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ayame665
Posted: Apr 10 2006, 08:17 PM


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I like to write poetry so i'll be sharing it with you...so that way when you laugh i can't see it ^_^


Ok so here's the first poem

Yesterday
I can never for get anything
Even though I wish I could
Then I wouldn't remeber yesterday
With all bad and no good
I wouldn't remember the sadness
I wouldn't remember the pain
I wouldn't remember the sorrow
But then what would I gain
I wouldn't know what it felt like
What it's like to sit and cry
And all I would have to live for
Is asking myself why
So today i'll try to bare it
And put on my strongest face
Because tomorrow this will be yesterday
And it's one I don't want to replace
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Mabu-chan
Posted: Apr 11 2006, 01:10 AM


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o.o

I love this one.


A few spelling corrections and it will be even better!

*Remember not remeber


:3 If you have any more, please post them. I would love to read them.
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ayame665
Posted: Apr 11 2006, 03:25 PM


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Thank You Mabu-chan! The fact that you like my poem astounds me :huh: :blink:


.:Yesterday,Tomorrow,Today:.
Today just seems so boring
Tomorrow, another lie
Yesterday just kept on going
I didn't even say goodbye
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Sakura Haruno
Posted: Apr 11 2006, 09:38 PM


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kinda short but good
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Mabu-chan
Posted: Apr 12 2006, 01:27 AM


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^-^ I liked that one.

It's short, but it sends quite a good message to the reader. :3

You're quite good at this! X3 Write more, write more!
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Inu_dog_lvr
Posted: Apr 13 2006, 01:38 AM


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Nice poem, I really like it, thanks for sharing ^_^
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ayame665
Posted: Dec 16 2006, 09:20 PM


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Ok so this one is kind of like Yesterday,but not realy

Back In Time
Take my soul and go back in time
Back to a happier land
Back to when there was no rythem or ryhme
And we walked hand in hand.
I want to go back to where the are no tears
Where there are no lonely nights.
I want to go back so you can calm all me fears
And turn on all the lights.
But I can't go back to those smiles
I Can't go Back tto those years.
All I have now is denial.
Fake happiness mixed with tears


Inspired by my move
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Sakura Haruno
Posted: Dec 17 2006, 12:02 AM


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nice job
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Inu Yasha
Posted: Dec 26 2007, 11:37 AM


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How do you write so well? It's so good. ;) :)
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