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Posted by: Ethan Jan 28 2009, 11:44 PM
Alright......ask me, I dunno everything but I"ll try....

Posted by: wernidthe19 Jan 28 2009, 11:52 PM
Where can I get a whiter smile for less than ten dollars?

Posted by: Ethan Jan 28 2009, 11:56 PM
biggrin.gif Walmart.

Posted by: Ethan Jan 29 2009, 12:00 AM
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 28 2009, 11:52 PM)
Where can I get a whiter smile for less than ten dollars?

click on that ad when it shows up.......I duno.

Posted by: Marvel Man Jan 29 2009, 12:03 AM
What came first, the chicken or the egg?

Posted by: Ethan Jan 29 2009, 12:14 AM
QUOTE (Marvel Man @ Jan 29 2009, 12:03 AM)
What came first, the chicken or the egg?

the protozoas did......

Posted by: jailer411 Jan 29 2009, 12:16 AM
QUOTE (Marvel Man @ Jan 28 2009, 06:03 PM)
What came first, the chicken or the egg?

I couldn't resist awnsering this, Dinosaurs laid eggs!

Also another awnser to this would be, whatever you said first in the question!
Hmmmmm, my awnsers seem to contradict them selves. huh.gif

Posted by: Solomon Jan 29 2009, 01:33 AM
Hmmm What came first the chicken or the egg.

You see with out a chicken there would be no egg, yet without an egg there would be no chicken. Of course if there were egg there would be no chickens. However if there were no eggs there would be no chickens.

Hmmmm...

Posted by: wernidthe19 Jan 29 2009, 01:44 AM
Some species laid an egg. Then some mutated bird hatched; this bird being what we know as a chicken.

So evolution tells up the egg came first.

Posted by: Solomon Jan 29 2009, 01:48 AM
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 01:44 AM)
Some species laid an egg. Then some mutated bird hatched; this bird being what we know as a chicken.

So evolution tells up the egg came first.

How did that "some species" get there in the first place?

Posted by: wernidthe19 Jan 29 2009, 01:54 AM
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 01:48 AM)
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 01:44 AM)
Some species laid an egg. Then some mutated bird hatched; this bird being what we know as a chicken.

So evolution tells up the egg came first.

How did that "some species" get there in the first place?

It evolved from another species that evolved from another that evolved from another. You get the point.

As for how the first single-celled organism came into existance: Idk, God?

Posted by: Solomon Jan 29 2009, 01:57 AM
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 01:54 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 01:48 AM)
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 01:44 AM)
Some species laid an egg. Then some mutated bird hatched; this bird being what we know as a chicken.

So evolution tells up the egg came first.

How did that "some species" get there in the first place?

It evolved from another species that evolved from another that evolved from another. You get the point.

As for how the first single-celled organism came into existance: Idk, God?

Keep moving back. Where did that species come from, what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species...

You see the egg cant be first because it had to come from something else. Also the chicken cant come first because it had to come from an egg.

Posted by: wernidthe19 Jan 29 2009, 02:02 AM
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 01:57 AM)
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 01:54 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 01:48 AM)
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 01:44 AM)
Some species laid an egg. Then some mutated bird hatched; this bird being what we know as a chicken.

So evolution tells up the egg came first.

How did that "some species" get there in the first place?

It evolved from another species that evolved from another that evolved from another. You get the point.

As for how the first single-celled organism came into existance: Idk, God?

Keep moving back. Where did that species come from, what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species what about that species...

You see the egg cant be first because it had to come from something else. Also the chicken cant come first because it had to come from an egg.

One had to come first. If neither is possible, then life is an illusion.

Posted by: Solomon Jan 29 2009, 02:05 AM
No not really. Maybe the whole illusion of this coming first, or this coming first is the real illusion not life it self.

Posted by: wernidthe19 Jan 29 2009, 02:14 AM
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 02:05 AM)
No not really. Maybe the whole illusion of this coming first, or this coming first is the real illusion not life it self.

You honestly believe that?

Posted by: Ethan Jan 29 2009, 02:46 AM
THE PROTOZOAS CAME FIRST!!! angry.gif whoo!

Posted by: Solomon Jan 29 2009, 03:08 AM
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 02:14 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 02:05 AM)
No not really. Maybe the whole illusion of this coming first, or this coming first is the real illusion not life it self.

You honestly believe that?

Does it matter what I beleive

However in case your wondering yes I believe that we are creations of god through lineage from Adam and eve. Yes I beleive that Adam, and eve were created from nothingness by god.

Posted by: Ethan Jan 29 2009, 03:13 AM
aw, dang it.....where are the questions....... dry.gif

Posted by: Solomon Jan 29 2009, 03:17 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 29 2009, 03:13 AM)
aw, dang it.....where are the questions....... dry.gif

Whats your fighting style?

Posted by: Ethan Jan 29 2009, 03:28 AM
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 03:17 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 29 2009, 03:13 AM)
aw, dang it.....where are the questions....... dry.gif

Whats your fighting style?

Fighting style? Brawling I guess, I don't know any martial arts....and some streetfighting.

Posted by: jailer411 Jan 29 2009, 03:34 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 28 2009, 09:28 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 03:17 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 29 2009, 03:13 AM)
aw, dang it.....where are the questions....... dry.gif

Whats your fighting style?

Fighting style? Brawling I guess, I don't know any martial arts....and some streetfighting.

I have thumb wrestling down.

Posted by: Ethan Jan 29 2009, 03:45 AM
QUOTE (jailer411 @ Jan 29 2009, 03:34 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 28 2009, 09:28 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 03:17 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 29 2009, 03:13 AM)
aw, dang it.....where are the questions....... dry.gif

Whats your fighting style?

Fighting style? Brawling I guess, I don't know any martial arts....and some streetfighting.

I have thumb wrestling down.

......?

Posted by: The Ripper Jan 29 2009, 10:40 PM
You and video games, discuss.

(Translation: Other than FF, what is your favorite games, video games or not)

Posted by: Ethan Jan 30 2009, 02:36 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Jan 29 2009, 10:40 PM)
You and video games, discuss.

(Translation: Other than FF, what is your favorite games, video games or not)

Genres: FPSs, RPGs, Multiplayers, Horrors, hell, everything as long as they fit within my standards of fun times. I absolutely love the Armor Core series as well as the Front Missions, Sudikoden One through Four, anything Sandlot like Incredible Hulk: Ultimate Destruction, like in Bionic Commando Rearmed...or free movement Rpgs like Naruto: Rise of a Ninja. I like lottsa videogames, I own at least up to Two Hundred video games varying for diffrent consoles. biggrin.gif

Posted by: Marvel Man Jan 30 2009, 03:25 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Jan 30 2009, 02:36 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Jan 29 2009, 10:40 PM)
You and video games, discuss.

(Translation: Other than FF, what is your favorite games, video games or not)

Genres: FPSs, RPGs, Multiplayers, Horrors, hell, everything as long as they fit within my standards of fun times. I absolutely love the Armor Core series as well as the Front Missions, Sudikoden One through Four, anything Sandlot like Incredible Hulk: Ultimate Destruction, like in Bionic Commando Rearmed...or free movement Rpgs like Naruto: Rise of a Ninja. I like lottsa videogames, I own at least up to Two Hundred video games varying for diffrent consoles. biggrin.gif

I see Incredible Hulk.
Good choice. biggrin.gif

Posted by: The Ripper Jan 31 2009, 04:49 AM
http://www.gamedaily.com/articles/galleries/babe-of-the-week-redheads/?page=4

Posted by: Ethan Jan 31 2009, 05:19 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Jan 31 2009, 04:49 AM)
http://www.gamedaily.com/articles/galleries/babe-of-the-week-redheads/?page=4

yep, I liked the character, but not the story in the game, I didn't like the games either....but the movie, HOOOOOTTTTTT!!!! Kristanna Loken showing her beauties while getting it on, shows her real character, heh.

Posted by: wernidthe19 Jan 31 2009, 04:58 PM
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 03:08 AM)
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 02:14 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 02:05 AM)
No not really. Maybe the whole illusion of this coming first, or this coming first is the real illusion not life it self.

You honestly believe that?

Does it matter what I beleive

However in case your wondering yes I believe that we are creations of god through lineage from Adam and eve. Yes I beleive that Adam, and eve were created from nothingness by god.

Hmm, the way I assumed you explained it didn't sound like a creationist standpoint, that's why I was asking. If I was a creationist I suppose I would say the adult chicken came first just like the adult human came first.

Anyway, I only wanted to give my final thoughts. Let's get back on topic.

BTT: What's the good to bad game ratio of Wii games?

Posted by: Solomon Jan 31 2009, 05:28 PM
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 31 2009, 04:58 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 03:08 AM)
QUOTE (wernidthe19 @ Jan 29 2009, 02:14 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Jan 29 2009, 02:05 AM)
No not really. Maybe the whole illusion of this coming first, or this coming first is the real illusion not life it self.

You honestly believe that?

Does it matter what I beleive

However in case your wondering yes I believe that we are creations of god through lineage from Adam and eve. Yes I beleive that Adam, and eve were created from nothingness by god.

Hmm, the way I assumed you explained it didn't sound like a creationist standpoint, that's why I was asking. If I was a creationist I suppose I would say the adult chicken came first just like the adult human came first.

Anyway, I only wanted to give my final thoughts. Let's get back on topic.

BTT: What's the good to bad game ratio of Wii games?

I was just trying to get you to think.

...Wait this thing has a topic?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 7 2009, 12:50 AM
....ahem.....the protozoas came first before all came to be.....the single unicelluar oraginsms were first... and they evolved....... now, back to questions....for me.

Posted by: Marvel Man Feb 7 2009, 12:57 AM
If we locked Sylvester Stallone, Arnold Scwazenaiger, George Lucas, and Chuck Norris, who would come out?

What if we added a crazed monkey to the mix?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 7 2009, 01:15 AM
QUOTE (Marvel Man @ Feb 7 2009, 12:57 AM)
If we locked Sylvester Stallone, Arnold Scwazenaiger, George Lucas, and Chuck Norris, who would come out?

What if we added a crazed monkey to the mix?

The monkey, George and Stallone will be dead, if Arnold is in his prime and his super body physique, he'd proably give Norris a hard time......Martial arts against a huge terminator guy.......defintel Chuck Norris.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 7 2009, 01:17 AM
How did you react about our new paladin?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 7 2009, 01:32 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 01:17 AM)
How did you react about our new paladin?

biggrin.gif well, I was surprised, but you seem cooler as the Ex-Paladin, Jailer does it alright.....

Posted by: jailer411 Feb 7 2009, 02:29 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 6 2009, 07:32 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 01:17 AM)
How did you react about our new paladin?

biggrin.gif well, I was surprised, but you seem cooler as the Ex-Paladin, Jailer does it alright.....

You are thanked. Now, how much wood could a wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck wood?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 7 2009, 04:22 PM
QUOTE (jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 02:29 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 6 2009, 07:32 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 01:17 AM)
How did you react about our new paladin?

biggrin.gif well, I was surprised, but you seem cooler as the Ex-Paladin, Jailer does it alright.....

You are thanked. Now, how much wood could a wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck wood?

Depends on how much a woodchuck can chuck if he is able to chuck wood..........

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 7 2009, 05:06 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 7 2009, 09:22 AM)
QUOTE (jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 02:29 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 6 2009, 07:32 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 01:17 AM)
How did you react about our new paladin?

biggrin.gif well, I was surprised, but you seem cooler as the Ex-Paladin, Jailer does it alright.....

You are thanked. Now, how much wood could a wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck wood?

Depends on how much a woodchuck can chuck if he is able to chuck wood..........

Did you read the lore of Elextra? The RP may become lore.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 12:58 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 05:06 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 7 2009, 09:22 AM)
QUOTE (jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 02:29 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 6 2009, 07:32 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 01:17 AM)
How did you react about our new paladin?

biggrin.gif well, I was surprised, but you seem cooler as the Ex-Paladin, Jailer does it alright.....

You are thanked. Now, how much wood could a wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck wood?

Depends on how much a woodchuck can chuck if he is able to chuck wood..........

Did you read the lore of Elextra? The RP may become lore.

I can't load the page....mmmhhh, my computer's been shifty and slow lately......it even kicked me off the internet even when I didn't press the Exit button........

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 01:15 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 7 2009, 06:58 PM)

I can't load the page....mmmhhh, my computer's been shifty and slow lately......it even kicked me off the internet even when I didn't press the Exit button........

I should probably remove the virus I put on it....

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 03:27 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 06:15 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 7 2009, 06:58 PM)

I can't load the page....mmmhhh, my computer's been shifty and slow lately......it even kicked me off the internet even when I didn't press the Exit button........

I should probably remove the virus I put on it....

Jailer, did you just do just hack and pwn Ethan with a virus?!?!?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 03:36 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:27 PM)

Jailer, did you just do just hack and pwn Ethan with a virus?!?!?

Yup, I found virus file on the internet called y2k. When I opened it, it said file load last failed 1/1/2000. So, I sent it to Ethan with the load date, 12/21/2012.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 03:38 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 08:36 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:27 PM)

Jailer, did you just do just hack and pwn Ethan with a virus?!?!?

Yup, I found virus file on the internet called y2k. When I opened it, it said file load last failed 1/1/2000. So, I sent it to Ethan with the load date, 12/21/2012.

You are joking...

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 03:41 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:38 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 08:36 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:27 PM)

Jailer, did you just do just hack and pwn Ethan with a virus?!?!?

Yup, I found virus file on the internet called y2k. When I opened it, it said file load last failed 1/1/2000. So, I sent it to Ethan with the load date, 12/21/2012.

You are joking...

No....

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 03:42 AM
Am I safe? Should I seek motivation from Haven?

Posted by: Darkender Feb 8 2009, 03:58 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 03:41 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:38 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 08:36 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:27 PM)

Jailer, did you just do just hack and pwn Ethan with a virus?!?!?

