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Posted: Jul 28 2007, 08:44 PM
The Dark Knight
Group: Advisors of the Royal Council
Member No.: 23
Joined: 1-October 06
Right This is DoTDF here again i decided to move all the chaps into one topic so it wont get a bit confusing from now on depending if i do have time or even readers i
might post the next one since it don't take long for me to post my thoughts since i have it all thought out anyhow here are the previous chaps now.
On a nice sunny Tuesday morning two young students prepare to depart for their classes in high school, one with a heart of gold another with a heart of coal. While they have their differences the two are well on their way to being close friends, and with this friendship will come great challenges and trials in their quest for peace.
"Dang it all, why is it I have to go to school after a whole week of working, doesn't seem fair at all." complained the 5"4 black haired young man "OY BOY" cried another student among the crowd of many "Hey Kit what up" replied the bored and tired young man "Yo I was wondering if you could take my Thursday shift I REALLY need to go somewhere" pleaded the other 5"5 young man known as Kit "There is no way I am working another shift this week since I'm working pretty much Tomorrow" said the young man "Oh come on Elvis just do me this favor man come on" asked Kit "Listen Tsuji this is seriously not how i wanna be in class for my first week of school so stop buggin-- *EXPLOSION* WTH WAS THAT" exclaimed Elvis "No idea lets check it out" suggested Tsuji/Kit "heheheh very funny Kit, almost had me there yeah let's check out a deathly sounding explosion while being late for class real smart" said Elvis sarcastically "Oh come on dude where is you sense of adventure" said Tsuji/Kit "It's back home with my cheque book now lets go to class alrea--- HEY WTH DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING" screamed Elvis "Improvising" cried Tsuji/Kit as he dragged Elvis towards the direction of the explosion
*At the scene of the explosion*
"I hate you so very much right now" cried the 5"9 tall young man "Hey how the heck was i suppose to know that tree would stab you through the chest" answered the other 5"8 tall young man "I would so be dead if it weren't for my bloody powers" *Rips a large tree branch out of his stomach* said the first man, "Dude you gotta stop doing that it's scaring the shi-- Oh looks who here finally" said the second man happily. Elvis and Tsuji/Kit arrived and were hiding behind a nearby tree and witnessed the first man removing the tree from his stomach, "Ok that is so wrong on so many levels" said Tsuji/Kit with a slight hint of fear in his tone "I think it was kinda cool" said Elvis excitingly "Well it's about to get alot better or worse for you two" said someone behind them. By the time the two young boys were talking with each other again a mysterious portal opens and reveals a shadowy figure "Well it's about to get alot better or worse for you two" said the figure before he dragged the two boys into the portal to a place that will be carved into their memories for the rest of their lives.
*In an unknown location*
"God Dammit I feel like I was hit by a rock" whined Elvis
"That is because you did young one" replied another from the shadows of a nearby boulder
"Who the you know, that place beneath us are you and where the you know, that place beneath us am I" yelled Elvis angrily
"You are where you always wanted to be...In the Underworld" replied the strange figure with a hint of amusement in his tone
"Ok so you answered the where NOW WHO IN THE BLOODY you know, that place beneath us ARE YOU" screamed Elvis
Unknowingly Elvis' outbursts had attracted nearby demons who seem to find the fact that a young human in their territory quite fascinating, and slowly approach the young high schooler. Elvis finally noticing his sudden predicament slowly backs away and prepares to grab a nearby torch stick.
"Ok I know I always said I could fight off a pack of wolves but I don't think anyone thought I meant demons too." Said Elvis as he prepares for what he believes to be the end of the line, only to find that he cannot touch the torch stick.
"WTF why the you know, that place beneath us can't I touch this stick" yelled Elvis in angry and in fear
"That is because you are in your astral form which means you cannot touch solid objects" replied the stranger who is watching the fight coming close to commencing.
"Wait does that mean they can't hurt me?" Elvis asked quizzically
"Oh no you misunderstand me where you lie now is the realm of the demon spirits which means these demons are very much solid and not solid, so yes they can rip you into very tiny pieces even as an astral projection."
"SON OF A B----UMMFFFF" said Elvis as he was jumped by a small demon spirit with a small club
"HUMAN SOUL!!! MUST FEAST!!!! HA HA HA HA HA." cried the demon happily
"Oh heck no I'm not gonna die like this not to some....Small......stupid....... WEAKLING!!!!" screamed Elvis as he somehow created an explosion which killed the demon instantly.
"Whoa how did I just do that" murmured Elvis quietly only to have his words picked up by the stranger "It is because you are in your astral form, because in this realm the power of the soul is what matters not the power of your body, which means that your soul must burn brightly or darkly with the power to surpass and defeat these demons" said the stranger wisely
"Heh heh heh" says Elvis as he grins evilly, by now the demons as slowly backing away from the young psychopath "Well well looks like I'm gonna like living here for a while." spoke Elvis as his body slowly is covered in what appears to be a dark sickly aura of death.
