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Title: Jason vs Jason X
Description: Who wins?


ND4 - December 23, 2008 01:38 AM (GMT)
Jason Voorhees stood in his shack in Camp Crystal Lake waiting for someone to come to his lake so he could kill them . Someone did come but it was someone
even Jason might have trouble with . It it was Jason X who had revieved from the crash from space. Two other killers tried stopping him but they were of no consequence.

Jason X walked toward Camp Crystal Lake while dragging Ghostface and Leatherface's dead bodies in his hands . Jason saw this being in his camp.
He didn't like it .Not one bit. Jason got out his machete and walked slowly towards Jason x . Jason X saw the original Jason coming and threw the two other killer's corpses to the ground . He brought out his advanced macthec and started stomping toward the original Goalie from Hell.

Okay it is Jason X with his blade vs Jason the original with his macthe .

ND4 - December 23, 2008 01:39 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 01:38 AM)
Jason Voorhees stand in his shack in Camp Crystal Lake waiting for someone to come to his lake so he could kill them . Someone did come but it was someone
even Jason might have trouble with . It it was Jason X who had revieved from the crash from space. Two other killers tried stopping him but they were of no consequence.

Jason X walked toward Camp Crystal Lake while dragging Ghostface and Leatherface's dead bodies in his hands . Jason saw this being in his camp.
He didn't like it .Not one bit. Jason got out his machete and walked slowly towards Jason x . Jason X saw the original Jason coming and threw the two other killer's corpses to the ground . He brought out his advanced macthec and started stomping toward the original Goalie from Hell.

Okay it is Jason X with his blade vs Jason the original with his macthe .

Man I am on fire today!

Solomon - December 23, 2008 02:08 AM (GMT)
Mind if I tear it apart?

ND4 - December 23, 2008 02:12 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:08 AM)
Mind if I tear it apart?

Tear what apart?

Solomon - December 23, 2008 02:14 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 02:12 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:08 AM)
Mind if I tear it apart?

Tear what apart?

Your story. Just think of it as constructive criticism.

ND4 - December 23, 2008 02:15 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:14 AM)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 02:12 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:08 AM)
Mind if I tear it apart?

Tear what apart?

Your story. Just think of it as constructive criticism.

Oh.Okay sure. Could you check my other fight?

Solomon - December 23, 2008 02:22 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 01:38 AM)
Jason Voorhees stand in his shack in Camp Crystal Lake waiting for someone to come to his lake so he could kill them . Someone did come but it was someone
even Jason might have trouble with . It it was Jason X who had revieved from the crash from space. Two other killers tried stopping him but they were of no consequence.

Jason X walked toward Camp Crystal Lake while dragging Ghostface and Leatherface's dead bodies in his hands . Jason saw this being in his camp.
He didn't like it .Not one bit. Jason got out his machete and walked slowly towards Jason x . Jason X saw the original Jason coming and threw the two other killer's corpses to the ground . He brought out his advanced macthec and started stomping toward the original Goalie from Hell.

Okay it is Jason X with his blade vs Jason the original with his macthe .

"Jason Voorhees stand in his shack in Camp Crystal Lake waiting for someone to come to his lake so he could kill them . Someone did come but it was someone
even Jason might have trouble with . It it was Jason X who had revieved from the crash from space. Two other killers tried stopping him but they were of no consequence. "

-Repitive use of the words: Lake, and Someone.

- Incorrect useage of the verb stood.

-Kind of a boring motive to start the story off with. "He's sits there and waits to kill somebody!"

-To much telling of the story not enough showing. It's like reading a to-do list rather than a story.


"Jason X walked toward Camp Crystal Lake while dragging Ghostface and Leatherface's dead bodies in his hands . Jason saw this being in his camp.
He didn't like it .Not one bit. Jason got out his machete and walked slowly towards Jason x . Jason X saw the original Jason coming and threw the two other killer's corpses to the ground . He brought out his advanced macthec and started stomping toward the original Goalie from Hell."

-Once again its like reading a list. It seems like you never got past the brain storming stage.

-"macthec" Mispelling.

-Not much of a story so far. They walk towards each other because Jason didnt like Jason X in his camp. Not that great of a story


Solomon - December 23, 2008 02:23 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 02:15 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:14 AM)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 02:12 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:08 AM)
Mind if I tear it apart?

Tear what apart?

Your story. Just think of it as constructive criticism.

Oh.Okay sure. Could you check my other fight?

What other fight? On here or cbub?

ND4 - December 23, 2008 02:30 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:23 AM)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 02:15 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:14 AM)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 02:12 AM)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:08 AM)
Mind if I tear it apart?

Tear what apart?

Your story. Just think of it as constructive criticism.

Oh.Okay sure. Could you check my other fight?

What other fight? On here or cbub?

Here. Lobo vs Deadpool and Agent x.

ND4 - December 23, 2008 02:31 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Solomon @ Dec 23 2008, 02:22 AM)
QUOTE (ND4 @ Dec 23 2008, 01:38 AM)
Jason Voorhees stand in his shack in Camp Crystal Lake waiting for someone to come to his lake so he could kill them .  Someone did come but it was someone
even Jason might have trouble with .  It it was Jason X who had revieved from the crash from space. Two other killers tried stopping him but they were of no consequence. 

Jason X walked toward Camp Crystal Lake while dragging Ghostface and Leatherface's dead bodies in his hands . Jason saw this being in his camp.
He didn't like it .Not one bit. Jason got out his machete and walked slowly towards Jason x .  Jason X saw the original Jason coming and threw the two other killer's corpses to the ground . He brought out his advanced macthec and started stomping toward the original Goalie from Hell.

Okay it is Jason X with his blade vs Jason the original with his macthe .

"Jason Voorhees stand in his shack in Camp Crystal Lake waiting for someone to come to his lake so he could kill them . Someone did come but it was someone
even Jason might have trouble with . It it was Jason X who had revieved from the crash from space. Two other killers tried stopping him but they were of no consequence. "

-Repitive use of the words: Lake, and Someone.

- Incorrect useage of the verb stood.

-Kind of a boring motive to start the story off with. "He's sits there and waits to kill somebody!"

-To much telling of the story not enough showing. It's like reading a to-do list rather than a story.


"Jason X walked toward Camp Crystal Lake while dragging Ghostface and Leatherface's dead bodies in his hands . Jason saw this being in his camp.
He didn't like it .Not one bit. Jason got out his machete and walked slowly towards Jason x . Jason X saw the original Jason coming and threw the two other killer's corpses to the ground . He brought out his advanced macthec and started stomping toward the original Goalie from Hell."

-Once again its like reading a list. It seems like you never got past the brain storming stage.

-"macthec" Mispelling.

-Not much of a story so far. They walk towards each other because Jason didnt like Jason X in his camp. Not that great of a story

Thanks Wolvie!
I cant wait for you to check my Deadpool fight.

boratz - December 24, 2008 04:02 AM (GMT)
Well if this is Jason X, he is indestructible with that metal on his body, so I guess I go with JX.




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