Yup, I found virus file on the internet called y2k. When I opened it, it said file load last failed 1/1/2000. So, I sent it to Ethan with the load date, 12/21/2012.

You are joking...

No....

You can be banned for that now....

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 04:01 AM
QUOTE (Darkender @ Feb 7 2009, 09:58 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 03:41 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:38 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 08:36 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 09:27 PM)

Jailer, did you just do just hack and pwn Ethan with a virus?!?!?

Yup, I found virus file on the internet called y2k. When I opened it, it said file load last failed 1/1/2000. So, I sent it to Ethan with the load date, 12/21/2012.

You are joking...

No....

You can be banned for that now....

Try it teu42.gif

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 04:02 AM
QUOTE ("Solomon)
4. No member, administrator, or moderator may post links that may be harmful to one’s computer.
-Suspension, Banishment

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 04:11 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 10:02 PM)
QUOTE ("Solomon)
4. No member, administrator, or moderator may post links that may be harmful to one’s computer.
-Suspension, Banishment

I'll take my chances teu42.gif

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 04:26 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 09:11 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 10:02 PM)
QUOTE ("Solomon)
4. No member, administrator, or moderator may post links that may be harmful to one’s computer.
-Suspension, Banishment

I'll take my chances teu42.gif

Aren't you supposed to be a paladin?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 04:37 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 10:26 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 7 2009, 09:11 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 7 2009, 10:02 PM)
QUOTE ("Solomon)
4. No member, administrator, or moderator may post links that may be harmful to one’s computer.
-Suspension, Banishment

I'll take my chances teu42.gif

Aren't you supposed to be a paladin?

.....Paladins cant kid around with their friends? Okay, fine then. mellow.gif I'm keeping a straight face.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 04:39 AM
It was a joke?

Stupid us...

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 04:40 AM
I'll ask yet again, should I seek motivation from Haven of Wiidom?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:20 AM
My army of jackals vs your wolves.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:29 AM
angry.gif ..........You will die. that's not even funny, a rick n roll, I'd understand but a joke of a virus? NOT COOL!!!! and screw your Jackals, Wolves pawn, they work together........and don't worry Ripper, I have the crappiest computer so if a virus was on here, itd affect mine first and I'll try to tell the gang....just a theory. smile.gif not, Ripper, lets punish him in your RP.... teu42.gif

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:33 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:29 AM)
angry.gif ..........You will die. that's not even funny, a rick n roll, I'd understand but a joke of a virus? NOT COOL!!!! and screw your Jackals, Wolves pawn, they work together........and don't worry Ripper, I have the crappiest computer so if a virus was on here, itd affect mine first and I'll try to tell the gang....just a theory. smile.gif not, Ripper, lets punish him in your RP.... teu42.gif

Wow, calm down Ethan, I was joking. As for the jakals, they're close cousins to wolves, how could you disrespect them in such away? Darkness Hunter is similar to shadow Fernir user posted image Were jackal!

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:43 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:33 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:29 AM)
angry.gif ..........You will die. that's not even funny, a rick n roll, I'd understand but a joke of a virus? NOT COOL!!!! and screw your Jackals, Wolves pawn, they work together........and don't worry Ripper, I have the crappiest computer so if a virus was on here, itd affect mine first and I'll try to tell the gang....just a theory. smile.gif  not, Ripper, lets punish him in your RP.... teu42.gif

Wow, calm down Ethan, I was joking. As for the jakals, they're close cousins to wolves, how could you disrespect them in such away? Darkness Hunter is similar to shadow Fernir user posted image Were jackal!

yes, but they don't work as a team.......which is why wolves win. they rarely team up to hunt but they hunt alone.........usually in pairs with their mate. now, just...don't do that again.......playing a pranks like that can cause your relationships to go sour here....

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:44 AM
Pranks? Honestly, who would believe that I found the Y2K virus? As for the jackals.....I have nothing.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:52 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:44 AM)
Pranks? Honestly, who would believe that I found the Y2K virus? As for the jackals.....I have nothing.

at a hidden virus shop site that could look like its selling flowers....or something.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 06:55 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 7 2009, 11:52 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:44 AM)
Pranks? Honestly, who would believe that I found the Y2K virus? As for the jackals.....I have nothing.

at a hidden virus shop site that could look like its selling flowers....or something.

Besides, even evil like me has standards. I would send a Rickroll, but not something malicious!

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:57 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:52 AM)

at a hidden virus shop site that could look like its selling flowers....or something.

Hah!, They were selling cookies not flowe....wait.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:58 AM
I'd would too, or at least do something harmless like I did with the Hulk thing, it worked and nobody got hurt.....

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:13 AM
How's the RP going for ya?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:21 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:13 AM)
How's the RP going for ya?

Fun so far, I'm targeting the centaur as Leon might need help......and I'm thinking of a way to get Jailer....

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:27 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:21 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:13 AM)
How's the RP going for ya?

Fun so far, I'm targeting the centaur as Leon might need help......and I'm thinking of a way to get Jailer....

Remember, Jailer is a paladin. Revenge is never part of his tenets. IF he does so, he'll be as vile as the demons you fought.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:32 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:27 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:21 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:13 AM)
How's the RP going for ya?

Fun so far, I'm targeting the centaur as Leon might need help......and I'm thinking of a way to get Jailer....

Remember, Jailer is a paladin. Revenge is never part of his tenets. IF he does so, he'll be as vile as the demons you fought.

oh well, it is of mine, heh, I'll be plotting his demise.....like a werewolf, heh.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:33 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:32 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:27 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:21 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:13 AM)
How's the RP going for ya?

Fun so far, I'm targeting the centaur as Leon might need help......and I'm thinking of a way to get Jailer....

Remember, Jailer is a paladin. Revenge is never part of his tenets. IF he does so, he'll be as vile as the demons you fought.

oh well, it is of mine, heh, I'll be plotting his demise.....like a werewolf, heh.

Do you have any idea who is watching over him? Enunk and Elextra. Both of them are watching over Jailer, and you'll get pwnt if you screw with any of the three.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:34 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:33 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:32 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:27 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:21 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:13 AM)
How's the RP going for ya?

Fun so far, I'm targeting the centaur as Leon might need help......and I'm thinking of a way to get Jailer....

Remember, Jailer is a paladin. Revenge is never part of his tenets. IF he does so, he'll be as vile as the demons you fought.

oh well, it is of mine, heh, I'll be plotting his demise.....like a werewolf, heh.

Do you have any idea who is watching over him? Enunk and Elextra. Both of them are watching over Jailer, and you'll get pwnt if you screw with any of the three.

...do you have an idea of his family clan line ancenstors watching him? tongue.gif There's his grandfather, Shadow Fenrir, and his unamed Parents who watch over him, they're immensely powerful, not to mention other member of the clan, his cousins, aunts, uncles, other grandarents, no siblings.... biggrin.gif anways, um, En and Ex could kill me easily? I'll go down with a fight.........with Jailer. teu42.gif Mwahahahahahah Cough cough.

Posted by: Leo Sanders Feb 8 2009, 06:34 PM
Did you let the dogs out?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:37 PM
QUOTE (Leo Sanders @ Feb 8 2009, 06:34 PM)
Did you let the dogs out?

yes, they had fun together...peeing all over the place......leaving minefields on the way to the truck. ah, good memories.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:41 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:34 PM)

...do you have an idea of his family clan line ancenstors watching him? tongue.gif There's his grandfather, Shadow Fenrir, and his unamed Parents who watch over him, they're immensely powerful, not to mention other member of the clan, his cousins, aunts, uncles, other grandarents, no siblings.... biggrin.gif anways, um, En and Ex could kill me easily? I'll go down with a fight.........with Jailer. teu42.gif Mwahahahahahah Cough cough.

....There's no way I'm letting you anwhere near me in the RP.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:43 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:41 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:34 PM)

...do you have an idea of his family clan line ancenstors watching him?  tongue.gif  There's his grandfather, Shadow Fenrir, and his unamed Parents who watch over him, they're immensely powerful, not to mention other member of the clan, his cousins, aunts, uncles, other grandarents, no siblings.... biggrin.gif  anways, um, En and Ex could kill me easily? I'll go down with a fight.........with Jailer.  teu42.gif  Mwahahahahahah Cough cough.

....There's no way I'm letting you anwhere near me in the RP.

I was kidding with Ripper, I already forgave you over at the CBUB.....go look at that page you were wonderin of what was wrong with Haven.......anyhoo, back to ME! teu42.gif

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:46 PM
Question, do you believe that the end of the world is prophicised on December twelveth 2012, because that's the date the Sarha Palin becomes president?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:49 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:46 PM)
Question, do you believe that the end of the world is prophicised on December twelveth 2012, because that's the date the Sarha Palin becomes president?

......she supports shooting wolves....granted they are overpopulated, but that just pisses me off, if she becomes one president, I will go insane....., another thing, there's a deer problem here inNY and Wolf problem in Alaska.....why not trade around?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 06:50 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 11:46 AM)
Question, do you believe that the end of the world is prophicised on December twelveth 2012, because that's the date the Sarha Palin becomes president?

See you all in Canada! Hopefully, it is safer there. Also which is stronger, a team of super gods, or an all knowing, all powerful god.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:51 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 06:50 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 11:46 AM)
Question, do you believe that the end of the world is prophicised on December twelveth 2012, because that's the date the Sarha Palin becomes president?

See you all in Canada! Hopefully, it is safer there. Also which is stronger, a team of super gods, or an all knowing, all powerful god.

the group, adds more variety....more zest to life.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:53 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:51 PM)

the group, adds more variety....more zest to life.

Go back to my Battle world topic, you'll see that ND4's undead army is no wory. The power limitations PM, takes care of everything. It's in the rule, you know, the ones that you read?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 06:58 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:53 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:51 PM)

the group, adds more variety....more zest to life.

Go back to my Battle world topic, you'll see that ND4's undead army is no wory. The power limitations PM, takes care of everything. It's in the rule, you know, the ones that you read?

I know, I reaqlized that a few minutes ago, mate.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 06:59 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:58 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 06:53 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:51 PM)

the group, adds more variety....more zest to life.

Go back to my Battle world topic, you'll see that ND4's undead army is no wory. The power limitations PM, takes care of everything. It's in the rule, you know, the ones that you read?

I know, I reaqlized that a few minutes ago, mate.

ohmy.gif Yayyyyyyyyy!!!

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:06 PM
Now, I'm blocking the arrows from the centaur with my flat blunt end of my large Scimitar of War, defending Leon til he gets back into action and I'll help him, you help Engrant, Arus.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM
Who do you think would win? A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:08 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM)
Who do you think would win? A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 07:11 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 01:08 PM)

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

What if a vampire bit Shadow fernir? Would he turn into a Werepire?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:14 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:08 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM)
Who do you think would win?  A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

All gods are immortal, but not all immortals are gods. Enunk and Elextra may win. If Enunk and Elextra both were formed before the universe, the Great Old Ones are powerful, and they have all sorts of knowledge.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 07:16 PM
Hey guys, I've made a rule that is currently in pending, should I make it official?

"Note: ( Rule in pending) I am the current Game master of the tournament, and it is obvious that I can not make a character because of this. I'm currently thinking of switching Game masters every touramnet."

You all do know where I put these rules, right?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:21 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 07:11 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 01:08 PM)

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied.  biggrin.gif

What if a vampire bit Shadow fernir? Would he turn into a Werepire?

.....having you been watching too much Underworld? no, the werewolf virus would reject it and kil it as it is the dominant host.......but if it was a being who's blood can blend both, it could work but if its a normal human, bith viruses would kill it if he hasn't turned yet.....

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:23 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:14 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:08 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM)
Who do you think would win?  A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

All gods are immortal, but not all immortals are gods. Enunk and Elextra may win. If Enunk and Elextra both were formed before the universe, the Great Old Ones are powerful, and they have all sorts of knowledge.

alright, here, let me try something.....you know that when god set the universe into motion, he is not allowed to tamper with any part of the universe, wheter it be a planet or a moon..? I'm guessing that makes your two gods the same way...and the Wolves get their power from the moon....thus they are imbued with the energy of the moon for their Lunar Waves and Howls in which gods cannot destroy.....?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:27 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:23 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:14 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:08 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM)
Who do you think would win?  A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

All gods are immortal, but not all immortals are gods. Enunk and Elextra may win. If Enunk and Elextra both were formed before the universe, the Great Old Ones are powerful, and they have all sorts of knowledge.

alright, here, let me try something.....you know that when god set the universe into motion, he is not allowed to tamper with any part of the universe, wheter it be a planet or a moon..? I'm guessing that makes your two gods the same way...and the Wolves get their power from the moon....thus they are imbued with the energy of the moon for their Lunar Waves and Howls in which gods cannot destroy.....?

En and Ex are different. They choose not to. They are capable of tampering with the universe, but NOT willing to tamper with their creation.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:28 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:27 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:23 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:14 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:08 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM)
Who do you think would win?  A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

All gods are immortal, but not all immortals are gods. Enunk and Elextra may win. If Enunk and Elextra both were formed before the universe, the Great Old Ones are powerful, and they have all sorts of knowledge.

alright, here, let me try something.....you know that when god set the universe into motion, he is not allowed to tamper with any part of the universe, wheter it be a planet or a moon..? I'm guessing that makes your two gods the same way...and the Wolves get their power from the moon....thus they are imbued with the energy of the moon for their Lunar Waves and Howls in which gods cannot destroy.....?

En and Ex are different. They choose not to. They are capable of tampering with the universe, but NOT willing to tamper with their creation.

yes, here's another point, Kin's not your cration....he's the creation from his parents, correct? so that means you really don't have any power over him......

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 8 2009, 07:33 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 01:28 PM)

yes, here's another point, Kin's not your cration....he's the creation from his parents, correct? so that means you really don't have any power over him......

