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carlantis'comix, my comics
 Posted: Aug 14 2009, 08:55 AM
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 It's shit right? Gahahaha!  Group: Banned Posts: 475 Member No.: 899 Joined: 7-January 09  |
Well, I've went all-out on this one right here.
 Problem #1 - Fighters don't just go up to random people and ask to be in a group - especially without proper grammar. Problem #2 - More grammarless wording and an answer that was way too straightforward. Problem #3 - Look at the movement. Huh?! Problem #4 - Fighters don't just go up to random people and ask to be in a group - especially without proper grammar. Problem #5 - Mysterious weapon change. Check over your work for mistakes like that. Problem #6 - Two panels of problems. People don't just stroll up and straight away introduce themselves. There's something before that - like meeting properly. Problem #7 - Thanks for what? Thanks for proving yourself? This post has been edited by Renegade on Aug 14 2009, 08:55 AM -------------------- |
 
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Posted: Aug 14 2009, 09:51 AM
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 I don't care even a shit Group: Banned Posts: 587 Member No.: 958 Joined: 5-August 09 |
More confusing stuff and characters with hypersuprapowers
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| Denning Rosewater |
Posted: Aug 14 2009, 06:12 PM
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 "All we have to do is knock out the system!"  Group: Moderator Posts: 5,392 Member No.: 8 Joined: 19-February 06 |
There's no need to restate the problems. There's definitely a need for those problems to be addressed, however. If they aren't, then people seriously aren't going to bother reading.
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| Dark Overlord Zack |
Posted: Aug 14 2009, 06:32 PM
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 This is true love making  Group: Admin Posts: 2,962 Member No.: 34 Joined: 2-March 06 |
needs more feed me
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Posted: Aug 15 2009, 01:52 AM
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It's shit right? Gahahaha! Group: Banned Posts: 475 Member No.: 899 Joined: 7-January 09 |
Yeah. Less chatter, more bone-grinding and feeding
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| Sety |
Posted: Aug 27 2009, 09:14 PM
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 Residential Vanille fanboy  Group: Role Play Mod Posts: 5,899 Member No.: 129 Joined: 29-April 06 |
Aren't comics supposed to be funny? They don't look bad, they just aren't really worth reading <_<
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| Carlantis07 |
Posted: Feb 28 2010, 07:15 AM
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The reckless Rper  Group: Member Posts: 643 Member No.: 844 Joined: 4-December 08 |
This marks the New era of Carl's COMIX SO PLEASE I've amped up my vocab and added a spell check. so please bear with the story.
 -------------------- I am Carl Highlance the Clergy Guard
http://z15.invisionfree.com/Fire_Emblem_Sp...0488&st=0&#last The Final Prophecy The Final Prophecy |
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| Dark Overlord Zack |
Posted: Feb 28 2010, 09:05 AM
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This is true love making Group: Admin Posts: 2,962 Member No.: 34 Joined: 2-March 06 |
still doesn't make sense.
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| DjDjDj |
Posted: Feb 28 2010, 05:30 PM
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 Am I seeing wrong, or did Rath steal the Sealed Sword Group: Member Posts: 245 Member No.: 956 Joined: 3-August 09 |
Stupid dancer
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dude,thats my cookie| Carlantis07 |
Posted: Mar 1 2010, 05:45 AM
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The reckless Rper Group: Member Posts: 643 Member No.: 844 Joined: 4-December 08 |
DAuze it will begin to make sence in Chapter 2 which is currentley in production.
-------------------- I am Carl Highlance the Clergy Guard
http://z15.invisionfree.com/Fire_Emblem_Sp...0488&st=0&#last The Final Prophecy The Final Prophecy |
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| Lucille |
Posted: Mar 2 2010, 08:09 PM
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 :d  Group: Tactician Posts: 1,541 Member No.: 457 Joined: 13-July 07 |
Its confusing to read.
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| Forrestfire |
Posted: Mar 2 2010, 11:40 PM
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 Jacob, always funny. Group: Member Posts: 141 Member No.: 194 Joined: 3-June 06 |
I personally like Camil the "rouge". So much better than a rogue.
I couldn't really follow this latest one since I had a hard time figuring out which cell was which. You should develop a way to better define them (as well as placing letters a little better. I could hardly tell what the third to last panel's annotations were). -------------------- I typed this with my nose!
C:/DOS | C:/DOS/RUN | RUN/DOS/RUN |
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| Carlantis07 |
Posted: Mar 3 2010, 04:27 PM
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The reckless Rper Group: Member Posts: 643 Member No.: 844 Joined: 4-December 08 |
Bringing a new spin on a classic.
 -------------------- I am Carl Highlance the Clergy Guard
http://z15.invisionfree.com/Fire_Emblem_Sp...0488&st=0&#last The Final Prophecy The Final Prophecy |
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| Isaac55 |
Posted: Mar 3 2010, 05:24 PM
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 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Group: Member Posts: 696 Member No.: 945 Joined: 21-June 09 |
That was... really odd.
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| Edgar Allan Poe |
Posted: Mar 3 2010, 10:28 PM
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 Strategist Group: Member Posts: 223 Member No.: 971 Joined: 30-September 09 |
Weird. You spelled 'hungry' wrong.
Also for the Mega man guy, you should make it. "What the hell am I doing he-" To show he was in mid sentence when he got swallowed. This post has been edited by Edgar Allan Poe on Mar 3 2010, 11:48 PM --------------------  |
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