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nicker - March 1, 2009 05:31 PM (GMT)
What ever it be :Fpl person, CBUB match,just show me and I will review it on a scale from 1 out of 10.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:32 PM (GMT)
^_^

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 05:33 PM (GMT)
Will you be giving pointers, for people to improve?

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:35 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 1 2009, 05:33 PM)
Will you be giving pointers, for people to improve?

Problay.

Pseudonym - March 1, 2009 05:38 PM (GMT)
You f**ked up on the first f**king sentence!

QUOTE
on a scale from 5 out of 10.


What the f**k is that supposed to mean?!

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:39 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 05:38 PM)
You f**ked up on the first f**king sentence!

QUOTE
on a scale from 5 out of 10.


What the f**k is that supposed to mean?!

Like say I give your story a 5 out of 10. There that explain enough for Da?

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 05:40 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 11:38 AM)
You f**ked up on the first f**king sentence!

QUOTE
on a scale from 5 out of 10.


What the f**k is that supposed to mean?!

1 through 10 scale? I don't know how ND4 will do this.

Somebody post a story!

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:41 PM (GMT)
There was the guy who went to the store, and he bought stuff. He took the last cookie, so I shot him the end.


Please grade.

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:43 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:41 PM)
There was the guy who went to the store, and he bought stuff. He took the last cookie, so I shot him the end.


Please grade.

-_- You doubt me dont you? Well whatever.

Writing: Short yet simple 3 out of 10 for wrting.

Idea: Meh seems like you just posted this for the hell of it. 2 out of 10 here.

All in all : Meh this gets a 4 out of 10 which is a 40 from me.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:44 PM (GMT)
4 out of 10 for two sentences.... I'm gonna leave now.

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:45 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:44 PM)
4 out of 10 for two sentences.... I'm gonna leave now.

Your lucky I just didnt give you a 1 out of 10.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:45 PM (GMT)
:lol:

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 05:45 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 11:43 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:41 PM)
There was the guy who went to the store, and he bought stuff. He took the last cookie, so I shot him the end.


Please grade.

-_- You doubt me dont you? Well whatever.

Writing: Short yet simple 3 out of 10 for wrting.

Idea: Meh seems like you just posted this for the hell of it. 2 out of 10 here.

All in all : Meh this gets a 4 out of 10 which is a 40 from me.

A 40?

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:46 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 1 2009, 05:45 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 11:43 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:41 PM)
There was the guy who went to the store, and he bought stuff. He took the last cookie, so I shot him the end.


Please grade.

-_- You doubt me dont you? Well whatever.

Writing: Short yet simple 3 out of 10 for wrting.

Idea: Meh seems like you just posted this for the hell of it. 2 out of 10 here.

All in all : Meh this gets a 4 out of 10 which is a 40 from me.

A 40?

:P I'm just that good. :lol:

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:48 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 1 2009, 05:45 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 11:43 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:41 PM)
There was the guy who went to the store, and he bought stuff. He took the last cookie, so I shot him the end.


Please grade.

-_- You doubt me dont you? Well whatever.

Writing: Short yet simple 3 out of 10 for wrting.

Idea: Meh seems like you just posted this for the hell of it. 2 out of 10 here.

All in all : Meh this gets a 4 out of 10 which is a 40 from me.

A 40?

Yeah.

1: A 0 shows no effort whatsoever.

2: 2o Shows some effort but still not good..

3: A 30 has mild effort and shows that some creativity was used.

4: 4o mild effort and good effort.

I will explain the other grades later.

Pseudonym - March 1, 2009 05:48 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:39 PM)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 05:38 PM)
You f**ked up on the first f**king sentence!

QUOTE
on a scale from 5 out of 10.


What the f**k is that supposed to mean?!

Like say I give your story a 5 out of 10. There that explain enough for Da?

So there is only one grade-- 5 out of 10

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:49 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 05:48 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:39 PM)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 05:38 PM)
You f**ked up on the first f**king sentence!

QUOTE
on a scale from 5 out of 10.


What the f**k is that supposed to mean?!

Like say I give your story a 5 out of 10. There that explain enough for Da?

So there is only one grade-- 5 out of 10

Look back at the last page.

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:49 PM)
:huh: You think I was trying...at all?

Not really. Want to realy know the grade a I got ya? puredevilishevil!!!

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 05:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 11:49 AM)
:huh: You think I was trying...at all?

I think you bribed him.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:52 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:50 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:49 PM)
:huh:  You think I was trying...at all?

Not really. Want to realy know the grade a I got ya? puredevilishevil!!!