You both have good points, and of course I'm siding with Ripper here, but I am setteling this with an obstacle no being can overcome! Rick Ashtley's "Never going to give you up"!

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 8 2009, 07:38 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:28 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:27 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:23 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:14 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 12:08 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 07:07 PM)
Who do you think would win?  A clan of ancestors, or two all powerful, all knowing gods?

ahem, CLAN OF POWERFUL IMMORTALS OF THE MOON....I'd say they're tied. biggrin.gif

All gods are immortal, but not all immortals are gods. Enunk and Elextra may win. If Enunk and Elextra both were formed before the universe, the Great Old Ones are powerful, and they have all sorts of knowledge.

alright, here, let me try something.....you know that when god set the universe into motion, he is not allowed to tamper with any part of the universe, wheter it be a planet or a moon..? I'm guessing that makes your two gods the same way...and the Wolves get their power from the moon....thus they are imbued with the energy of the moon for their Lunar Waves and Howls in which gods cannot destroy.....?

En and Ex are different. They choose not to. They are capable of tampering with the universe, but NOT willing to tamper with their creation.

yes, here's another point, Kin's not your cration....he's the creation from his parents, correct? so that means you really don't have any power over him......

Enunk created life, and Elextra tutored life. That is all for now.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 8 2009, 07:39 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 07:33 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 8 2009, 01:28 PM)

yes, here's another point, Kin's not your cration....he's the creation from his parents, correct? so that means you really don't have any power over him......

You both have good points, and of course I'm siding with Ripper here, but I am setteling this with an obstacle no being can overcome! Rick Ashtley's "Never going to give you up"!

thanks...and to counter Ashely. "Too bad, now let im go or be shot......" is waht I'd say o that.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 9 2009, 12:54 AM
Sorry if I tried to convert your beliefs.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 9 2009, 02:05 AM
eh, to each his own, comrade.... biggrin.gif no worries

Posted by: Leo Sanders Feb 9 2009, 02:30 AM
Can you believe it is not butter?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 9 2009, 02:36 AM
QUOTE (Leo Sanders @ Feb 9 2009, 02:30 AM)
Can you believe it is not butter?

biggrin.gif I KNOW!!!! I love that stuff, hey, ya know what I call the hole in the middle, ...a belly button. biggrin.gif

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 9 2009, 03:08 AM
Shall we collaborate on a story sometime, with Shadow Fenrir's time in the afterlife, and how he met Enunk?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 9 2009, 03:12 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 09:08 PM)
Shall we collaborate on a story sometime, with Shadow Fenrir's time in the afterlife, and how he met Enunk?

Can I help with it?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 9 2009, 03:15 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 8 2009, 08:12 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 8 2009, 09:08 PM)
Shall we collaborate on a story sometime, with Shadow Fenrir's time in the afterlife, and how he met Enunk?

Can I help with it?

Yes you may. Convert it to lore if you would like?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 10 2009, 12:21 AM
sorry, but no, my apoligies, Ripper.....But I'm still all for him fighting Ivor.....I just don't like the thought of him dead, you do understand right? except for that time in your RP..........

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 10 2009, 12:33 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 9 2009, 05:21 PM)
sorry, but no, my apoligies, Ripper.....But I'm still all for him fighting Ivor.....I just don't like the thought of him dead, you do understand right? except for that time in your RP..........

He won't die.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 10 2009, 12:38 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 10 2009, 12:33 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 9 2009, 05:21 PM)
sorry, but no, my apoligies, Ripper.....But I'm still all for him fighting Ivor.....I just don't like the thought of him dead, you do understand right? except for that time in your RP..........

He won't die.

I meant the thing meeting in the afterife with Enunk, sorry for the confusion.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 10 2009, 12:41 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 9 2009, 05:38 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 10 2009, 12:33 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 9 2009, 05:21 PM)
sorry, but no, my apoligies, Ripper.....But I'm still all for him fighting Ivor.....I just don't like the thought of him dead, you do understand right? except for that time in your RP..........

He won't die.

I meant the thing meeting in the afterife with Enunk, sorry for the confusion.

And also, answer the PM I sent you. He could meet Enunk outside of the afterlife.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 10 2009, 12:51 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 10 2009, 12:41 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 9 2009, 05:38 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 10 2009, 12:33 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 9 2009, 05:21 PM)
sorry, but no, my apoligies, Ripper.....But I'm still all for him fighting Ivor.....I just don't like the thought of him dead, you do understand right? except for that time in your RP..........

He won't die.

I meant the thing meeting in the afterife with Enunk, sorry for the confusion.

And also, answer the PM I sent you. He could meet Enunk outside of the afterlife.

sure, he could meet him, and answered.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 12 2009, 01:47 AM
Hey Ethan, you there?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 01:51 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 01:47 AM)
Hey Ethan, you there?

Yes? and I answered the PM.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 12 2009, 02:24 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 06:51 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 01:47 AM)
Hey Ethan, you there?

Yes? and I answered the PM.

Shadow Fenrir can also meet with Iddivh (Me in the Enunkian mythology) and Arus (Jailer in the Enunkian mythology).

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 02:26 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 02:24 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 06:51 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 01:47 AM)
Hey Ethan, you there?

Yes? and I answered the PM.

Shadow Fenrir can also meet with Iddivh (Me in the Enunkian mythology) and Arus (Jailer in the Enunkian mythology).

alright, good idae, like at the end of the battle or before it?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 12 2009, 02:27 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 07:26 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 02:24 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 06:51 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 01:47 AM)
Hey Ethan, you there?

Yes? and I answered the PM.

Shadow Fenrir can also meet with Iddivh (Me in the Enunkian mythology) and Arus (Jailer in the Enunkian mythology).

alright, good idae, like at the end of the battle or before it?

Right before it.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 02:34 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 02:27 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 07:26 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 02:24 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 06:51 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 01:47 AM)
Hey Ethan, you there?

Yes? and I answered the PM.

Shadow Fenrir can also meet with Iddivh (Me in the Enunkian mythology) and Arus (Jailer in the Enunkian mythology).

alright, good idae, like at the end of the battle or before it?

Right before it.

but after the battle with Ivor's elite warrior, rightm like Iddivh and Arus are hunting them after they have left the castle? or do you have to tie in a story you already have together to make it like a series?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 02:36 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 08:34 PM)

but after the battle with Ivor's elite warrior, rightm like Iddivh and Arus are hunting them after they have left the castle? or do you have to tie in a story you already have together to make it like a series?

Whoa, what hunting!? I better get a PM of this story.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 02:37 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 02:36 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 08:34 PM)

but after the battle with Ivor's elite warrior, rightm like Iddivh and Arus are hunting them after they have left the castle? or do you have to tie in a story you already have together to make it like a series?

Whoa, what hunting!? I better get a PM of this story.

no worries, just throwing out ideas at Ripper. Wanna help?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 02:39 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 08:37 PM)

no worries, just throwing out ideas at Ripper. Wanna help?

The ultimate battle for the sake of the animal kingdoms. The major leader of the animals, Holy Avenger and Shadow Fernir, are chosen as champions to save them.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 02:45 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 02:39 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 08:37 PM)

no worries, just throwing out ideas at Ripper. Wanna help?

The ultimate battle for the sake of the animal kingdoms. The major leader of the animals, Holy Avenger and Shadow Fernir, are chosen as champions to save them.

no, it, the story, had already started by Ripper, but that's a very good idea! Ripper, can you link him to the story? I'm working on the next part, slowly.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 12 2009, 02:50 AM
http://issac-the-irate.deviantart.com/art/King-Ivor-112402347

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 02:54 AM
here, I did it, let me know if I need to fix it as I am getting off in eight minutes, sorry.

Was looking for his lost Wolf clan, which had mysteriously disappeared, even their belongings were gone too. Shadow Fenrir was upset for he was out hunting for food and despised the fact he couldn't help his clan. He trys to sniff out any scent that they might have left behind, but to no avail. "They must've disappeared by magic.......", which he indeed does sense. He ponders of what to do and decides he best be looking for them as harm may have come to them! He sets out from the empty campground, heading east, unknowingly towards the evil Ivor.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 03:00 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 08:54 PM)
here, I did it, let me know if I need to fix it as I am getting off in eight minutes, sorry.

Was looking for his lost Wolf clan, which had mysteriously disappeared, even their belongings were gone too. Shadow Fenrir was upset for he was out hunting for food and despised the fact he couldn't help his clan. He trys to sniff out any scent that they might have left behind, but to no avail. "They must've disappeared by magic.......", which he indeed does sense. He ponders of what to do and decides he best be looking for them as harm may have come to them! He sets out from the empty campground, heading east, unknowingly towards the evil Ivor.

May I write the next part?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 12 2009, 03:07 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 11 2009, 07:54 PM)
here, I did it, let me know if I need to fix it as I am getting off in eight minutes, sorry.

Was looking for his lost Wolf clan, which had mysteriously disappeared, even their belongings were gone too. Shadow Fenrir was upset for he was out hunting for food and despised the fact he couldn't help his clan. He trys to sniff out any scent that they might have left behind, but to no avail. "They must've disappeared by magic.......", which he indeed does sense. He ponders of what to do and decides he best be looking for them as harm may have come to them! He sets out from the empty campground, heading east, unknowingly towards the evil Ivor.

"Beware! Beyond lies mortal danger for you, Shadow Fenrir." Enunk spoke. "I am Enunk, one of the few remaining Great Old Ones. I have come to warn you that Ivor, the one you seek, is not the culprit. Your clan has been taken by my mortal enemy, Teichan. Ivor is merely a collaborator in his cause. Speak to my paladin, and one of my veterans. They have the knowledge of resolving this." After Enunk spoke, Iddivh and Arus arrived. "I am Iddivh, warrior of Enunk and his former paladin." Iddivh spoke. "And I am Arus, his current paladin and champion." Arus greeted.

I'll fix any grammatical mistakes you have. The story we write shall be in bold. My fixed version of your paragraph:

Meanwhile, away from Ivor's kingdom, Shadow Fenrir was looking for his lost Wolf clan, which had mysteriously disappeared. Even their belongings were gone too. Shadow Fenrir was upset for he was out hunting for food and despised the fact he couldn't help his clan. He tries to sniff out any scent that they might have left behind, but to no avail. "They must've disappeared by magic.......” he assumed, in which he indeed does sense. He ponders of what to do and decides he best be looking for them as harm may have come to them! He sets out from the empty campground, heading east, unknowingly towards the evil Ivor.

Jailer, it's your turn!

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 09:35 PM
"Hello Shadow fernir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fernir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he follwed with a growl. " You must harness your anger, and save it for your uncomming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow fernir's blood thirsty glare. " Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

Does my part fit well with the story?

Posted by: Canus Minoris Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:11 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 09:35 PM)
"Hello Shadow fernir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fernir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he follwed with a growl. " You must harness your anger, and save it for your uncomming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow fernir's blood thirsty glare. " Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

Does my part fit well with the story?

Holy crap that was good! you did great with Shadow's speech!

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:15 PM
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 11:17 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

You got number 6 and 8 wrong. Number 6, is that it was the second question he put 5 in, and number 8 is glass.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:20 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 11:17 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

You got number 6 and 8 wrong. Number 6, is that it was the second question he put 5 in, and number 8 is glass.

How do you know this? well, at least I got an eighty, whoo hoo!

Posted by: Canus Minoris Feb 12 2009, 11:23 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

6. It actually begins with the number "5" instead of "6"

8. I thought green houses were generally made of glass...sad.gif

10. I live in Michigan.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:24 PM
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:23 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

6. It actually begins with the number "5" instead of "6"

8. I thought green houses were generally made of glass...sad.gif

10. I live in Michigan.

oh, I get it, I missed the number, I didn't know grenn houses are glass, I saw one and it isn't one. Cool, how is it there?

Posted by: Canus Minoris Feb 12 2009, 11:26 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:24 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:23 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

6. It actually begins with the number "5" instead of "6"

8. I thought green houses were generally made of glass...sad.gif

10. I live in Michigan.

oh, I get it, I missed the number, I didn't know grenn houses are glass, I saw one and it isn't one. Cool, how is it there?

The weather sucks. We just had a thaw, but that happens annually before another huge snow.

By the way, how do you know Jango does that?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:31 PM
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:26 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:24 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:23 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

6. It actually begins with the number "5" instead of "6"

8. I thought green houses were generally made of glass...sad.gif

10. I live in Michigan.

oh, I get it, I missed the number, I didn't know grenn houses are glass, I saw one and it isn't one. Cool, how is it there?

The weather sucks. We just had a thaw, but that happens annually before another huge snow.

By the way, how do you know Jango does that?

atch the second Movie of the series, he gices the changeling a pair and he keeps them somewhere, maybe on the ship, so I was just making a joke.

Posted by: Canus Minoris Feb 12 2009, 11:33 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:31 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:26 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:24 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:23 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 11:15 PM)
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 11:09 PM)
1. Do you hate me?
2. Do you believe that Red Bull gives you kidney stones?
3. Do you keep deadly parasetic larvae of extraterrestrial life forms in your sock drawer?
4. Do you believe in Bigfoot?
5. Pete and Repeat were in a boat and Pete jumped out. Who was left?
5. What is wrong with this line?
7. If I handed you fifty dollars and 43 cents, what would you do with it?
8. If a red house is made of red brick, a blue house is made of blue brick, a yellow house is made of yellow brick, a purple house is made of purple brick, and a brown house is made of brown brick, what's a green house made of?
9. What's 2 + 4000.987234590874?
10. What state do I live in?

1. No, I like you, you're cool.
2. no, atually, I don't know anything about that, other than that I don't like the drink itself.
3. Ha! no, but Jango Fett does.
4. Sometimes, according to my mood
5. Repeat was left behind
6. that its too short.
7. Save it for future games when they get cheaper.
8. Green Bricks.
9. 4002.987234590874 is the answer
10. I don't know as you have never mentioned that, at least when I'm on.

