch, however, would be that the faster he goes, the more strength he would expend. So, he may have two powers, but cannot use both at the same time.

Sound good?

I'm not sure what you mean but do you mean like he can only use the powers one at a time....


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Guardian of Nesh
Posted: Oct 2 2008, 10:15 PM


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Haven Comics is back in buisinuss; a new thread has been requested so what should I call it.


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'I'm going to die; if this wasteland doesn't kill me the Avatars will. I'm the last Technomancer; as I go so goes my culture.' The thought was serene, not fearful at all. If he was going to die, he'd die fighting; he'd make sure that the Technomancers were never forgotten. Morshan Sakru: The Last Technomancer would be a name all Avatar would shutter at the thought of for etenity. Morshan now knew what happened to a man who had nothing left to live for but vengence: he became a monster.
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granobulax
Posted: Oct 2 2008, 10:17 PM


He's even got his hand over where I live...


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QUOTE (Guardian of Nesh @ Oct 2 2008, 10:15 PM)
Haven Comics is back in buisinuss; a new thread has been requested so what should I call it.

Darkender wanted to separate the parts that make up the comic as to avoid confusion.


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Aug 16 2008, 12:12 PM)
RRRAOAAOAOAORRARRAA!!...  Blue lights and sirens rang through the night!! Yeah, they all wanna kill each other... HERE ME CITY!! THE STREETS BELONG TO THE GANGS NOW!! THIS IS THE NEW ORDER!! PREPARE FOR CHAOS!!

Solomon and I may be gangsta, but treach is the gangsta of the year!
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Guardian of Nesh
Posted: Oct 2 2008, 10:19 PM


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QUOTE (granobulax @ Oct 2 2008, 05:17 PM)
QUOTE (Guardian of Nesh @ Oct 2 2008, 10:15 PM)
Haven Comics is back in buisinuss; a new thread has been requested so what should I call it.

Darkender wanted to separate the parts that make up the comic as to avoid confusion.

It'd be easier if I knew what they were going to call it and I'd make a tread for the comic.


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'I'm going to die; if this wasteland doesn't kill me the Avatars will. I'm the last Technomancer; as I go so goes my culture.' The thought was serene, not fearful at all. If he was going to die, he'd die fighting; he'd make sure that the Technomancers were never forgotten. Morshan Sakru: The Last Technomancer would be a name all Avatar would shutter at the thought of for etenity. Morshan now knew what happened to a man who had nothing left to live for but vengence: he became a monster.
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darkender
Posted: Oct 4 2008, 01:53 AM


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Thnks Guardian lets make one with for storylines and one for bios or you can seperate them its up to you.....


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granobulax
Posted: Oct 4 2008, 09:26 PM


He's even got his hand over where I live...


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QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 4 2008, 01:53 AM)
Thnks Guardian lets make one with for storylines and one for bios or you can seperate them its up to you.....

And maybe even one thread for art work...


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Aug 16 2008, 12:12 PM)
RRRAOAAOAOAORRARRAA!!...  Blue lights and sirens rang through the night!! Yeah, they all wanna kill each other... HERE ME CITY!! THE STREETS BELONG TO THE GANGS NOW!! THIS IS THE NEW ORDER!! PREPARE FOR CHAOS!!

Solomon and I may be gangsta, but treach is the gangsta of the year!
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darkender
Posted: Oct 6 2008, 09:36 PM


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Okay we got all that stuff down. Next lets think of how we're gonna do this. Are we gonna have like a chapter a week or something like where we have a week to make the chapter and get it to Ion or other drawers?


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Guardian of Nesh
Posted: Oct 7 2008, 08:06 PM


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QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 6 2008, 04:36 PM)
Okay we got all that stuff down. Next lets think of how we're gonna do this. Are we gonna have like a chapter a week or something like where we have a week to make the chapter and get it to Ion or other drawers?

That sounds good.


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'I'm going to die; if this wasteland doesn't kill me the Avatars will. I'm the last Technomancer; as I go so goes my culture.' The thought was serene, not fearful at all. If he was going to die, he'd die fighting; he'd make sure that the Technomancers were never forgotten. Morshan Sakru: The Last Technomancer would be a name all Avatar would shutter at the thought of for etenity. Morshan now knew what happened to a man who had nothing left to live for but vengence: he became a monster.
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darkender
Posted: Oct 8 2008, 02:34 AM


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QUOTE (Guardian of Nesh @ Oct 7 2008, 08:06 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 6 2008, 04:36 PM)
Okay we got all that stuff down. Next lets think of how we're gonna do this. Are we gonna have like a chapter a week or something like where we have a week to make the chapter and get it to Ion or other drawers?

That sounds good.

Okay how long do you think it should be? Like how many pages for I know how much I should give for the first chapter.


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granobulax
Posted: Oct 8 2008, 02:49 PM


He's even got his hand over where I live...


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QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 6 2008, 09:36 PM)
Okay we got all that stuff down. Next lets think of how we're gonna do this. Are we gonna have like a chapter a week or something like where we have a week to make the chapter and get it to Ion or other drawers?

