Bonestorm99's spriteworks, Fire Emblem Spritez

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Mugs:

-April, my first custom mug, and the result of months of spriting growth. my
personal fave.
-Aiara. She was supposed to have the most detail I've ever done. I'll get back
to that mug one day and give her some more detail. The trim's too thick.
Nephenee. Still in progress, but nearing completion.
Emna, a splice of Clarine and a villager, and my female shaman/ dark sage.
It took a while to shade the hair for the extra color given to it.
An editing of Erk, basically trimming and shoulder pad.
A Splice to make an edited Bernard. He's playable in my ROM. Don't hate
on Bernard. He's AWSM.
Yogi bear...I like Yogi bear, and THAT happened. My first Full custom.
He will be a knight/ general, and like Colm steals Eirika's bracelet in FE8,
Yogi steals [Eirika]'s picnic basket. Figures

A sheet for Nephenee as a halberdier, her promoted class. I hit a block,
the critical poses. They confuse me with the shield there.

Me, and others, are really looking forward to seeing this in action.
My view count in my FEU gallery skyrocketed after I showed this!!

My weapon icons. Icons are so easy for me!!



There are so many, so I won't name them until anyone asks for that.

This post has been edited by b0nest0rm99 on Mar 14 2009, 02:38 PM

Your avatar mug needs more shading where the hair meets the face, and the clothes seem a bit small for her head. Maybe widen them?

On Aiara, her right eye (our left) needs to go up one pixel I think. The back of her hair seems a little angled, maybe smooth it out.

I like the Nephenee mug, but something bothers me about it. Can't put my finger on it though.

On the last two, you could recolor them or splice more to make them look less like their original mug.

The Yogi bear and the sheet look really good, very nice job. I also really like the weapons (7,2) and (2,4).

Good work!

The Yogi Bear looks a bit too cartoonish. Try adding a bit more outline to it.

The purple-haired girl looks good. Her eyes feel a bit too pixely and flat. Try adding some shading around the eyes.

Good work, nontheless.

Thanks for the compliments. they had less flaws than I
thought....
Anyway, Teh Astrid!!

Probably the shortest time it took to make a decent mug. I made
this because I looked at Astrid, and looked at Isadora and thought,
hey, no problem. I'll do it!

I think the armor leans toward blue a little too much, The position of the lip is a little low but that shouldn't be a problem to raise a bit. Otherwise good job on it.

Whenever I try to make the lip higher, it looks too high.
I might need to shade the colors to make it look balanced.

It looks perfectly fine when you move the mouth up one pixel. If you're concerned about it looking unbalanced, I suggest adding another middle tone to the very edge of the mouth on the far side, closer to the top.

Try raising the lip, and Astrid will look fine!

Good work as always!

I gave up my Nino long ago, and Then I made up
a new one by splicing A FE6 valkyrie (I forgot her
name)and Aion from FE7, and doing some editing.

I'm starting to get better at mugs. They actually
look pretty decent the first time I show them. That
Nephenee looked like crap the first time; look.

*Cecelia

Looks good, though something about her eyes looks like she didn't get enough sleep. Her mouth is also kind of crunched up.

Young Zelda WIP for a request at FEND.

Reference
Damn, this took a while. Tate was used as a base. Before
anyone says it, I will put the necklace later and shorten her
at the end.

Shorten her what? whaaat? D=

It's good but her right ear looks a little odd. It's at a different angle than her left ear

Her left ear is bent, and the hat and dress are pillow shaded

OMG its

[SIZE=14][COLOR=blue][B]YOGI BEar

Well so far your Zelda looks pretty good. It may have a few problems like the off angle ear and some pillowshading, but after you clean it up a bit it'll look great. Keep up the good work.