6. It actually begins with the number "5" instead of "6"

8. I thought green houses were generally made of glass...sad.gif

10. I live in Michigan.

oh, I get it, I missed the number, I didn't know grenn houses are glass, I saw one and it isn't one. Cool, how is it there?

The weather sucks. We just had a thaw, but that happens annually before another huge snow.

By the way, how do you know Jango does that?

atch the second Movie of the series, he gices the changeling a pair and he keeps them somewhere, maybe on the ship, so I was just making a joke.

OH! I GET IT!!! LOLz.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 11:34 PM
QUOTE (Canus Minoris @ Feb 12 2009, 05:33 PM)

OH! I GET IT!!! LOLz.

Quote cut dam*it!

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:38 PM
What? oh come on.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 11:41 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:38 PM)
What? oh come on.

This is a yes or no question, and anwser truthfully. Is the next word you're going to post "no"?

Posted by: Canus Minoris Feb 12 2009, 11:43 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 11:41 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:38 PM)
What? oh come on.

This is a yes or no question, and anwser truthfully. Is the next word you're going to post "no"?

Hee hee.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:45 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 11:41 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:38 PM)
What? oh come on.

This is a yes or no question, and anwser truthfully. Is the next word you're going to post "no"?

negative, captain, I must decline while accepting it at the same time, for I am conflicted within at the moment, give me some time sir and I shall be back with an answer, but wheter that is to be is unknown so don't wait for it. tongue.gif biggrin.gif nice try. laugh.gif

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 12 2009, 11:54 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:45 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 11:41 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 05:38 PM)
What? oh come on.

This is a yes or no question, and anwser truthfully. Is the next word you're going to post "no"?

negative, captain, I must decline while accepting it at the same time, for I am conflicted within at the moment, give me some time sir and I shall be back with an answer, but wheter that is to be is unknown so don't wait for it. tongue.gif biggrin.gif nice try. laugh.gif

It's a yes or no question. You can't anwser with out saying one truthfully.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 12 2009, 11:55 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 02:35 PM)
"Hello Shadow fernir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fernir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he follwed with a growl. " You must harness your anger, and save it for your uncomming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow fernir's blood thirsty glare. " Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

Does my part fit well with the story?

Great work! My fixed version:

"Hello Shadow Fenrir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fenrir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he followed with a growl. “You must harness your anger, and save it for your upcoming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow Fenrir's blood thirsty glare. “Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

I'm saving each paragraph, and revising them. Ethan, do you want to make another part?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 12 2009, 11:57 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 11:55 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 02:35 PM)
"Hello Shadow fernir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fernir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he follwed with a growl. " You must harness your anger, and save it for your uncomming quest"  Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow fernir's blood thirsty glare. " Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way." 

Does my part fit well with the story?

Great work! My fixed version:

"Hello Shadow Fenrir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fenrir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he followed with a growl. “You must harness your anger, and save it for your upcoming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow Fenrir's blood thirsty glare. “Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

I'm saving each paragraph, and revising them. Ethan, do you want to make another part?

sure, give me a while, I'm busy with a couple things, so expect it in a thirty minute or less please..

Posted by: Ethan Feb 13 2009, 12:16 AM
As Enunk finishes his sentence, Shadow Fenrir replies questionly, "Even so of all what you both have told me, how can I trust you, even me knowing of this 'Teichan' and 'Ivor', I ask you, how can I trust you?" Shadow stares into both of his newfound allies' eyes, his wolf ears twitching and shackles raised as he waits for a response. "Even with your offered assistance of the finding of my clan and family, I ask once more, how am I, Shadow Fenrir, Lord of all Wolves, supposed to trust you", Shadow speaks quickly before letting either speak, interuppting them rudely. Arus begins to speak up when Enunk hushes him and instead begins to speak,

here ya go, I do not want to muddle the way Arus and Enunk speak, Jailer you did great the way you spoke for Fenrir, please keep doing that if you are to use him. biggrin.gif

Posted by: Ethan Feb 13 2009, 12:18 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 12 2009, 11:54 PM)
It's a yes or no question. You can't anwser with out saying one truthfully.

well, I say yes

Posted by: Ethan Feb 13 2009, 12:26 AM
Ripper?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 13 2009, 12:59 AM
“I am a Great Old One. My kind is omniscient, and omnipotent. Arus, Iddivh and I are benevolent. My champion and my warrior are not here to hinder, but to help.” Enunk informed. “Also, you might want to know about Ivor and Teichan. Ivor is mortal, but Teichan is not. According to lore, Teichan is also a Great Old One, albeit the rogue of the group. Both my god Enunk, and Teichan are very powerful, and you need knowledge on what would hurt Ivor. Shadow, for instance, is not as effective, as let’s say holy light.” Iddivh added.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 13 2009, 01:04 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 13 2009, 12:59 AM)
“I am a Great Old One. My kind is omniscient, and omnipotent. Arus, Iddivh and I are benevolent. My champion and my warrior are not here to hinder, but to help.” Enunk informed. “Also, you might want to know about Ivor and Teichan. Ivor is mortal, but Teichan is not. According to lore, Teichan is also a Great Old One, albeit the rogue of the group. Both my god Enunk, and Teichan are very powerful, and you need knowledge on what would hurt Ivor. Shadow, for instance, is not as effective, as let’s say holy light.” Iddivh added.

cool, Jailer's turn. hey, how is it so far, its great! are you adding it on to your web page?

Posted by: Solomon Feb 13 2009, 01:09 AM
Ethan, remember capital letters are our friends.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 13 2009, 01:13 AM
QUOTE (Solomon @ Feb 13 2009, 01:09 AM)
Ethan, remember capital letters are our friends.

Yes, sorry, takes a while shifting habits, you know.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 13 2009, 01:39 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 12 2009, 06:04 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 13 2009, 12:59 AM)
“I am a Great Old One.  My kind is omniscient, and omnipotent.  Arus, Iddivh and I are benevolent.  My champion and my warrior are not here to hinder, but to help.” Enunk informed.  “Also, you might want to know about Ivor and Teichan.  Ivor is mortal, but Teichan is not.  According to lore, Teichan is also a Great Old One, albeit the rogue of the group.  Both my god Enunk, and Teichan are very powerful, and you need knowledge on what would hurt Ivor.  Shadow, for instance, is not as effective, as let’s say holy light.” Iddivh added.

cool, Jailer's turn. hey, how is it so far, its great! are you adding it on to your web page?

I definitely am! Lore wise, it'll kick @$$!

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 13 2009, 10:21 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 12 2009, 06:59 PM)
“I am a Great Old One.  My kind is omniscient, and omnipotent.  Arus, Iddivh and I are benevolent.  My champion and my warrior are not here to hinder, but to help.” Enunk informed.  “Also, you might want to know about Ivor and Teichan.  Ivor is mortal, but Teichan is not.  According to lore, Teichan is also a Great Old One, albeit the rogue of the group.  Both my god Enunk, and Teichan are very powerful, and you need knowledge on what would hurt Ivor.  Shadow, for instance, is not as effective, as let’s say holy light.” Iddivh added.

“That’s not good enough for me, but it doesn't matter since I don't need your help", that was all Shadow Fernir said, as he went past the group. “Hold on" spoke Iddivh, as he put his hand on Fernir's shoulder, " You need our help for Teichan." All of a sudden, Fernir grabbed Iddivh's arm, and pushed him, roaring “GET OUT OF MY WAY!" Enunk quickly set up a force field to stop any harm that may have come to Iddivh. Shadow Fernir took this time to take to the trees, as he snarled, “If you get in my way of saving my clan again, I won’t be as generous as I was now." He then left, leaping from tree top to tree top. “He sure is stubborn", Arus remarked. “You have much to learn young Paladin" spoke Enunk. “He is merely blinded by his ambition of finding his clan."

Meanwhile, Shadow fernir had come back to the ground, “Lets see them followed me after I covered my tracks", and sure enough, his tracks were perfectly covered. “Darn people, now I have to regain my direction." Shadow fernir then paused, as he smelled something, and what he smelled was similar to his wolf clan. “But that's impossible; I couldn't smell them a while back." Suddenly, the smell disappeared. fernir, furious in his blinding rage, grabbed a bolder a crushed it to pieces. “I swear that I will kill the one behind this!" Enunk sensed the anger from far away, “it seems that our friend is heading towards Ivor after all." Iddivh spoke, “Should we wait till he needs our help in battle." Arus agreed saying that Fernir couldn't resist our help when it was needed. "No”, spoke Enunk,” Shadow fernir is an honorable warrior, it would be disgraceful to request help in the heat of battle, although, we will follow him. If Teichan is related in this matter, it won’t turn out well." Ivor was back in his castle, as a servant reported to him. “Sire, there seems to be a disturbance in the forest." Your news is of no surprise to me" retorted Ivor. “The so called lord of the wolves shall be headed this way."

Ivor dismissed his servant. “Teichan, what matters have you gotten me into?” Ivor asked himself. “These pesky affairs are not something that I should be dealing with. I should make note to send my elite warriors to the depths of the forest. Yes, that’s it; take care of the problem before it begins. “Majesty” spoke Ivor’s servant, interrupting his train of thought. “Well, what is it!” fumed Ivor, obviously mad that he was interrupted. “Well, the Wolf is drawing closer. "Yes I know that you fool!" But, sire, it seems that Enunk is in the forest as well. Is that all? Yes sire. Then be gone with you. Ivor’s servant was slowly leaving, but then, a sword whizzed through the air, and into his heart. The servant soon fell. “That’ll teach him to interrupt me", laughed Ivor.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 14 2009, 02:13 AM
Well, for Ivor killing his servant, he would not do that without him failing many times. He's not a savage dictator. I'll edit, as I feel it's a bit out of his character.

My fixed version:

“That’s not good enough for me, but it doesn't matter since I don't need your help", that was all Shadow Fenrir said, as he went past the group. “Hold on." spoke Iddivh, as he put his hand on Shadow Fenrir's shoulder, “You need our help for Teichan." All of a sudden, Fenrir grabbed Iddivh's arm, and pushed him, roaring “GET OUT OF MY WAY!" Enunk quickly set up a force field to stop any harm that may have come to Iddivh. Shadow Fenrir took this time to take to the trees, as he snarled, “If you get in my way of saving my clan again, I won’t be as generous as I was now." He then left, leaping from tree top to tree top. “He sure is stubborn", Arus remarked. “You have much to learn young Paladin" spoke Enunk. “He is merely blinded by his ambition of finding his clan."

Meanwhile, Shadow Fenrir had come back to the ground, “Lets see them followed me after I covered my tracks", and sure enough, his tracks were perfectly covered. “Darn people, now I have to regain my direction." Shadow Fenrir then paused, as he smelled something, and what he smelled was similar to his wolf clan. “But that's impossible. I couldn't smell them a while back." Suddenly, the smell disappeared. Fenrir, furious in his blinding rage, grabbed a bolder a crushed it to pieces. “I swear that I will kill the one behind this!" Enunk sensed the anger from far away, “it seems that our friend is heading towards Ivor after all." Iddivh spoke, “Should we wait till he needs our help in battle." Arus agreed saying that Fenrir couldn't resist our help when it was needed. "No”, spoke Enunk,” Shadow Fenrir is an honorable warrior, it would be disgraceful to request help in the heat of battle, although, we will follow him. If Teichan is related in this matter, it won’t turn out well." Ivor was back in his castle, as a servant reported to him. “Sire, there seems to be a disturbance in the forest." The servant informed. “Your news is of no surprise to me" retorted Ivor. “The so called ‘Lord of the Wolves’ shall be headed this way."

Ivor dismissed his servant. “Teichan, what matters have you gotten me into?” Ivor asked himself. “These pesky affairs are not something that I should be dealing with. I should make note to send my elite warriors to the depths of the forest. Yes, that’s it. Take care of the problem before it begins. “Majesty” spoke Ivor’s servant, interrupting his train of thought. “Well, what is it!” fumed Ivor, obviously mad that he was interrupted. “Well, the Wolf is drawing closer.””Yes I know that you fool!" “But, sire, it seems that Enunk is in the forest as well. “ ”Is that all?” Ivor spoke impatiently “Yes sire.”
“Then be gone with you.” Ivor’s servant was slowly leaving, but then, his sword, Flamesorrow, whizzed through the air, and near his heart. “That’ll teach him to interrupt me", laughed Ivor.


My turn:

Ivor's elite soldiers searched through the forest. They were second in power to Ivor's bodyguards. "What's this? Enemy over there, attack immediately!" commanded the leader when he saw Shadow Fenrir. Shadow Fenrir unleashes his shadow bolts on the soldiers, but as the soldiers were around Ivor's influence, they had an unusual resistance to shadow. "To kill you without shadow? I'll do it brutally!" he snarled as he charged at the soldiers, unleashing his fangs and teeth. The elite soldiers drew out their weapons. The each wielded a sword, and axe, a flail, a bow, a poleaxe, and throwing knives. Knowing he is a werewolf, they enhanced their weapons with silver. Shadow Fenrir charged. He first attacked the axemen, but their brute force proved to be a challenge. Shadow Fenrir then leaped on one of them and mauled him.

Ethan, it's your turn!

Posted by: Ethan Feb 14 2009, 03:46 AM
Wait, the "Bolder a crushed part" makes no sense. is it supposed to be boulder and crushed it? I'll fix some too, like the Lord of the wolves is supposed to be Lord of All Wolves, man now I'm starting to sound and feel bossy. wacko.gif anyways, my next part! da da da taaaa!!!! tongue.gif

As he was mauling the first man he lept on, the other axe warriors tried to slay him to save their comrades. Shadow swung his massive arms with his clawed hands open straight out, cleaving one in half. As he did this, he grabbed the one he had mauled and tossed him into a flail wielding warrior. Shadow Fenrir then let his rage within take over as he wished to end this quickly. He warped behind a unsuspecting poleaxe soldier and gripped his head, crushing it and used his free hand to grab the weapon of the soldier. He then impaled one through the chest, "Aaaarrrrroooohhhhh!!!!!". The howling savage then threw the poleaxe, still with the dead being pierced on it, at another and impaled him into a tree. As the Lord of all Wolves waged war on the battalion of warriors of Ivor, he slowly regained control over his emotion. Shadow Fenrir roars, "Enough, this ends now! You will die tonight!", as he said this, he launched himself into the air, away from his foes. The remaining soldiers were surprised of what he had done and thought he was trying to flee, they gave chase. Shadow ascended through the air, his mouth filling with pure silver white energy, He was preparing his Lunar Howl. "Foolish mortals, you will rue the day you tried to kill the Lord of all Wolves and failed in the deepest depths of Hell!!!!", Shadow spoke still with the holy energy in his mouth.