*In a bazaar in Twilight Town*
"Ow ow ow this hurts alot more than that hang over I had when I stole some drinks from the bar" whined Tsuji
As he whispers this, a young green eyed woman watches him behind a house with her black kitten (I like black kittens so very vicious
"Um are you alright there" ask the young woman
"Hmm I'm just alrigh- OMG YOUR OLETTE FROM KINGDOM HEARTS" exclaimed Tsuji as he turned around to look at the person speaking to him to find the young woman from Kingdom Hearts two staring at him with her curious gaze.
"Um what do you mean from Kingdom Hearts???? And how do you know my name" asked Olette as she is tilting her head side to side.
"Wait where am I" asked Tsuji as he checks his surroundings
"Your in the new Twilight bazaar trading post for people from other worlds come together to trade items and munny for different things" replied Olette with a gentle smile grazing her features.
"I see um have you by any chance seen a violent short Asian man around here he wears glasses possibly carries a knife around and tends to talk in a way people do not understand????" ask Tsuji as he looks around for any signs of an Elvis attack.
"Um no I don't think I have seen anyone matching that description have you Nightshade???" asked Olette
"Meow" replied the kitten known as Nightshade
"Oh well I guess not sorry we couldn't be of more help but if you like I coul-*BBBBBBEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPP* oh whoops I'm going to be late meeting Sora, Kairi and the others well it was nice meeting you uh.."
"Ray Ray Tsuji" says the 5"7 liar Tsuji
"Ok well then it was nice meeting you and I hope you find your obscure friend then bye." says Olette as she runs off into the busy town square.
"Wow so I'm in the world if Kingdom Hearts and Riku is here too huh, hmmmm this could turn out quite nicely" grins Ray as he thinks about how he might be able to steal Riku's Road to Dawn Keyblade.
*A few hours later*
"I AM SO LOST RIGHT NOW" screamed Ray in frustration after spending a whole 3 hours trying to find out where Olette was meeting Riku and the others.
"I knew I should asked if I could go along but man I can't believe I choked like that GOD." whined Ray as he tilted his head down in shame.
"Uh hi can I help you with something" asked a squeaky and high pitched voice from the shadows.
"I dunno if you can help me so mu---OMG IT'S KING MICKEY" exclaimed Tsuji.............again.
"Wow I must be getting famous or something cause I don't remember seeing you around here" replied Mickey in surprise.
"Whoa this is so cool I got to meet King Mickey in the flesh and not some stupid person wearing a costume THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE 'except being able to own Riku's Keyblade'" mumbled Ray
"Um did you say something" asked Mickey with strange unexplainable question marks appearing above his head flashing left and right.
"NOPE NOT A THING I DIDN'T SAY A THING... anyhow aren't you suppose to meet Olette and the others somewhere????" ask Ray
"Yes I was actually on my way over there how did you know???" asked Mickey honestly
"Um I'm a friend of Olette only that I'm new to this place so I kinda got lost heheheh"
said Ray with a slight blush of embarassment.
"Well then follow me I will take you to meet the others then" said Mickey with a big mousy smile (GOD THAT SOUNDED SO WRONG).
"Aite let's move out" said Ray with an all so knowing smile.
And Now Chapter Two
"Say Ray mind me asking you a question" spoke Mickey in his funny high pitched voice.
"Sure go right ahead Mickey" said Ray as he thought of ways to get his hands on Riku's Road to Dawn
"Where did you get that strange rune on your hand???" asked Mickey as he stared at Ray's left hand with interest.
"Huh what--WHERE IN GODS NAME DID THIS COME FROM" screamed Ray as he notices the strange intricate runes etched on his skin.
"You mean you didn't do that yourself" asked Mickey with a serious look on his mousy features.
"Heck no my mom would so not let me get a tatoo like this" said Ray with a hint of homesickness.
"Hmmm interesting" 'Could he be the legendary Gundalf I read of in the Chronicles'
"Say Mickey how far are we till we meet Riku and the others" asked Ray
"Oh they are right around that corner here if you want you can go ahead I actually need to get something from Cid anyhow so tell the others I will be there shortly" said Mickey as he rushed off into another alleyway
"Well that was strange" said Ray as he walked on and finally ended up in a large town square
"Say Donald do you know where his Majesty is" asked Sora the brunette Keyblade Master.
"How am I suppose to know but he better get here soon we have to go back and see Minnie and Daisy soon before they lose it."