I wish I had the time to draw, or else I would do some of the art work for this too.


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Aug 16 2008, 12:12 PM)
RRRAOAAOAOAORRARRAA!!...  Blue lights and sirens rang through the night!! Yeah, they all wanna kill each other... HERE ME CITY!! THE STREETS BELONG TO THE GANGS NOW!! THIS IS THE NEW ORDER!! PREPARE FOR CHAOS!!

Solomon and I may be gangsta, but treach is the gangsta of the year!
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granobulax
Posted: Oct 8 2008, 02:50 PM


He's even got his hand over where I live...


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QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 8 2008, 02:34 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian of Nesh @ Oct 7 2008, 08:06 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 6 2008, 04:36 PM)
Okay we got all that stuff down. Next lets think of how we're gonna do this. Are we gonna have like a chapter a week or something like where we have a week to make the chapter and get it to Ion or other drawers?

That sounds good.

Okay how long do you think it should be? Like how many pages for I know how much I should give for the first chapter.

I say do whatever you think is best. We trust your judgement. wink.gif


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QUOTE (treacherous @ Aug 16 2008, 12:12 PM)
RRRAOAAOAOAORRARRAA!!...  Blue lights and sirens rang through the night!! Yeah, they all wanna kill each other... HERE ME CITY!! THE STREETS BELONG TO THE GANGS NOW!! THIS IS THE NEW ORDER!! PREPARE FOR CHAOS!!

Solomon and I may be gangsta, but treach is the gangsta of the year!
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darkender
Posted: Oct 8 2008, 08:53 PM


Mr. Ego


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QUOTE (granobulax @ Oct 8 2008, 02:50 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 8 2008, 02:34 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian of Nesh @ Oct 7 2008, 08:06 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Oct 6 2008, 04:36 PM)
Okay we got all that stuff down. Next lets think of how we're gonna do this. Are we gonna have like a chapter a week or something like where we have a week to make the chapter and get it to Ion or other drawers?

That sounds good.

Okay how long do you think it should be? Like how many pages for I know how much I should give for the first chapter.

I say do whatever you think is best. We trust your judgement. wink.gif

Okay, I'm gonna start the story atwhen they awoke and prob end the chapter around the time they get to America. I'll post it when its finished.


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darkender
Posted: Oct 8 2008, 10:04 PM


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Heres the first chapter. Tell me what you think, if you think things should be added or changed or if you think it needs to be longer:
Scientist: What is this? (He says putting his hand to the wall of seemed to be about 20Ē in height and width)
Artifact expert: Well it seems to be a door that leads to what I would think would be an underground pyramid.
Worker: Underground?
Artifact: Well, yes they made underground pyramids also in some parts for different reason I canít call to mind. (He said while feeling the doors)
Worker: So how are we supposed to get in?
Artifact expert: With patients. (He says as his hand went over a huge stone on the wall and the doors slowly begin to open.
Worker: Wow, are you sure nothings gonna jump out of there and tear us to shreds? (He said with a smirk on his face)
Expert: Sir, you watch too much television.
They begin to walk into the pyramid admiring the art and writings all over the wall.
Worker: You know what this all means guy?
Expert: Well lets have a look shall we. Iím not sure what this says but I donít think its Egyptian.
Worker: Well that doesnít sound good.
They walk on until they get into the center of the pyramid. A huge room that some how light has seemed to find its way into.
Expert: I donít understand, thereís no gold or silver here.
Worker: So.
Scientist: Maybe some raiders got to it before we did?
Expert: Maybe
They all begin to spread out into the room looking at other stone carvings and art on the wall. Until there here a scream from afarÖ
Worker; Aaahhhh ( Bullets fire)
Expert: Oh noÖ
They all run towards the screams with other workers.
Expert: What is it?!
Worker: The statue it scared the living hell out of me. (He says while wiping the sweat off his forehead)
Expert: Lets not destroy our exhibit!
Worker: Sorry nearly crapped myself.
(The worker begins to turn around to bump into something)
Worker: Not again ( He turns to try to make the statue when he sees eyes glowing standing in front of him.
Shadowing Creature: Leave now!
Worker: What the hell?
The Expert turns the corner to see the man cowering in fear of the shadowing creature.
Expert: What the hell? (He begins to clean off his glasses to get a better look not believing what heís seeing and realizes a crack. He looks up)
The eyes turn to him and immediately he is frozen with fear.
Shadowing creature: Get out now!
The whole pyramids begin to shake. The other workers and scientists start running out of the cavern.
The Expert however stands frozen with fear as the creature begins walking towards him and touches him on his forehead.
Immediately he begins to collapse with his last vision seeing other creatures behind himÖ
The next morning the man jumps up in his bed looking around and feeling his forehead. As soon as he feels everything in place he slams himself back on the bed assuming it was all a dream. Until he reaches over to his nightstand to get his glasses and sees a crack in them.


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