Please fix some, Ripper, please spruce it up a bit, not much, I am wicked tired and wanted to do a part before sleeping, thanks. Jailer's turn.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 14 2009, 04:07 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 13 2009, 09:46 PM)
Wait, the "Bolder a crushed part" makes no sense. is it supposed to be boulder and crushed it? I'll fix some too, like the Lord of the wolves is supposed to be Lord of All Wolves, man now I'm starting to sound and feel bossy. wacko.gif  anyways, my next part! da da da taaaa!!!!  tongue.gif

As he was mauling the first man he lept on, the other axe warriors tried to slay him to save their comrades. Shadow swung his massive arms with his clawed hands open straight out, cleaving one in half. As he did this, he grabbed the one he had mauled and tossed him into a flail wielding warrior. Shadow Fenrir then let his rage within take over as he wished to end this quickly. He warped behind a unsuspecting poleaxe soldier and gripped his head, crushing it and used his free hand to grab the weapon of the soldier. He then impaled one through the chest, "Aaaarrrrroooohhhhh!!!!!". The howling savage then threw the poleaxe, still with the dead being pierced on it, at another and impaled him into a tree. As the Lord of all Wolves waged war on the battalion of warriors of Ivor, he slowly regained control over his emotion. Shadow Fenrir roars, "Enough, this ends now! You will die tonight!", as he said this, he launched himself into the air, away from his foes. The remaining soldiers were surprised of what he had done and thought he was trying to flee, they gave chase. Shadow ascended through the air, his mouth filling with pure silver white energy, He was preparing his Lunar Howl. "Foolish mortals, you will rue the day you tried to kill the Lord of all Wolves and failed in the deepest depths of Hell!!!!", Shadow spoke still with the holy energy in his mouth.

Please fix some, Ripper, please spruce it up a bit, not much, I am wicked tired and wanted to do a part before sleeping, thanks. Jailer's turn.

Shadow Fernir was about to let out his Lunar Howl, when an idea came to him. While he was in midair, he did a masterful backflip, onto the nearest tree. Ivor's soilders, trained to show no mercy, followed their opponent to the tree tops. The second round was on, and it was apparent that fernir had the advantage. Right as an axe came out of nowhere, he leapt up in the air, leaving the axe to plunge into the enemy behind him. " Foolish mortals, following me into the trees. Your death will be enjoyable." He then let out a massive Lunar Howl, aimed staight for the ground. " He missed!" screamed the soilders, as they prepared to charge. Suddenly, the trees started to vibrtae rapidly. BOOOOOMMMM!!!! All of the trees around them, instantly exploded, throwing the tree tops hundreds of feet into the air. Shadow fernir, with his trained leg muscles, leapt above them, and let out one more Lunar Howl, that smashed his opponent straight to the ground. Impaling them on scattered pieces of wood.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 14 2009, 04:17 AM
Here's everything so far:



As Ivor, the King of Darkness reigned across his land that he earned, a strange message arrived from one of his messengers. "Sire, a dragon god by the name Teichan offers you great wealth, as long as you do him a favor. He asks you to help Enunk be defeated, as long as her lover, Elextra." The messenger spoke. "I will consider it. Since I'm not sure how strong they are, I will send my strongest warriors in my place." Ivor responded.

Meanwhile, away from Ivor's kingdom, Shadow Fenrir was looking for his lost Wolf clan, which had mysteriously disappeared. Even their belongings were gone too. Shadow Fenrir was upset for he was out hunting for food and despised the fact he couldn't help his clan. He tries to sniff out any scent that they might have left behind, but to no avail. "They must've disappeared by magic.......” he assumed, in which he indeed does sense. He ponders of what to do and decides he best be looking for them as harm may have come to them! He sets out from the empty campground, heading east, unknowingly towards the evil Ivor.

"Hello Shadow Fenrir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fenrir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he followed with a growl. “You must harness your anger, and save it for your upcoming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow Fenrir's blood thirsty glare. “Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

As Enunk finishes his sentence, Shadow Fenrir replies questionly, "Even so of all what you both have told me, how can I trust you, even me knowing of this 'Teichan' and 'Ivor', I ask you, how can I trust you?" Shadow stares into both of his newfound allies' eyes, his wolf ears twitching and shackles raised as he waits for a response. "Even with your offered assistance of the finding of my clan and family, I ask once more, how am I, Shadow Fenrir, Lord of all Wolves, supposed to trust you", Shadow speaks quickly before letting either speak, interuppting them rudely. Arus begins to speak up when Enunk hushes him and instead begins to speak, “I am a Great Old One. My kind is omniscient, and omnipotent. Arus, Iddivh and I are benevolent. My champion and my warrior are not here to hinder, but to help.” Enunk informed. “Also, you might want to know about Ivor and Teichan. Ivor is mortal, but Teichan is not. According to lore, Teichan is also a Great Old One, albeit the rogue of the group. Both my god Enunk, and Teichan are very powerful, and you need knowledge on what would hurt Ivor. Shadow, for instance, is not as effective, as let’s say holy light.” Iddivh added.

“That’s not good enough for me, but it doesn't matter since I don't need your help", that was all Shadow Fenrir said, as he went past the group. “Hold on." spoke Iddivh, as he put his hand on Shadow Fenrir's shoulder, “You need our help for Teichan." All of a sudden, Fenrir grabbed Iddivh's arm, and pushed him, roaring “GET OUT OF MY WAY!" Enunk quickly set up a force field to stop any harm that may have come to Iddivh. Shadow Fenrir took this time to take to the trees, as he snarled, “If you get in my way of saving my clan again, I won’t be as generous as I was now." He then left, leaping from tree top to tree top. “He sure is stubborn", Arus remarked. “You have much to learn young Paladin" spoke Enunk. “He is merely blinded by his ambition of finding his clan."

Meanwhile, Shadow Fenrir had come back to the ground, “Lets see them followed me after I covered my tracks", and sure enough, his tracks were perfectly covered. “Darn people, now I have to regain my direction." Shadow Fenrir then paused, as he smelled something, and what he smelled was similar to his wolf clan. “But that's impossible. I couldn't smell them a while back." Suddenly, the smell disappeared. Fenrir, furious in his blinding rage, grabbed a bolder a crushed it to pieces. “I swear that I will kill the one behind this!" Enunk sensed the anger from far away, “it seems that our friend is heading towards Ivor after all." Iddivh spoke, “Should we wait till he needs our help in battle." Arus agreed saying that Fenrir couldn't resist our help when it was needed. "No”, spoke Enunk,” Shadow Fenrir is an honorable warrior, it would be disgraceful to request help in the heat of battle, although, we will follow him. If Teichan is related in this matter, it won’t turn out well." Ivor was back in his castle, as a servant reported to him. “Sire, there seems to be a disturbance in the forest." The servant informed. “Your news is of no surprise to me" retorted Ivor. “The so called ‘Lord of the Wolves’ shall be headed this way."

Ivor dismissed his servant. “Teichan, what matters have you gotten me into?” Ivor asked himself. “These pesky affairs are not something that I should be dealing with. I should make note to send my elite warriors to the depths of the forest. Yes, that’s it. Take care of the problem before it begins. “Majesty” spoke Ivor’s servant, interrupting his train of thought. “Well, what is it!” fumed Ivor, obviously mad that he was interrupted. “Well, the Wolf is drawing closer.””Yes I know that you fool!" “But, sire, it seems that Enunk is in the forest as well. “ ”Is that all?” Ivor spoke impatiently “Yes sire.”
“Then be gone with you.” Ivor’s servant was slowly leaving, but then, his sword, Flamesorrow, whizzed through the air, and near his heart. “That’ll teach him to interrupt me", laughed Ivor.

Ivor's elite soldiers searched through the forest. They were second in power to Ivor's bodyguards. "What's this? Enemy over there, attack immediately!" commanded the leader when he saw Shadow Fenrir. Shadow Fenrir unleashes his shadow bolts on the soldiers, but as the soldiers were around Ivor's influence, they had an unusual resistance to shadow. "To kill you without shadow? I'll do it brutally!" he snarled as he charged at the soldiers, unleashing his fangs and teeth. The elite soldiers drew out their weapons. The each wielded a sword, and axe, a flail, a bow, a poleaxe, and throwing knives. Knowing he is a werewolf, they enhanced their weapons with silver. Shadow Fenrir charged. He first attacked the axemen, but their brute force proved to be a challenge. Shadow Fenrir then leaped on one of them and mauled him.

As he was mauling the first man he lept on, the other axe warriors tried to slay him to save their comrades. Shadow swung his massive arms with his clawed hands open straight out, cleaving one in half. As he did this, he grabbed the one he had mauled and tossed him into a flail wielding warrior. Shadow Fenrir then let his rage within take over as he wished to end this quickly. He warped behind a unsuspecting poleaxe soldier and gripped his head, crushing it and used his free hand to grab the weapon of the soldier. He then impaled one through the chest, "Aaaarrrrroooohhhhh!!!!!". The howling savage then threw the poleaxe, still with the dead being pierced on it, at another and impaled him into a tree. As the Lord of all Wolves waged war on the battalion of warriors of Ivor, he slowly regained control over his emotion. Shadow Fenrir roars, "Enough, this ends now! You will die tonight!", as he said this, he launched himself into the air, away from his foes. The remaining soldiers were surprised of what he had done and thought he was trying to flee, they gave chase. Shadow ascended through the air, his mouth filling with pure silver white energy, He was preparing his Lunar Howl. "Foolish mortals, you will rue the day you tried to kill the Lord of all Wolves and failed in the deepest depths of Hell!!!!", Shadow spoke still with the holy energy in his mouth.

Shadow Fernir was about to let out his Lunar Howl, when an idea came to him. While he was in midair, he did a masterful backflip, onto the nearest tree. Ivor's soilders, trained to show no mercy, followed their opponent to the tree tops. The second round was on, and it was apparent that fernir had the advantage. Right as an axe came out of nowhere, he leapt up in the air, leaving the axe to plunge into the enemy behind him. " Foolish mortals, following me into the trees. Your death will be enjoyable." He then let out a massive Lunar Howl, aimed staight for the ground. " He missed!" screamed the soilders, as they prepared to charge. Suddenly, the trees started to vibrtae rapidly. BOOOOOMMMM!!!! All of the trees around them, instantly exploded, throwing the tree tops hundreds of feet into the air. Shadow fernir, with his trained leg muscles, leapt above them, and let out one more Lunar Howl, that smashed his opponent straight to the ground. Impaling them on scattered pieces of wood.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 14 2009, 05:13 AM
Shall we make him fight Ivor? If so, my turn. Let me fix some stuff, then I'll put my part. Fun story, isn't it?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 14 2009, 04:40 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 14 2009, 05:13 AM)
Shall we make him fight Ivor? If so, my turn. Let me fix some stuff, then I'll put my part. Fun story, isn't it?

Alright, very good so far! Jailer, I've been noticing you write Shadow Fenrir's name Fernir, please be careful next time, thanks. Now, Ripper, I have an idea, how about before we have Shadow use the direction of the soldiers to find Ivor, how about some commentary from Enunk and Aru and Iddivh as well as parts of them tracking Shadow? then we go to the break in of the castle, the slaughtering of Ivor's small army, than the battle itself? this seems to be a good idea as it ties everything and everyone in the story so far together and make it flow smoothly. please share your ideas with me as I waqnt to try to make this a kickass lore.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 14 2009, 05:07 PM
I have a possible idea. Shadow fenrir becomes do mad, that eventually, the wolf half of his body completely takes over. You know, like a beserker mode.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 14 2009, 05:14 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 14 2009, 05:07 PM)
I have a possible idea. Shadow fenrir becomes do mad, that eventually, the wolf half of his body completely takes over. You know, like a beserker mode.

Yeah, that's a good idea. But he is both the wolf and human. Alright, like I used his rage emotion to boost him, how about him giving into his wolf instincts, like letting the body take over? that'll work, this still works with your idea, is this okay Jailer, because I do not want to pass Shadow off like a normal frenzying werewolf, you know?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 14 2009, 07:57 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 13 2009, 09:46 PM)
Wait, the "Bolder a crushed part" makes no sense. is it supposed to be boulder and crushed it? I'll fix some too, like the Lord of the wolves is supposed to be Lord of All Wolves, man now I'm starting to sound and feel bossy. wacko.gif  anyways, my next part! da da da taaaa!!!!  tongue.gif

As he was mauling the first man he lept on, the other axe warriors tried to slay him to save their comrades. Shadow swung his massive arms with his clawed hands open straight out, cleaving one in half. As he did this, he grabbed the one he had mauled and tossed him into a flail wielding warrior. Shadow Fenrir then let his rage within take over as he wished to end this quickly. He warped behind a unsuspecting poleaxe soldier and gripped his head, crushing it and used his free hand to grab the weapon of the soldier. He then impaled one through the chest, "Aaaarrrrroooohhhhh!!!!!". The howling savage then threw the poleaxe, still with the dead being pierced on it, at another and impaled him into a tree. As the Lord of all Wolves waged war on the battalion of warriors of Ivor, he slowly regained control over his emotion. Shadow Fenrir roars, "Enough, this ends now! You will die tonight!", as he said this, he launched himself into the air, away from his foes. The remaining soldiers were surprised of what he had done and thought he was trying to flee, they gave chase. Shadow ascended through the air, his mouth filling with pure silver white energy, He was preparing his Lunar Howl. "Foolish mortals, you will rue the day you tried to kill the Lord of all Wolves and failed in the deepest depths of Hell!!!!", Shadow spoke still with the holy energy in his mouth.

