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Title: Doom the Hero Part 1


super_wolverine_Man - August 15, 2008 04:31 PM (GMT)
this is a tie in with my silver hulk v.s super darkseid. it will be a short series and it will tie together Silver hulk v.s super darkseid parts 7 and 8.

note these will be much shorter stories



(doom had managed to keep from being hit longer than he had dared hope for)
a blast from a rocket launcher had destroyed his small canoe, doom barely jumped right before the explosion. The pirates seemed to have unlimited amounts of ammo.)

(Doom dared not stay in one place at a time, a shot grazed his shoulder)

Doom- ( let's out a grunt through gritted teeth)

(Doom desperately trys to swim away from the fire)

( but he gets shot this time in the ribs, the pain is unbearable, his vision starts to blur, and he finds that he cant swim any longer, he looks twoards the ship, he sees a gunman raise his uzi, aimed straight for his head)

Doom- (so this is how i am to die)

(right then he heard a swooshing sound, and a thump.)

(doom looked up to see an arrow sticking out from the gunmans head, blood pouring down his face)

(The ships crew, frantically scuried, about trying to find the mystery archer, doom looked around as well, a midst the chaos he slowly snuck away closer to the island, he looked up just in time, to see another arrow, this one raging with flames, get stuck right into the side of the boat, setting the pirates ship ablaze.0

(doom was dumbfounded by the events that had just happened, he stood mouth agape, he couldn't believe that he actually survived)

(while the pirate crew members, leaped into the ocean, doom pulled himself onto the islands shore)

Doom- (lying flat on his back, panting heavily) ( his eyes slowly rolled to the left, where he noticed a figure, walking towards him, his features obscured by the sun )





okay in case you haven't figured it out this isn't a fight, just post what you think of the idea, and the story.

darkender - August 15, 2008 04:37 PM (GMT)
I think it was a good story.

super_wolverine_Man - August 15, 2008 04:38 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

darkender - August 15, 2008 04:47 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

super_wolverine_Man - August 15, 2008 04:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

by the way, nice pic of boondocks in your avatar.

darkender - August 15, 2008 04:53 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:50 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

by the way, nice pic of boondocks in your avatar.

thnk

IonKidMax - August 15, 2008 05:36 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

This seems like the beyonder's doing.

darkender - August 15, 2008 05:40 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (IonKidMax @ Aug 15 2008, 05:36 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

This seems like the beyonder's doing.

its so perplexing

IonKidMax - August 15, 2008 05:49 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (IonKidMax @ Aug 15 2008, 05:36 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

This seems like the beyonder's doing.

Or Hawkeye?

super_wolverine_Man - August 15, 2008 06:01 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 05:40 PM)
QUOTE (IonKidMax @ Aug 15 2008, 05:36 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

This seems like the beyonder's doing.

its so perplexing

perplexing, i like the sound of that.

darkender - August 15, 2008 06:01 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 06:01 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 05:40 PM)
QUOTE (IonKidMax @ Aug 15 2008, 05:36 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:47 PM)
QUOTE (super_wolverine_Man @ Aug 15 2008, 04:38 PM)
QUOTE (darkender @ Aug 15 2008, 04:37 PM)
I think it was a good story.

thanks, so who do you think is the mysterious figure.

well sincd they shoot arrows it really narrows it down to a couple in the marvel universe.

This seems like the beyonder's doing.

its so perplexing

perplexing, i like the sound of that.

;)




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