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High Lord Larry
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:07 PM


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Note: As I add things, I'll just be editing this post, rather than forcing you to sift through crap to find stuff.

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Jace. Random mercenary I made. Really old. I'll upload the newer versions later.

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Old Lloyd. Cuz he is soooo too awesome to be dead.

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Milo, the Assassin. Just a simple recolor. This one suck, I'll upload the new one later.

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Paladin/Falcoknight I made. Simple head/body splice recolor.

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Mage splice I made for a friend (Artur/Erk recolor)

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Lloyd and a bandit(?). Maybe it's Glass.

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Shaman recolor for my friend.

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Neon archer... ewww....

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My take on a Trainee unit that promotes to Priest/Cleric or Monk. Bad.

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Pre-Pegasus Knight/Wyvern Rider class. Just looks like a Cavalier.

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Myrmidon recolor.

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Believe it or not, this Warrior recolor was inspired by a pencil.

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Cavalier recolor for my sister.

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Take a random guess at why this pre-Myrmidon/Thief class is awkward.

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Pre class that goes to Merc or Archer. Journeyman with a smaller Merc sword.

--- The following have been uploaded from the computer that was not neglected.

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Probably the worst mug I have ever done. Please do not comment on it. It blows an I know it.

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A random mug. Way too much Hector(All except custom scar and Brendan's shoulder thang.)

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A bad attempt to make the previous mug look less Hector-y. Saleh's eyes and custom scar.

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Whatshername from up there, better. Collar fixed.

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Green cavalier. Sain, Glen. Not much to say, I think it's alright.

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A Lord of my friend's(Made by me). The hair is Seth, shoulder's are Dozla, and I don't remember who the chest is from.

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Sprite splice; Promoted Hector, someone's spear, Soldier helmet.

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That Merc dude, from up there. Better hair, scar, better armour coloring.

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That dude, but with an older scar.

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A couple faces, self explanatory. Just heads on bodies with recolors.

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Random wyvern rider. Glen with Pent's hair.

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My first tri-character splice. Matthew's face, Matthew and the Red Cavalier from FE6's hair, Orson's body.

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Old Lloyd again, but with the outline fixed.

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That Assassin from earlier, with the shadings corrected.

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Zonta's hair(tiny, tiny custom), Zonta's face, three custom scars, Carlyle's body, Zonta's shoulders. **Hair is colored from trim of Carlyle's clothes.

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Legault, someone, and Old Karel. Absolute crap.

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Fixed shading.

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Y'know how some people have really long attacks? Well, this is basically Lloyd dodging before Zephiel even strikes at him.

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"Yeah, there's a lance through me. But I twitched my head. So suck it!"

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I noticed a lot of people make mugs that are the closest gettable to them. This is me in Zonta's clothes with Harken's collar.

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lumoroske
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:16 PM


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Okay, these are pretty good for a beginner! But...

First: The streak needs to flow with the hair line, otherwise it looks like slime dripped on him. Armor colors are too bright (lower the saturation to match the under shirt's)

Second: Colors are too bright. that and you need a lighter outline on the hair. Otherwise good.

Third: Colors are too bright. needs a darker outline for brighter colors.

Fourth: Move selena's head lower-- the neck is too long. Also, get rid of selena's armor because it looks wierd hving two collars growing out of eachother.


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High Lord Larry
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:25 PM


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QUOTE (lumoroske @ Jun 12 2007, 05:16 PM)
Okay, these are pretty good for a beginner! But...

First: The streak needs to flow with the hair line, otherwise it looks like slime dripped on him. Armor colors are too bright (lower the saturation to match the under shirt's)

Second: Colors are too bright. that and you need a lighter outline on the hair. Otherwise good.

Third: Colors are too bright. needs a darker outline for brighter colors.

Fourth: Move selena's head lower-- the neck is too long. Also, get rid of selena's armor because it looks wierd hving two collars growing out of eachother.

First: Yeah, in the latest version, I cut out the different color. I also made the armour border les neon red.

Second: On the other computer, I redid alot of stuff. I fixed the different border colors on it.

Third: That was a bad idea of mine. Fixed on other computer.

Fourth: I only uploaded that to show old work. Trashed.


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Aeorys Kirru
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:33 PM


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I see you are an MS Paint-user?

They aren't bad, but they ARE quite saturated.


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lumoroske
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:44 PM


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Overall, you have a nice start. What you should focus on now is:

a) avoiding saturated colors (we all like bright colors, but they just don't work here)

cool.gif smoothing out the edges on your splices. a few points to look at are hair line shadings, matching the neck to the clar, etc.

c) Outlines. the general rule goes as the brighter the colors, the darker the outline. The duller the color, the lighter the out line. To see what I mean, look at the differences between FE7 and FE8 mugs.

d) we're here to help you improve via constructive critisism. Remember what we give are opinions and suggestions, not law. Regard and disregard help and critisim to what you percieve at worthwhile or not.

e) have fun! Don't stress on spriting, we're not grading you.


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Aeorys Kirru
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:45 PM


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Wow, that's so vet, Lumo.


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Gennaro
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 05:46 PM


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Yeah. He is one of my personal heroes. ecksdee.gif

Btw, MS Paint users are the kewl guys.


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Posted: Jun 12 2007, 06:40 PM


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QUOTE (Gennaro @ Jun 12 2007, 05:46 PM)

Btw, MS Paint users are the kewl guys.

* Exxucus high fives Genn


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High Lord Larry
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 08:34 PM


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Wow... I have a lot of crap...

EDIT: desaturated Old Lloyd:user posted image

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Posted: Jun 12 2007, 09:11 PM


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QUOTE (High Lord Larry @ Jun 12 2007, 08:34 PM)
Wow... I have a lot of crap...

EDIT: desaturated Old Lloyd:user posted image

Wow...That looks pretty good. The hair could be put on/ shaded better but.... Much better than any of my early works.
ANd LOL at the dodging comics. N00B!

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High Lord Larry
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 09:23 PM


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QUOTE (Exxucus @ Jun 12 2007, 09:11 PM)
QUOTE (High Lord Larry @ Jun 12 2007, 08:34 PM)
Wow... I have a lot of crap...

EDIT: desaturated Old Lloyd:user posted image

Wow...That looks pretty good. The hair could be put on/ shaded better but.... Much better than any of my early works.
ANd LOL at the dodging comics. N00B!

Yeah, it's something I've been procrastinating.. I like how Fado's beard fits.

Yeah. I botched the General lance.


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Posted: Jun 12 2007, 10:01 PM


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QUOTE (High Lord Larry @ Jun 12 2007, 05:07 PM)
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Legault, someone, and Old Karel. Absolute crap.

Older FE7 Eliwood.


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High Lord Larry
Posted: Jun 12 2007, 10:06 PM


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QUOTE (Gennaro @ Jun 12 2007, 10:01 PM)
QUOTE (High Lord Larry @ Jun 12 2007, 05:07 PM)
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Legault, someone, and Old Karel. Absolute crap.

Older FE7 Eliwood.

Thanks. It would be OK if Old Karel's head was just one pixel thinner.


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Aeorys Kirru
Posted: Jun 13 2007, 03:41 AM


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The EliwoodKarelLegault splice is a good concept, as well as the Raven-hair one at the bottom.


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Posted: Jun 13 2007, 06:15 AM


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Old Lloyds hair is kinda funny. laughingsmiley.gif


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