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carlantis'comix, my comics| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 13 2009, 04:32 AM
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ok number one
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| darkray |
Posted: Jul 13 2009, 04:58 AM
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i don't get it? who's the good side and whos the bad side?
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| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 13 2009, 07:07 AM
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 This post has been edited by carlantis25 on Jul 13 2009, 08:27 PM -------------------- I am Carl Highlance the Clergy Guard
http://z15.invisionfree.com/Fire_Emblem_Sp...0488&st=0&#last The Final Prophecy The Final Prophecy |
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| Denning Rosewater |
Posted: Jul 13 2009, 08:30 PM
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Awful.
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| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 22 2009, 05:44 AM
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@dening:it isn't awful its just the begining
@Darkray: mabey this will help  This post has been edited by carlantis25 on Jul 22 2009, 06:28 AM -------------------- I am Carl Highlance the Clergy Guard
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| Isaac55 |
Posted: Jul 22 2009, 09:17 PM
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Not bad... The actual comics need to tell the story though, not those character descriptions.
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| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 05:23 AM
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Isaac i know im getting into more depth with it now
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| Isaac55 |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 03:11 PM
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Still not quite getting it. I would put narration in there somewhere. Sorry I didn't mention that earlier.
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| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 04:00 PM
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listen isaac this is a complex story that where the present will interloop with the past which in turn will interloop with the future
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| Isaac55 |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 05:00 PM
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As long as it makes sense, then it is fine. As of now, I am not seeing any plot or any sort of story right now.
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| oranj |
Posted: Jul 23 2009, 07:06 PM
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| Dark Overlord Zack |
Posted: Jul 24 2009, 01:46 AM
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It's a bit hard to follow
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| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 28 2009, 06:04 AM
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 -------------------- I am Carl Highlance the Clergy Guard
http://z15.invisionfree.com/Fire_Emblem_Sp...0488&st=0&#last The Final Prophecy The Final Prophecy |
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| Exxucus |
Posted: Jul 28 2009, 01:12 PM
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Although it makes a bit of sense there are quite a few things that this comic should have explained, but did not.
Why is the red team trying to kill the White Lions? Why does that Assassin want Carl's sword? How does Carl shoot freaking LAZOR BEAMS!? And why are the White Lions attacking a castle? It takes more than a handful of soldiers to take a castle, too, BTW. The comic doesn't really have any sense of flow or story. It's just... things happening and hardly being explained. -------------------- |
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| carlantis25 |
Posted: Jul 29 2009, 05:42 AM
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this should clear things up
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