No.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:52 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 1 2009, 05:50 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 11:49 AM)
:huh:  You think I was trying...at all?

I think you bribed him.

What are you talking about? That was a masterpiece!

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:52 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:52 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:50 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:49 PM)
:huh:  You think I was trying...at all?

Not really. Want to realy know the grade a I got ya? puredevilishevil!!!

No.

..... a 0.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:54 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:52 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:52 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:50 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:49 PM)
:huh:  You think I was trying...at all?

Not really. Want to realy know the grade a I got ya? puredevilishevil!!!

No.

..... a 0.

:D. :lol:

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:54 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:54 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:52 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:52 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:50 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:49 PM)
:huh:  You think I was trying...at all?

Not really. Want to realy know the grade a I got ya? puredevilishevil!!!

No.

..... a 0.

:D. :lol:

Next time please show some effort.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:55 PM (GMT)
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Stop ND4 your killing me. :lol: :lol: :lol:

nicker - March 1, 2009 05:55 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:55 PM)
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Stop ND4 your killing me. :lol: :lol: :lol:

:( :( :( Quit doubting me!!

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 05:56 PM (GMT)
Can your scale go into negatives?


nicker - March 1, 2009 05:56 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 1 2009, 05:56 PM)
Can your scale go into negatives?

Only if they were like Solo's.

Solomon - March 1, 2009 05:56 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 05:55 PM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Mar 1 2009, 05:55 PM)
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Stop ND4 your killing me.  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

:( :( :( Quit doubting me!!

:lol: I'm sorry, but this is hilarious. :lol: :lol: :lol:


.... :mellow:

Marvel Man - March 1, 2009 06:01 PM (GMT)
I'll write something.

Soon. :lol:

SilverSurfer092 - March 1, 2009 06:15 PM (GMT)
I'm SilverSurfer092.



Grade.

Pseudonym - March 1, 2009 06:29 PM (GMT)
Marius quickly pulled his foot off the clutch and stomped the gas. The car lurched forward and stopped. Marius frowned as he tried again.

"F*ckin piece of sh*t" Marius screamed. The car wouldn't start. Because someone had put a bomb in it.

Marius's last word on planet Earth was "Sh*t"

GRADE NOW!

nicker - March 1, 2009 06:31 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 06:29 PM)
Marius quickly pulled his foot off the clutch and stomped the gas. The car lurched forward and stopped. Marius frowned as he tried again.

"F*ckin piece of sh*t" Marius screamed. The car wouldn't start. Because someone had put a bomb in it.

Marius's last word on planet Earth was "Sh*t"

GRADE NOW!

Sliver

O sorry pal.


Da

3.

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 06:32 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 12:31 PM)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 06:29 PM)
Marius quickly pulled his foot off the clutch and stomped the gas. The car lurched forward and stopped. Marius frowned as he tried again.

"F*ckin piece of sh*t" Marius screamed. The car wouldn't start. Because someone had put a bomb in it.

Marius's last word on planet Earth was "Sh*t"

GRADE NOW!

Sliver

O sorry pal.


Da

3.

He gets a 30 for that?

Pseudonym - March 1, 2009 06:32 PM (GMT)
that got a lower grade that solomon's!!

user posted image

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 06:34 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 12:32 PM)
that got a lower grade that solomon's!!

user posted image

I can see why, " That got a lower grade that solomon's!

Sorry, but I had to point that out :lol:

Pseudonym - March 1, 2009 06:35 PM (GMT)
Silver's comment which is now my sig is sooooo apt.

My story had a conflict, a resolution and everything!

nicker - March 1, 2009 06:36 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Jailer411 @ Mar 1 2009, 06:32 PM)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 12:31 PM)
QUOTE (Pseudonym @ Mar 1 2009, 06:29 PM)
Marius quickly pulled his foot off the clutch and stomped the gas. The car lurched forward and stopped. Marius frowned as he tried again.

"F*ckin piece of sh*t" Marius screamed. The car wouldn't start. Because someone had put a bomb in it.

Marius's last word on planet Earth was "Sh*t"

GRADE NOW!

Sliver

O sorry pal.


Da

3.

He gets a 30 for that?

You know what Sexual Intercourse it. A 3 just means 3.

Pseudonym - March 1, 2009 06:39 PM (GMT)
Nicker. You can't say Sexual Intercourse it to mathematics.

sorry bruh, that's just how it works.

Jailer411 - March 1, 2009 06:41 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (nicker @ Mar 1 2009, 12:36 PM)

You know what Sexual Intercourse it. A 3 just means 3.

:lol: You tried to type the f word.




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