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Title: I wrote a poem.


Pseudonym - March 19, 2009 08:35 PM (GMT)
Tell me what you think. Try to interpret it, see what you come up with.

I think that Life is nothing but the scraps
The undesirables of those who ate before us,
Which we--the dogs--are supposed to joyfully
Attack and clamp our jaws over.
After those who eat at the table are gone,
Their food is passed down to the dog bowl.
But when they're done,
We--the dog--rise up and sit at the table,
And those who we considered fleas and roaches
Rise up and become the dog.

Jailer411 - March 19, 2009 08:40 PM (GMT)
The kids of this generation inheiriting a world that is being corrupted...

Ethan - March 19, 2009 08:41 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 19 2009, 08:35 PM)
Tell me what you think. Try to interpret it, see what you com eup with.

I think that Life is nothing but the scraps
The undesirables of those who ate before us,
Which we--the dogs--ares upposed to joyfully
Attack and clamp our jaws over.
After those who eat at the table are gone,
Their food is passed down to the dog bowl.
But when they're done,
We--the dog--rise up and sit at the table,
And those who we considered fleas and roaches
Rise up and become the dog.

wow, I like this, I am doing a poetry portfolio in school, is this a assignment you have to do? its good. but then again I'm no expert :D

Pseudonym - March 19, 2009 09:01 PM (GMT)
Not for school. I was bored in school, so I wrote.

treacherous - March 19, 2009 09:54 PM (GMT)
Emo.

Jailer411 - March 19, 2009 09:56 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (treacherous @ Mar 19 2009, 03:54 PM)
Emo.

You forgot the "l".

treacherous - March 19, 2009 10:17 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 19 2009, 09:56 PM)
You forgot the "l".

Emol?

Pseudonym - March 19, 2009 10:19 PM (GMT)
Very astute of you Jailer, it's about children inheriting a crap world from those older than them.

SilverSurfer092 - March 20, 2009 12:23 AM (GMT)
I like rhymes.




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