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Title: White Eyed Fox
Description: Comment on my Naruto fanfic


Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 12:17 AM (GMT)
Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3796603/1/White_Eyed_Fox
Only comment if you know the Naruto stroyline.

DataSnake - January 21, 2008 12:51 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 12:17 AM)
Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3796603/1/White_Eyed_Fox
Only comment if you know the Naruto stroyline.

... :blink:
I thought "Hinata" was a manga about a guy who inherits an all-girls boarding house?

The Sharpshooter - January 21, 2008 12:51 AM (GMT)
Heh, so the Kyubi got put in Hinata instead huh? Well, great idea, needs to be a little more drawn out if you ask me. Of course, that could be just because I'm a NaruHina fan and you've made it obvious she's diggin' Kiba. Oh well, I'm an ass. :P

Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 12:53 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (DataSnake @ Jan 21 2008, 12:51 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 12:17 AM)
Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3796603/1/White_Eyed_Fox
Only comment if you know the Naruto stroyline.

... :blink:
I thought "Hinata" was a manga about a guy who inherits an all-girls boarding house?

*Closes eyes, tilts head down and shakes it in response to the poster's ignorance."

Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 12:54 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (The Sharpshooter @ Jan 21 2008, 12:51 AM)
Heh, so the Kyubi got put in Hinata instead huh? Well, great idea, needs to be a little more drawn out if you ask me. Of course, that could be just because I'm a NaruHina fan and you've made it obvious she's diggin' Kiba. Oh well, I'm an ass. :P

Oh, well.

Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 12:56 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (The Sharpshooter @ Jan 21 2008, 12:51 AM)
Heh, so the Kyubi got put in Hinata instead huh? Well, great idea, needs to be a little more drawn out if you ask me. Of course, that could be just because I'm a NaruHina fan and you've made it obvious she's diggin' Kiba. Oh well, I'm an ass. :P

What did I do well?

hellbentnow - January 21, 2008 01:35 AM (GMT)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu. And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 01:40 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:35 AM)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu. And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

It's not that I like Kiba more, it's that Naruhina doesn't appeal to me. Naruto knows Shadow Clone jutsu because I was too lazy to change him from a goofball. Hinata seems weak because she was fighting a highly experence Jonniin and i wanted to emphize teamwork.

hellbentnow - January 21, 2008 01:53 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 01:40 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:35 AM)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu.  And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

It's not that I like Kiba more, it's that Naruhina doesn't appeal to me. Naruto knows Shadow Clone jutsu because I was too lazy to change him from a goofball. Hinata seems weak because she was fighting a highly experence Jonniin and i wanted to emphize teamwork.

Not weak like that, weak minded.

She obeys a fox that will eventually betray her and destroy her family and villian as she watches in the cage that once held him. She is a weak minded person who should die. I like your story but I hate Hinata in your story. You plan to write anymore??? i'll deifantly read more.

Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 02:10 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:53 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 01:40 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:35 AM)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu.  And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

It's not that I like Kiba more, it's that Naruhina doesn't appeal to me. Naruto knows Shadow Clone jutsu because I was too lazy to change him from a goofball. Hinata seems weak because she was fighting a highly experence Jonniin and i wanted to emphize teamwork.

Not weak like that, weak minded.

She obeys a fox that will eventually betray her and destroy her family and villian as she watches in the cage that once held him. She is a weak minded person who should die. I like your story but I hate Hinata in your story. You plan to write anymore??? i'll deifantly read more.

It may seem that way but as the author, I know every plot twist. I'll let you in on a secret, rember how she stood up to and beat him in chapter 2? She earned his respect that day so he won't betray her. I plan to go to go through Shippunden but i can't get on the computer with the file. How were my battle scences.

hellbentnow - January 21, 2008 02:11 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 02:10 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:53 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 01:40 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:35 AM)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu.  And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

It's not that I like Kiba more, it's that Naruhina doesn't appeal to me. Naruto knows Shadow Clone jutsu because I was too lazy to change him from a goofball. Hinata seems weak because she was fighting a highly experence Jonniin and i wanted to emphize teamwork.

Not weak like that, weak minded.

She obeys a fox that will eventually betray her and destroy her family and villian as she watches in the cage that once held him. She is a weak minded person who should die. I like your story but I hate Hinata in your story. You plan to write anymore??? i'll deifantly read more.

It may seem that way but as the author, I know every plot twist. I'll let you in on a secret, rember how she stood up to and beat him in chapter 2? She earned his respect that day so he won't betray her. I plan to go to go through Shippunden but i can't get on the computer with the file. How were my battle scences.

Everything was over all good.

Guardian Of Nesh - January 21, 2008 02:21 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 02:11 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 02:10 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:53 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 01:40 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:35 AM)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu.  And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

It's not that I like Kiba more, it's that Naruhina doesn't appeal to me. Naruto knows Shadow Clone jutsu because I was too lazy to change him from a goofball. Hinata seems weak because she was fighting a highly experence Jonniin and i wanted to emphize teamwork.

Not weak like that, weak minded.

She obeys a fox that will eventually betray her and destroy her family and villian as she watches in the cage that once held him. She is a weak minded person who should die. I like your story but I hate Hinata in your story. You plan to write anymore??? i'll deifantly read more.

It may seem that way but as the author, I know every plot twist. I'll let you in on a secret, rember how she stood up to and beat him in chapter 2? She earned his respect that day so he won't betray her. I plan to go to go through Shippunden but i can't get on the computer with the file. How were my battle scences.

Everything was over all good.

Can you guess which character will take Sasuke's place with Orochimaru?

Link28689 - January 21, 2008 04:52 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (DataSnake @ Jan 21 2008, 12:51 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 12:17 AM)
Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3796603/1/White_Eyed_Fox
Only comment if you know the Naruto stroyline.

... :blink:
I thought "Hinata" was a manga about a guy who inherits an all-girls boarding house?

You're thinking "Love Hina", and also there's a girl that looks just like Hinata.

Guardian Of Nesh - February 6, 2008 12:30 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 02:11 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 02:10 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:53 AM)
QUOTE (Guardian Of Nesh @ Jan 21 2008, 01:40 AM)
QUOTE (hellbentnow @ Jan 21 2008, 01:35 AM)
hmm. Hinata should be stronger. I prefer Naruto with the fox but yours is great. I'm now read chap 5. Hinata is a weak %!#ch. And Naruto shouldn't know how to do Shadow clone jutsu.  And i love the idea with Hinata and Naruto, i guess you like Kiba more huh?

It's not that I like Kiba more, it's that Naruhina doesn't appeal to me. Naruto knows Shadow Clone jutsu because I was too lazy to change him from a goofball. Hinata seems weak because she was fighting a highly experence Jonniin and i wanted to emphize teamwork.

Not weak like that, weak minded.

She obeys a fox that will eventually betray her and destroy her family and villian as she watches in the cage that once held him. She is a weak minded person who should die. I like your story but I hate Hinata in your story. You plan to write anymore??? i'll deifantly read more.

It may seem that way but as the author, I know every plot twist. I'll let you in on a secret, rember how she stood up to and beat him in chapter 2? She earned his respect that day so he won't betray her. I plan to go to go through Shippunden but i can't get on the computer with the file. How were my battle scences.

Everything was over all good.

I posted some new chapters.




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