Please fix some, Ripper, please spruce it up a bit, not much, I am wicked tired and wanted to do a part before sleeping, thanks. Jailer's turn.

Shadow Fernir was about to let out his Lunar Howl, when an idea came to him. While he was in midair, he did a masterful backflip, onto the nearest tree. Ivor's soilders, trained to show no mercy, followed their opponent to the tree tops. The second round was on, and it was apparent that fernir had the advantage. Right as an axe came out of nowhere, he leapt up in the air, leaving the axe to plunge into the enemy behind him. " Foolish mortals, following me into the trees. Your death will be enjoyable." He then let out a massive Lunar Howl, aimed staight for the ground. " He missed!" screamed the soilders, as they prepared to charge. Suddenly, the trees started to vibrtae rapidly. BOOOOOMMMM!!!! All of the trees around them, instantly exploded, throwing the tree tops hundreds of feet into the air. Shadow fernir, with his trained leg muscles, leapt above them, and let out one more Lunar Howl, that smashed his opponent straight to the ground. Impaling them on scattered pieces of wood.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 14 2009, 08:54 PM
After the battle, Shadow Fenrir smelled the air to see which direction they came from. "Must be there in the north!" He growled. "He is stronger than I have thought." Arus spoke as he observed. "As I said before, he is a mighty warrior. He could have some honor, but he is blinded by his ambition." Enunk spoke. "We have to assist him in case Teichan gets involved. It's always good to prepare for the worst." Iddivh suggested. The three then followed Shadow Fenrir. "What are you doing here? This is MY fight, not yours!" he snarled. Honorable Shadow Fenrir, you must know about Teichan's powers. If he gets involved, we must intervene!" Iddivh protested. "I don't think he'll be involved, not he knows my true powers!" Shadow Fenrir snarled again. Shadow Fenrir then broke down the door. "It's quiet, too quiet." Arus observed. All of a sudden, Shadow Fenrir was ambushed by Ivor's bodyguards, which are immensely more powerful than the soldiers that he previously fought.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 14 2009, 10:23 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 14 2009, 08:54 PM)
After the battle, Shadow Fenrir smelled the air to see which direction they came from.  "Must be there in the north!" He growled.  "He is stronger than I have thought." Arus spoke as he observed.  "As I said before, he is a mighty warrior.  He could have some honor, but he is blinded by his ambition." Enunk spoke.  "We have to assist him in case Teichan gets involved.  It's always good to prepare for the worst." Iddivh suggested.  The three then followed Shadow Fenrir.  "What are you doing here?  This is MY fight, not yours!" he snarled.  Honorable Shadow Fenrir, you must know about Teichan's powers.  If he gets involved, we must intervene!" Iddivh protested.  "I don't think he'll be involved, not he knows my true powers!" Shadow Fenrir snarled again.  Shadow Fenrir then broke down the door.  "It's quiet, too quiet." Arus observed.  All of a sudden, Shadow Fenrir was ambushed by Ivor's bodyguards, which are immensely more powerful than the soldiers that he previously fought.

"Humph! Guess its time for me to get serious! Slightly that is!" Shadow Fenrir roared as he warped behind one of his foes. Shadow then stabbed his massive fist through the foe's back, the fist exiting through the chest. Shadow then pulled out his arm as one of the soldiers charged him, managing to wound him by slashing his calf, leaving a small gash. "Grrr!!! They're faster and stronger!!! No matter, I will find my lost clan at the espenses of your lives!!!" Shadow howled. He then sees Arus and Iddivh attempting to assist Shadow as Enunk hanged back, providing support to his warrior and champion. "What have I told you over and over again!! Stay out of my affairs!!!" Shadow growled as he decapitated a soldier with his sharp claws.

This is getting gory, eh?

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 14 2009, 11:49 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 03:23 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 14 2009, 08:54 PM)
After the battle, Shadow Fenrir smelled the air to see which direction they came from.  "Must be there in the north!" He growled.  "He is stronger than I have thought." Arus spoke as he observed.  "As I said before, he is a mighty warrior.  He could have some honor, but he is blinded by his ambition." Enunk spoke.  "We have to assist him in case Teichan gets involved.  It's always good to prepare for the worst." Iddivh suggested.  The three then followed Shadow Fenrir.  "What are you doing here?  This is MY fight, not yours!" he snarled.  Honorable Shadow Fenrir, you must know about Teichan's powers.  If he gets involved, we must intervene!" Iddivh protested.  "I don't think he'll be involved, not he knows my true powers!" Shadow Fenrir snarled again.  Shadow Fenrir then broke down the door.  "It's quiet, too quiet." Arus observed.  All of a sudden, Shadow Fenrir was ambushed by Ivor's bodyguards, which are immensely more powerful than the soldiers that he previously fought.

"Humph! Guess its time for me to get serious! Slightly that is!" Shadow Fenrir roared as he warped behind one of his foes. Shadow then stabbed his massive fist through the foe's back, the fist exiting through the chest. Shadow then pulled out his arm as one of the soldiers charged him, managing to wound him by slashing his calf, leaving a small gash. "Grrr!!! They're faster and stronger!!! No matter, I will find my lost clan at the espenses of your lives!!!" Shadow howled. He then sees Arus and Iddivh attempting to assist Shadow as Enunk hanged back, providing support to his warrior and champion. "What have I told you over and over again!! Stay out of my affairs!!!" Shadow growled as he decapitated a soldier with his sharp claws.

This is getting gory, eh?

"Shadow Fenrir listen! Without our interference, you will DIE like an animal!" Iddivh justified. "You mean I'll-WHAT?!? DIE LIKE AN ANIMAL? Human, you annoy me to a poi--AHHHH!" Shadow Fenrir roared in pain as he got stabbed in the back by a halberd wielding guard. The same guard attempted to finish off Shadow Fenrir, but Iddivh blocked the attack and swung his axe, killing him. "These guards are very tough, and will stop at nothing to protect their king." Arus reminded.

Jailer, it's your turn! For Ethan, he was caught offguard.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 15 2009, 05:21 AM
"I will not die stripped of my honor, I will die a warrior!" Fenrir bellowed. Fenrir charged into five oncomming guards. One of the guards charged with a sword, but it was easy for Fenrir to side step the blow. He stuck his arm out, close lining the guards chest as he jumped in the air. " I can handle these pathetic fools" growled Fenrir. " Fenrir!" Arus cried out, but it was too late, archer guard poured through the doors. Their target was alike, Fenrir. The lord of all wolves couldn't avoid arrows in the air, because they were going to fast. They whizzed by, cutting through the outline of his body. This wasn't enough to stop him, for Fenrir used the guard that he had in the air as a shield.

As soon as he landed, he rushed the guards, making a huge mistake. The guards took aim and shot, Fenrir had to warp behind them, barely escaping. " Perfect" he thought to himself, as he attempted to attack them from behind. this was mistake number two, guard with axes rushed through the doors behind Fenrir, swinging away at his back. At this point, only Shadow fenrir's shadow armor protected him, but it was breaking. " Enough" Enunk spoke, " Iddivh, Arus, take stance to help Fenrir". " NO" yelled fenrir, who still wanted to die a warrior. " Fenrir, I know that you have won countless of battles on your own, but this time is different, your clan is what you're fighting for", and to Fenrir's disgust, he realized that Enunk was right.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 05:37 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 14 2009, 10:21 PM)
"I will not die stripped of my honor, I will die a warrior!" Fenrir bellowed. Fenrir charged into five oncomming guards. One of the guards charged with a sword, but it was easy for Fenrir to side step the blow. He stuck his arm out, close lining the guards chest as he jumped in the air. " I can handle these pathetic fools" growled Fenrir. " Fenrir!" Arus cried out, but it was too late, archer guard poured through the doors. Their target was alike, Fenrir. The lord of all wolves couldn't avoid arrows in the air, because they were going to fast. They whizzed by, cutting through the outline of his body. This wasn't enough to stop him, for Fenrir used the guard that he had in the air as a shield.

As soon as he landed, he rushed the guards, making a huge mistake. The guards took aim and shot, Fenrir had to warp behind them, barely escaping. " Perfect" he thought to himself, as he attempted to attack them from behind. this was mistake number two, guard with axes rushed through the doors behind Fenrir, swinging away at his back. At this point, only Shadow fenrir's shadow armor protected him, but it was breaking. " Enough" Enunk spoke, " Iddivh, Arus, take stance to help Fenrir". " NO" yelled fenrir, who still wanted to die a warrior. " Fenrir, I know that you have won countless of battles on your own, but this time is different, your clan is what you're fighting for", and to Fenrir's disgust, he realized that Enunk was right.

Ethan's turn! Sorry Ethan, but if it weren't for him listening to Enunk, Iddivh, and Arus, we would have died like an animal, as the guards were tough, and numerous.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:14 AM
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 15 2009, 06:19 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:14 AM)
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

You just overpowered yourself sleep.gif And I don't think that Iddivh would react like that. He's a trained warrior, Arus is strong but inexpirenced.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:22 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 06:19 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:14 AM)
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

You just overpowered yourself sleep.gif And I don't think that Iddivh would react like that. He's a trained warrior, Arus is strong but inexpirenced.

dry.gif He used his Shadow Warp in a way that it enables him to move fast instead of warping to one spot. if you want, I'll fix it, I'm sorry for the misuse of Arus and Iddivh, I am not that familar with them as you and Ripper are.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:23 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 06:22 AM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 06:19 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:14 AM)
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

You just overpowered yourself sleep.gif And I don't think that Iddivh would react like that. He's a trained warrior, Arus is strong but inexpirenced.

dry.gif He used his Shadow Warp in a way that it enables him to move fast instead of warping to one spot. if you want, I'll fix it, I'm sorry for the misuse of Arus and Iddivh, I am not that familar with them as you and Ripper are.

also, on a added note, let Ripper see it first so I can have his opinion, sorry, Jailer.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 06:27 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:14 PM)
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Oh, and as for Ivor, I'll do his attacks. Ethan, you do Shadow's attacks, and Jailer, you may be Enunk, Iddivh, and Arus giving advice.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 06:28 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:23 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 06:22 AM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 06:19 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:14 AM)
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

You just overpowered yourself sleep.gif And I don't think that Iddivh would react like that. He's a trained warrior, Arus is strong but inexpirenced.

dry.gif He used his Shadow Warp in a way that it enables him to move fast instead of warping to one spot. if you want, I'll fix it, I'm sorry for the misuse of Arus and Iddivh, I am not that familar with them as you and Ripper are.

also, on a added note, let Ripper see it first so I can have his opinion, sorry, Jailer.

I'll fix that. I'll make Iddivh acknowledge that by saying, "That was a smart move."

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:29 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 06:27 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:14 PM)
Oh, he got hurt, no problem, makes him seem more human, you know?

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Iddivh cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves!!", Arus yelled out. "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Iddivh remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth.

"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Oh, and as for Ivor, I'll do his attacks. Ethan, you do Shadow's attacks, and Jailer, you may be Enunk, Iddivh, and Arus giving advice.

Um, what did you think of the way I used Iddivh and Arus, Jailer here said I used them wrongly and overpowered myself, I wanted to be sure I get it all straighten out before continuing on.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 06:31 AM
As Jailer said, Arus is strong, but inexperienced. He would be more impressed than Iddivh. Iddivh would laud Shadow Fenrir for his smart move, as he's a seasoned warrior like Shadow Fenrir. The gaurds would not be a match for a seasoned, experienced warrior like Iddivh.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:39 AM
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 06:48 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:39 PM)
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

"I can make shadow too!" Ivor mocked as he unleashed Flamesorrow, covering his sword with fire and shadow. He then teleported behind Shadow Fenrir and swung Flamesorrow vertically with great force.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 15 2009, 06:49 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:39 AM)
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

Arus won't be that shocked, he has the Griffon's sacred energy, remember? But, I'll let it slide.

Posted by: nicker Feb 15 2009, 06:50 AM
Hey guys not to impose but could Noob and Smoke fight Fenir too?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 15 2009, 06:52 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 12:48 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:39 PM)
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

"I can make shadow too!" Ivor mocked as he unleashed Flamesorrow, covering his sword with fire and shadow. He then teleported behind Shadow Fenrir and swung Flamesorrow vertically with great force.

" Your shadows wont be as effective on Ivor!" exclaimed Iddivh, " You must not rely only on them."

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 04:43 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 06:49 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:39 AM)
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

Arus won't be that shocked, he has the Griffon's sacred energy, remember? But, I'll let it slide.

dry.gif Avenger's never been in the story all along, I thought you got him after Fenrir's death, around his Grandson, Kin Wulf's time, in the RP? and like what Ripper said, he is inexperinced so he will be shocked a little.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 04:49 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 06:52 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 12:48 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:39 PM)
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

"I can make shadow too!" Ivor mocked as he unleashed Flamesorrow, covering his sword with fire and shadow. He then teleported behind Shadow Fenrir and swung Flamesorrow vertically with great force.

" Your shadows wont be as effective on Ivor!" exclaimed Iddivh, " You must not rely only on them."

Fenrir warped ahead, dodging the blow and catching the blade still in the air with his claws as he instantly warped back. "So I see but are you good as I am as I have used them for thousands of years!?" Shadow challenged, gripping the dark, fiery blade with his own shadowed claw. Shadow Fenrir charges his Lunar Howl quickly, in an attempt to destroy the sword's unholy properties with the holy blast.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 05:41 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 09:49 AM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 06:52 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 12:48 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 14 2009, 11:39 PM)
alright, fixing it.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk.  "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

here, I did what you were going to do and switched some roles around to blend in with the personas of Iddivh and Arus. now to


"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically.

