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 Carl's story topic
Carlantis07
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 06:05 AM


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I'm going to be typing a story and would like you all to help me out, I'm in a supreme writters block



(will post story soon)


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Denning Rosewater
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 07:33 AM


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Okay.


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ArchaiaSai
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 11:49 AM


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intriguing.

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Carlantis07
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 07:38 PM


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as the two suns slowley creep over the horizen the serenity seemed as if it would last an eternity. As the suns left the Horizen 48 misles charged over the land. They all landed into the center of a land around Arizona. the missles pierced the land creating a large crater. As war began the opposing sides chose to get the world involved. Russia attacked America who attacked Germany, Germany attacked Japan who bomed China. China took over korea, Korea didn't have a chance. Europe bombed Austrailia who called in America.


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ArchaiaSai
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 08:06 PM


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I beg to differ at the Korea part. Is this like a end of the world war type thing?


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Lucille
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 09:26 PM


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QUOTE (Carlantis07 @ Feb 1 2010, 07:38 PM)
As the two suns slowly creep over the horizon, the serenity seemed as if it would last an eternity. As the suns left the Horizon 48 missiles charged over the land. They all landed into the center of a land around Arizona. the missiles pierced the land, creating a large crater. As war began the opposing sides chose to get the world involved. Russia attacked America, who attacked Germany. Germany attacked Japan who bombed China. China took over Korea, Korea didn't have a chance. Europe bombed Austrailia, who called in America.

Fixed.
Denning Rosewater
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 09:39 PM


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QUOTE (Lucille @ Feb 1 2010, 09:26 PM)
QUOTE (Carlantis07 @ Feb 1 2010, 07:38 PM)
As the two suns slowly crept over the horizon, the serenity seemed endless. As the suns departed beyond the horizon, 48 missiles charged over the land. They all landed into a vast, open land, near Arizona. The missiles pierced the land, and caused a massive crater to form. As the war began, the opposing superpowers chose to get the world involved. Russia attacked America, who attacked Germany. Germany attacked Japan, who bombed China. China took over Korea, and Korea didn't have a chance. Europe bombed Austrailia, who called for America's aid.

Fixed.

Fixed again. And, if you really wanted us to help you write it, pitching an idea for a story would have helped.


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Posted: Feb 1 2010, 09:40 PM


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QUOTE (Denning Rosewater @ Feb 1 2010, 09:39 PM)
QUOTE (Lucille @ Feb 1 2010, 09:26 PM)
QUOTE (Carlantis07 @ Feb 1 2010, 07:38 PM)
As the two suns slowly crept over the horizon, the serenity seemed endless. As the suns departed beyond the horizon, 48 missiles charged over the land. They all landed into a vast, open land, near Arizona. The missiles pierced the land, and caused a massive crater to form. As the war began, the opposing superpowers chose to get the world involved. Russia attacked America, who attacked Germany. Germany attacked Japan, who bombed China. China took over Korea, and Korea didn't have a chance. Europe bombed Austrailia, who called for America's aid.

Fixed.

Fixed again. And, if you really wanted us to help you write it, pitching an idea for a story would have helped.

*help
Isaac55
Posted: Feb 1 2010, 10:02 PM


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Why didn't you nuke Yellow Stone?


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