Alright, time for the battle.

"How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him.

"I can make shadow too!" Ivor mocked as he unleashed Flamesorrow, covering his sword with fire and shadow. He then teleported behind Shadow Fenrir and swung Flamesorrow vertically with great force.

" Your shadows wont be as effective on Ivor!" exclaimed Iddivh, " You must not rely only on them."

Fenrir warped ahead, dodging the blow and catching the blade still in the air with his claws as he instantly warped back. "So I see but are you good as I am as I have used them for thousands of years!?" Shadow challenged, gripping the dark, fiery blade with his own shadowed claw. Shadow Fenrir charges his Lunar Howl quickly, in an attempt to destroy the sword's unholy properties with the holy blast.

Ivor blocked the lunar wave, and it survived, as Flamesorrow is purely fire. The shadows he enhanced the sword with has worn out by the holiness. "Can you also wield fire, puppy?" Ivor taunted. Ivor engulfed his blade, and fired a blazing coil of fire at Shadow Fenrir.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:31 PM
"No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 06:49 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:31 AM)
"No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

"Remember the deal. You may become my rug, but we can certainly go forever. I cannot wait for a wolf-skin rug!" Ivor replied slyly, as he fired a fireball out of Flamesorrow.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 06:58 PM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 06:49 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:31 AM)
"No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

"Remember the deal. You may become my rug, but we can certainly go forever. I cannot wait for a wolf-skin rug!" Ivor replied slyly, as he fired a fireball out of Flamesorrow.

Shadow, thinking cleverly, warped as the fireball hit him, bringing it with him as he warped behind Ivor. "Here's an early gift, you fool!", Shadow howled as he punched through the fireball hitting Ivor with a dark fiery hand.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 15 2009, 07:06 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:58 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 06:49 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:31 AM)
"No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

"Remember the deal. You may become my rug, but we can certainly go forever. I cannot wait for a wolf-skin rug!" Ivor replied slyly, as he fired a fireball out of Flamesorrow.

Shadow, thinking cleverly, warped as the fireball hit him, bringing it with him as he warped behind Ivor. "Here's an early gift, you fool!", Shadow howled as he punched through the fireball hitting Ivor with a dark fiery hand.

"Remember that he has the power of fire" Enunk spoke, " You'll only hurt him a little by using his attacks.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 15 2009, 07:09 PM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 15 2009, 07:06 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 12:58 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 06:49 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:31 AM)
"No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

"Remember the deal. You may become my rug, but we can certainly go forever. I cannot wait for a wolf-skin rug!" Ivor replied slyly, as he fired a fireball out of Flamesorrow.

Shadow, thinking cleverly, warped as the fireball hit him, bringing it with him as he warped behind Ivor. "Here's an early gift, you fool!", Shadow howled as he punched through the fireball hitting Ivor with a dark fiery hand.

"Remember that he has the power of fire" Enunk spoke, " You'll only hurt him a little by using his attacks.

"So? Any damage helps as I was just merely using my fist to hurt him mainly!!!" Fenrir responded.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 15 2009, 07:18 PM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:58 AM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 15 2009, 06:49 PM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:31 AM)
"No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

"Remember the deal. You may become my rug, but we can certainly go forever. I cannot wait for a wolf-skin rug!" Ivor replied slyly, as he fired a fireball out of Flamesorrow.

Shadow, thinking cleverly, warped as the fireball hit him, bringing it with him as he warped behind Ivor. "Here's an early gift, you fool!", Shadow howled as he punched through the fireball hitting Ivor with a dark fiery hand.

Ivor quickly sensed the attack and turned around. He was pushed back by the blow, resulting in a tiny burn. "I actually felt that! Prepare to see my true powers!" Ivor roared. He charged himself up with both shadow and fire, and gave a punch with fire and shadow at Shadow Fenrir.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 01:57 AM
Ethan, it's your turn!

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 03:27 AM
Shadow takes the puch, his Shadow Armor taking half of the impact as the flames burned through. "Ahhh! That hurt, mortal!" Shadow seethed with hatred, "You will tell me the location of my lost clan and you might die for it!!!!", He roared. Fenrir then lauched himself into the air, shooting off a strong Shadow Bolt with enough darkness to blast a steel golem to smithreens at Ivor.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 03:35 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 08:27 PM)
Shadow takes the puch, his Shadow Armor taking half of the impact as the flames burned through. "Ahhh! That hurt, mortal!" Shadow seethed with hatred, "You will tell me the location of my lost clan and you might die for it!!!!", He roared. Fenrir then lauched himself into the air, shooting off a strong Shadow Bolt with enough darkness to blast a steel golem to smithreens at Ivor.

"Alright, if you insist!" Ivor grumbled as he fell. "I did not take your clan, but two fools I defeated did. Their names are Noob and Smoke. Noob is working for Teichan, and assumed your clan has knowledge of Enunk and his followers. We could have gone forever, but you win the battle, not the war."

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 03:43 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 16 2009, 03:35 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 08:27 PM)
Shadow takes the puch, his Shadow Armor taking half of the impact as the flames burned through. "Ahhh! That hurt, mortal!" Shadow seethed with hatred, "You will tell me the location of my lost clan and you might die for it!!!!", He roared. Fenrir then lauched himself into the air, shooting off a strong Shadow Bolt with enough darkness to blast a steel golem to smithreens at Ivor.

"Alright, if you insist!" Ivor grumbled as he fell. "I did not take your clan, but two fools I defeated did. Their names are Noob and Smoke. Noob is working for Teichan, and assumed your clan has knowledge of Enunk and his followers. We could have gone forever, but you win the battle, not the war."

Are you expanding the stroyline or somethink?

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 16 2009, 03:44 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 09:43 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 16 2009, 03:35 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 08:27 PM)
Shadow takes the puch, his Shadow Armor taking half of the impact as the flames burned through. "Ahhh! That hurt, mortal!" Shadow seethed with hatred, "You will tell me the location of my lost clan and you might die for it!!!!", He roared. Fenrir then lauched himself into the air, shooting off a strong Shadow Bolt with enough darkness to blast a steel golem to smithreens at Ivor.

"Alright, if you insist!" Ivor grumbled as he fell. "I did not take your clan, but two fools I defeated did. Their names are Noob and Smoke. Noob is working for Teichan, and assumed your clan has knowledge of Enunk and his followers. We could have gone forever, but you win the battle, not the war."

Are you expanding the stroyline or somethink?

I think he is....

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 03:49 AM
Yes I am. When ND4 asked if Noob and Smoke was going to be in the story, I would put them in the heat of the story. I'm fulfilling a promise.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 03:52 AM
Ok, than ND4 is going to be mad as Shadow kills them.

Shadow grabs Ivor by the neck, "Tell me more!!!! Do so and you might live, if not any less chancing of surviving so!!" Shadow growled in his face.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 04:09 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 08:52 PM)
Ok, than ND4 is going to be mad as Shadow kills them.

Shadow grabs Ivor by the neck, "Tell me more!!!! Do so and you might live, if not any less chancing of surviving so!!" Shadow growled in his face.

"Your clan is in the initial level of hell. IF you release me, I will show you the way, and free your clan." Ivor responded. "He is right. He will keep his words, as he has standards. I told him about Teichan's evil, and now he would willingly help us, and you. He will repay you with any wish you desire" Enunk spoke.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 04:28 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 16 2009, 04:09 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 08:52 PM)
Ok, than ND4 is going to be mad as Shadow kills them.

Shadow grabs Ivor by the neck, "Tell me more!!!! Do so and you might live, if not any less chancing of surviving so!!" Shadow growled in his face.

"Your clan is in the initial level of hell. IF you release me, I will show you the way, and free your clan." Ivor responded. "He is right. He will keep his words, as he has standards. I told him about Teichan's evil, and now he would willingly help us, and you. He will repay you with any wish you desire" Enunk spoke.

"Fine, so be it, lets go before any harm befalls upon my clan or there will be real hell to pay!!!" Shadow growled.

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 04:37 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 09:28 PM)
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 16 2009, 04:09 AM)
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 08:52 PM)
Ok, than ND4 is going to be mad as Shadow kills them.

Shadow grabs Ivor by the neck, "Tell me more!!!! Do so and you might live, if not any less chancing of surviving so!!" Shadow growled in his face.

"Your clan is in the initial level of hell. IF you release me, I will show you the way, and free your clan." Ivor responded. "He is right. He will keep his words, as he has standards. I told him about Teichan's evil, and now he would willingly help us, and you. He will repay you with any wish you desire" Enunk spoke.

"Fine, so be it, lets go before any harm befalls upon my clan or there will be real hell to pay!!!" Shadow growled.

Ivor then took Shadow Fenrir to the initial level, where is clan is located. Surprisingly, they are unharmed. Noob then chuckled, "I knew you would be there. I kidnapped your clan of wolves in order to lure you in hell. Lord Teichan told me of you, and I decided to lure you here in hell! You and your clan would be Teichan's pets and slaves for eternity once Smoke and I are done with you!"

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 04:38 AM
Jailer's turn! Can ND4 be involved?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 04:45 AM
QUOTE (The Ripper @ Feb 16 2009, 04:38 AM)
Jailer's turn! Can ND4 be involved?

I do't know, he'd better type clearly and concise and speel right, younknow, no offenses.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 16 2009, 04:58 AM
This is a one time thing Ethan.

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Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 16 2009, 05:08 AM
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Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 05:09 AM
laugh.gif that's awesome.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 16 2009, 05:09 AM
My posters?

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 05:14 AM
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 16 2009, 05:09 AM)
My posters?

Yes! nice ones too.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 16 2009, 05:15 AM
QUOTE (Ethan @ Feb 15 2009, 11:14 PM)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Feb 16 2009, 05:09 AM)
My posters?

Yes! nice ones too.

Thanks, I used paint, not photoshop cool.gif

Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 06:32 PM
Shall I carry on with King Ivor? I plan to end it.

The battle began with Noob and Smoke. Shadow Fenrir activated his shadow armor, and charged. He found the battle between Noob and Smoke to be half as hard as with Ivor. "Both of you will pay dearly for imprisoning my clan!" Shadow Fenrir roared. Noob and Smoke attacked and fought, but were no match for Shadow Fenrir's anger and rage. He defeated them and rescued his clan. Ivor repaid him by becoming the host of Enunk, Arus, Iddivh, and Shadow Fenrir.

Posted by: Ethan Feb 16 2009, 06:47 PM
And so the legend of Shadow Fenrir's victory in the depths of hell and the finding of his clan comes to an end. He becomes Enunk's new powerful ally and will support Enunk with his clan backing him up.

Posted by: Jailer411 Feb 16 2009, 06:57 PM
As Ivor, the King of Darkness reigned across his land that he earned, a strange message arrived from one of his messengers. "Sire, a dragon god by the name Teichan offers you great wealth, as long as you do him a favor. He asks you to help Enunk be defeated, as long as her lover, Elextra." The messenger spoke. "I will consider it. Since I'm not sure how strong they are, I will send my strongest warriors in my place." Ivor responded.

Meanwhile, away from Ivor's kingdom, Shadow Fenrir was looking for his lost Wolf clan, which had mysteriously disappeared. Even their belongings were gone too. Shadow Fenrir was upset for he was out hunting for food and despised the fact he couldn't help his clan. He tries to sniff out any scent that they might have left behind, but to no avail. "They must've disappeared by magic.......” he assumed, in which he indeed does sense. He ponders of what to do and decides he best be looking for them as harm may have come to them! He sets out from the empty campground, heading east, unknowingly towards the evil Ivor.

"Hello Shadow Fenrir," Arus spoke. I've heard many a tale about you and your clan of wolves, but be warned, you're no match for the power of Teichan. Although, you might be able to go toe to toe with Ivor. If you manage to defeat him, you'll be far on your quest, of seeking out your clan. Shadow Fenrir's eyes glared, with what seemed to be fire, as he heard that Ivor must be defeated. "I will do anything to regain my clan" he followed with a growl. “You must harness your anger, and save it for your upcoming quest" Iddivh remarked at noticing Shadow Fenrir's blood thirsty glare. “Come now", spoke Enunk. "We must be on our way."

As Enunk finishes his sentence, Shadow Fenrir replies questionly, "Even so of all what you both have told me, how can I trust you, even me knowing of this 'Teichan' and 'Ivor', I ask you, how can I trust you?" Shadow stares into both of his newfound allies' eyes, his wolf ears twitching and shackles raised as he waits for a response. "Even with your offered assistance of the finding of my clan and family, I ask once more, how am I, Shadow Fenrir, Lord of all Wolves, supposed to trust you", Shadow speaks quickly before letting either speak, interuppting them rudely. Arus begins to speak up when Enunk hushes him and instead begins to speak, “I am a Great Old One. My kind is omniscient, and omnipotent. Arus, Iddivh and I are benevolent. My champion and my warrior are not here to hinder, but to help.” Enunk informed. “Also, you might want to know about Ivor and Teichan. Ivor is mortal, but Teichan is not. According to lore, Teichan is also a Great Old One, albeit the rogue of the group. Both my god Enunk, and Teichan are very powerful, and you need knowledge on what would hurt Ivor. Shadow, for instance, is not as effective, as let’s say holy light.” Iddivh added.

“That’s not good enough for me, but it doesn't matter since I don't need your help", that was all Shadow Fenrir said, as he went past the group. “Hold on." spoke Iddivh, as he put his hand on Shadow Fenrir's shoulder, “You need our help for Teichan." All of a sudden, Fenrir grabbed Iddivh's arm, and pushed him, roaring “GET OUT OF MY WAY!" Enunk quickly set up a force field to stop any harm that may have come to Iddivh. Shadow Fenrir took this time to take to the trees, as he snarled, “If you get in my way of saving my clan again, I won’t be as generous as I was now." He then left, leaping from tree top to tree top. “He sure is stubborn", Arus remarked. “You have much to learn young Paladin" spoke Enunk. “He is merely blinded by his ambition of finding his clan."

Meanwhile, Shadow Fenrir had come back to the ground, “Lets see them followed me after I covered my tracks", and sure enough, his tracks were perfectly covered. “Darn people, now I have to regain my direction." Shadow Fenrir then paused, as he smelled something, and what he smelled was similar to his wolf clan. “But that's impossible. I couldn't smell them a while back." Suddenly, the smell disappeared. Fenrir, furious in his blinding rage, grabbed a bolder a crushed it to pieces. “I swear that I will kill the one behind this!" Enunk sensed the anger from far away, “it seems that our friend is heading towards Ivor after all." Iddivh spoke, “Should we wait till he needs our help in battle." Arus agreed saying that Fenrir couldn't resist our help when it was needed. "No”, spoke Enunk,” Shadow Fenrir is an honorable warrior, it would be disgraceful to request help in the heat of battle, although, we will follow him. If Teichan is related in this matter, it won’t turn out well." Ivor was back in his castle, as a servant reported to him. “Sire, there seems to be a disturbance in the forest." The servant informed. “Your news is of no surprise to me" retorted Ivor. “The so called ‘Lord of the Wolves’ shall be headed this way."

Ivor dismissed his servant. “Teichan, what matters have you gotten me into?” Ivor asked himself. “These pesky affairs are not something that I should be dealing with. I should make note to send my elite warriors to the depths of the forest. Yes, that’s it. Take care of the problem before it begins. “Majesty” spoke Ivor’s servant, interrupting his train of thought. “Well, what is it!” fumed Ivor, obviously mad that he was interrupted. “Well, the Wolf is drawing closer.””Yes I know that you fool!" “But, sire, it seems that Enunk is in the forest as well. “ ”Is that all?” Ivor spoke impatiently “Yes sire.”
“Then be gone with you.” Ivor’s servant was slowly leaving, but then, his sword, Flamesorrow, whizzed through the air, and near his heart. “That’ll teach him to interrupt me", laughed Ivor.

Ivor's elite soldiers searched through the forest. They were second in power to Ivor's bodyguards. "What's this? Enemy over there, attack immediately!" commanded the leader when he saw Shadow Fenrir. Shadow Fenrir unleashes his shadow bolts on the soldiers, but as the soldiers were around Ivor's influence, they had an unusual resistance to shadow. "To kill you without shadow? I'll do it brutally!" he snarled as he charged at the soldiers, unleashing his fangs and teeth. The elite soldiers drew out their weapons. The each wielded a sword, and axe, a flail, a bow, a poleaxe, and throwing knives. Knowing he is a werewolf, they enhanced their weapons with silver. Shadow Fenrir charged. He first attacked the axemen, but their brute force proved to be a challenge. Shadow Fenrir then leaped on one of them and mauled him.

As he was mauling the first man he leapt on, the other axe warriors tried to slay him to save their comrades. Shadow swung his massive arms with his clawed hands open straight out, cleaving one in half. As he did this, he grabbed the one he had mauled and tossed him into a flail wielding warrior. Shadow Fenrir then let his rage within take over as he wished to end this quickly. He warped behind a unsuspecting poleaxe soldier and gripped his head, crushing it and used his free hand to grab the weapon of the soldier. He then impaled one through the chest, "Aaaarrrrroooohhhhh!!!!!". The howling savage then threw the poleaxe, still with the dead being pierced on it, at another and impaled him into a tree. As the Lord of all Wolves waged war on the battalion of warriors of Ivor, he slowly regained control over his emotion. Shadow Fenrir roars, "Enough, this ends now! You will die tonight!", as he said this, he launched himself into the air, away from his foes. The remaining soldiers were surprised of what he had done and thought he was trying to flee, they gave chase. Shadow ascended through the air, his mouth filling with pure silver white energy, He was preparing his Lunar Howl. "Foolish mortals, you will rue the day you tried to kill the Lord of all Wolves and failed in the deepest depths of Hell!!!!", Shadow spoke still with the holy energy in his mouth.

Shadow Fernir was about to let out his Lunar Howl, when an idea came to him. While he was in midair, he did a masterful back flip, onto the nearest tree. Ivor's soilders, trained to show no mercy, followed their opponent to the tree tops. The second round was on, and it was apparent that fernir had the advantage. Right as an axe came out of nowhere, he leapt up in the air, leaving the axe to plunge into the enemy behind him. " Foolish mortals, following me into the trees. Your death will be enjoyable." He then let out a massive Lunar Howl, aimed staight for the ground. " He missed!" screamed the soilders, as they prepared to charge. Suddenly, the trees started to vibrtae rapidly. BOOOOOMMMM!!!! All of the trees around them, instantly exploded, throwing the tree tops hundreds of feet into the air. Shadow fernir, with his trained leg muscles, leapt above them, and let out one more Lunar Howl, that smashed his opponent straight to the ground, impaling them on scattered pieces of wood.

After the battle, Shadow Fenrir smelled the air to see which direction they came from. "Must be there in the north!" He growled. "He is stronger than I have thought." Arus spoke as he observed. "As I said before, he is a mighty warrior. He could have some honor, but he is blinded by his ambition." Enunk spoke. "We have to assist him in case Teichan gets involved. It's always good to prepare for the worst." Iddivh suggested. The three then followed Shadow Fenrir. "What are you doing here? This is MY fight, not yours!" he snarled. Honorable Shadow Fenrir, you must know about Teichan's powers. If he gets involved, we must intervene!" Iddivh protested. "I don't think he'll be involved, not he knows my true powers!" Shadow Fenrir snarled again. Shadow Fenrir then broke down the door. "It's quiet, too quiet." Arus observed. All of a sudden, Shadow Fenrir was ambushed by Ivor's bodyguards, which are immensely more powerful than the soldiers that he previously fought.

"Humph! Guess its time for me to get serious! Slightly that is!" Shadow Fenrir roared as he warped behind one of his foes. Shadow then stabbed his massive fist through the foe's back, the fist exiting through the chest. Shadow then pulled out his arm as one of the soldiers charged him, managing to wound him by slashing his calf, leaving a small gash. "Grrr!!! They're faster and stronger!!! No matter, I will find my lost clan at the espenses of your lives!!!" Shadow howled. He then sees Arus and Iddivh attempting to assist Shadow as Enunk hanged back, providing support to his warrior and champion. "What have I told you over and over again!! Stay out of my affairs!!!" Shadow growled as he decapitated a soldier with his sharp claws.

"Shadow Fenrir listen! Without our interference, you will DIE like an animal!" Iddivh justified. "You mean I'll-WHAT?!? DIE LIKE AN ANIMAL? Human, you annoy me to a poi--AHHHH!" Shadow Fenrir roared in pain as he got stabbed in the back by a halberd wielding guard. The same guard attempted to finish off Shadow Fenrir, but Iddivh blocked the attack and swung his axe, killing him. "These guards are very tough, and will stop at nothing to protect their king." Arus reminded.

"I will not die stripped of my honor, I will die a warrior!" Fenrir bellowed. Fenrir charged into five oncomming guards. One of the guards charged with a sword, but it was easy for Fenrir to side step the blow. He stuck his arm out, close lining the guards chest as he jumped in the air. " I can handle these pathetic fools" growled Fenrir. " Fenrir!" Arus cried out, but it was too late, archer guard poured through the doors. Their target was alike, Fenrir. The lord of all wolves couldn't avoid arrows in the air, because they were going to fast. They whizzed by, cutting through the outline of his body. This wasn't enough to stop him, for Fenrir used the guard that he had in the air as a shield.

As soon as he landed, he rushed the guards, making a huge mistake. The guards took aim and shot, Fenrir had to warp behind them, barely escaping. " Perfect" he thought to himself, as he attempted to attack them from behind. this was mistake number two, guard with axes rushed through the doors behind Fenrir, swinging away at his back. At this point, only Shadow fenrir's shadow armor protected him, but it was breaking. " Enough" Enunk spoke, " Iddivh, Arus, take stance to help Fenrir". " NO" yelled fenrir, who still wanted to die a warrior. " Fenrir, I know that you have won countless of battles on your own, but this time is different, your clan is what you're fighting for", and to Fenrir's disgust, he realized that Enunk was right.

Shadow Fenrir's rage erupted at the thought of having help, "Stay back, I'll finish this!". Arus surprised, "But we just told you will die without our help!", Enunk assures him, "Wait, it seems he's got a plan right now, lets wait and see what it is.". "Hah, you managed to hurt the Lord of all Wolves! Now its time for me to get somewhat more serious than I was before!!!!" Shadow growled. He than vanished within the air leaving a dark aura, "Wha..! Where did Fenrir go!" Arus cried out as the onslaught of soldiers were coming for them. "He left us, guess we're going to have to finish this ourselves." , Iddivh spoke calmly . "Wait, do not fear, for it is over already." Enunk spoke, "What? but.." Arus began to speak as Enunk interupted him, "Look.". All the soldiers had stopped in place, their eyes blank, They then collapse showing massive gashes on their backs. "Incredible!", Arus remarked at the spectacle, Shadow reappeared next to him as the last three fell. "How?" Arus asked Enunk, "He used his Shadow Warp in rapid succession at a very high speed enabling him to move faster than the eye, much faster. This is how he defeated all of them.", Informed Enunk. "I even took the oppurntity to kill a few more further ahead.", Shadow grinned, bearing his massive teeth. "Good thinking Shadow, I guess you're good after all." Iddivh chuckled.

"Hello fools!" Ivor spoke. with all his remaining elite guards. "You forgot to finish a dozen of them off. But they will not fight you, but they'll ensure that you and I will have a nice and clean fight. If I win, your fur will become my rug. If you win, I'll cough up whatever information you desire about your clan. Shall that be our deal?" "It shall be the deal, human!" Shadow Fenrir growled. "Arus, Iddivh, and I will give you advice on Ivor, and how to counter him." Enunk said to Shadow Fenrir telepathically. "How about you make the first move, human!" Shadow grolwed, getting ready as his shadow aura began to surround him. "I can make shadow too!" Ivor mocked as he unleashed Flamesorrow, covering his sword with fire and shadow. He then teleported behind Shadow Fenrir and swung Flamesorrow vertically with great force. Fenrir warped ahead, dodging the blow and catching the blade still in the air with his claws as he instantly warped back. "So I see but are you good as I am as I have used them for thousands of years!?" Shadow challenged, gripping the dark, fiery blade with his own shadowed claw. Shadow Fenrir charges his Lunar Howl quickly, in an attempt to destroy the sword's unholy properties with the holy blast. Ivor blocked the lunar wave, and it survived, as Flamesorrow is purely fire. The shadows he enhanced the sword with has worn out by the holiness. "Can you also wield fire, puppy?" Ivor taunted. Ivor engulfed his blade, and fired a blazing coil of fire at Shadow Fenrir. "No, but I smother it with the darkness!!", Shadow snarled and shot a coil of shadows which collide with the fiery one, struggling. "I'll win this fight for I will not be your rug!!".

"Remember the deal. You may become my rug, but we can certainly go forever. I cannot wait for a wolf-skin rug!" Ivor replied slyly, as he fired a fireball out of Flamesorrow. Shadow, thinking cleverly, warped as the fireball hit him, bringing it with him as he warped behind Ivor. "Here's an early gift, you fool!", Shadow howled as he punched through the fireball hitting Ivor with a dark fiery hand. Ivor quickly sensed the attack and turned around. He was pushed back by the blow, resulting in a tiny burn. "I actually felt that! Prepare to see my true powers!" Ivor roared. He charged himself up with both shadow and fire, and gave a punch with fire and shadow at Shadow Fenrir. Shadow takes the puch, his Shadow Armor taking half of the impact as the flames burned through. "Ahhh! That hurt, mortal!" Shadow seethed with hatred, "You will tell me the location of my lost clan and you might die for it!!!!", He roared. Fenrir then lauched himself into the air, shooting off a strong Shadow Bolt with enough darkness to blast a steel golem to smithreens at Ivor. "Alright, if you insist!" Ivor grumbled as he fell. "I did not take your clan, but two fools I defeated did. Their names are Noob and Smoke. Noob is working for Teichan, and assumed your clan has knowledge of Enunk and his followers. We could have gone forever, but you win the battle, not the war." "Your clan is in the initial level of hell. IF you release me, I will show you the way, and free your clan." Ivor responded. "He is right. He will keep his words, as he has standards. I told him about Teichan's evil, and now he would willingly help us, and you. He will repay you with any wish you desire" Enunk spoke. "Fine, so be it, lets go before any harm befalls upon my clan or there will be real hell to pay!!!" Shadow growled. Ivor then took Shadow Fenrir to the initial level, where is clan is located. Surprisingly, they are unharmed. Noob then chuckled, "I knew you would be there. I kidnapped your clan of wolves in order to lure you in hell. Lord Teichan told me of you, and I decided to lure you here in hell! You and your clan would be Teichan's pets and slaves for eternity once Smoke and I are done with you!" The battle began with Noob and Smoke. Shadow Fenrir activated his shadow armor, and charged. He found the battle between Noob and Smoke to be half as hard as with Ivor. "Both of you will pay dearly for imprisoning my clan!" Shadow Fenrir roared. Noob and Smoke attacked and fought, but were no match for Shadow Fenrir's anger and rage. He defeated them and rescued his clan. Ivor repaid him by becoming the host of Enunk, Arus, Iddivh, and Shadow Fenrir.

And so the legend of Shadow Fenrir's victory in the depths of hell and the finding of his clan comes to an end. He becomes Enunk's new powerful ally and will support Enunk with his clan backing him up.


There, we finished!



Posted by: The Ripper Feb 16 2009, 07:15 PM
It's on my deviantART page. In fact, I'm featuring this story to the fiction section, and give you guys credit.

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