"Um hey am I interrupting something here" asked a voice from a nearby alleyway
"Who's There" asked Riku as he materialized his Road to Dawn to prepare for a battle that may occur
"Whoa whoa hey no need for violence I just wanted to meet you guys that's all" said Ray as he stepped out of the shadows and revealed himself to the small group assembled.
"Oh it's you Ray was it?" said Olette as she was silently pondering about how he came here.
"Yep that's me I came here with Mickey, but he said he had to go check out something so he will meet up with the rest of you guys shortly." answered Ray
"How do I know you didn't kidnap him and is just saying that so we don't end up looking for him hmmm." spoke Riku suspiciously
"Gwarsh Riku he don't look like no nobody or any member of the organization besides he looks like he doesn't want to fight you." said Goofy with that hidden and unfound wisdom.
"*sigh* Fine I guess if Goofy thinks your alright I guess I can too" said Riku as he sent his keyblade back into limbo.
"Well while were at it why don't we introduce ourselves, I'm Sor-" "Sora, Riku, Kairi, Donald, Goofy, Leon, Yuffie, Aerith, Cloud, Tifa, Merlin, Olette, Roxas and Namin-wait a second aren't they merged with Sora and Kairi???? said Ray
The whole gang is silently in shock and wondering who Ray really was because he had just said all their names without them even telling him and he also knew about how Roxas and Namine were apart of Sora and Kairi. However before the group could question Ray a group of Heartless and Nobodies appear and begin their assault against the citizens of Twilight Town.
"What the why are there Nobodies here, they don't have leader to follow so they shouldn't be attacking the innocent." said Roxas as he looks at his fellow kin attacking the people of Twilight Town.
"Well we have no time to ask questions lets get them before innocent lives are lost" said Sora with confidence
"Unfortunately boys you won't be stopping my army anytime soon" said by a mysterious figure from the shadows of a nearby building.
"Who are you" asked Ray
"Who me I am simply a demon who wishes to see you Mr. Tsuji DIE" spoke the demon before he suddenly rushed Ray and grabbed him by the throat and threw him across the square.
"RAY!!!!" cried Olette as she witnessed her new found friend being thrown into the local blacksmiths shop.
"Humph and he is suppose to be this legendary gundalf, how pitiful I have seen snails move faster." said the demon with confidence
"*huff* don't *puff* count me *huff* out yet you jerk." said Ray as he stumbled out of the store with bruises and cuts across his body and carrying twin blades.
"Ha you still can stand, and judging by how you are carrying those weapons you wish to fight as well, well well I suppose you fit the hero role however you still lack the skill to defeat me." boasted the demon
"Pfft you don't scare me, heck my sister is scarier is than you which btw is insanely true." said Ray with a smile
"Well then let's see if you can use those swords as good as you use your mouth." said the demon dryly
'Dammit I can't fight him not in this condition, not to mention the dude is super fast, MAN IF I JUST HAD THE POWER' just as Ray is thinking these words, the rune on his left hand begins to glow a white light and Ray is beginning to feel its effects.
"Whoa I feel lighter and stronger heck these wounds don't even hurt anymore" spoke Ray in amazement at his new found abilities.
"Well then lets see if that hand will still glow when I cut it off." said the demon as he begins to rush Ray again this time brandishing his long sword.
However to Ray the demon seemed to be moving in slow motion 'this is too strange why is it he's moving so slowly, oh well an advantage is an advantage' "LET'S GO YA BIG UGLY PIECE OF $H!+" and charges in with blinding speed and effectively chops off both of the demon's hands in that one move.
"AARRRGGGG MY HANDS YOU BLASTED HUMAN, YOU DARE ATTACK ME GARELITH THE DEMON GENERAL OF ARIES" cries Garelith
"Whoa did I just do that" said Ray in amazement
"Just you wait human my allies will be coming soon and they will make due with your life" spoke Garelith with malice as he disappears with his heartless and nobodies through shadow portals.
Meanwhile on top of a nearby house there is a cloaked figure with two large swords strapped to his back
"Hmm it seems I may have found him, the one who shall be my enemy and the one who I must slay to gain the power I need." mumbled the figure before he too vanishes through a shadow portal.
"Well then it seems you aren't as bad as I thought." said Riku as he admired Ray's handiwork.
"Yeah well I learned from a friend of mine to always think logically before making false accusations but then again my friend is a lazy genius with an untold I.Q. (Gee guess who ) " replied Ray
"Hey Ray do you have a place to stay yet????" asked Sora with a smile that could rival that of a fox.
"Um no not yet and to tell you the truth I'm kinda outta munny as well, heheheheh." chuckled Ray as he realized his predicament
"Well if you want you can stay with us at the hotel." suggested Yuffie (No Kit your not gonna get laid and also I aint writing anything like that, not on a forum)
"That sounds cool and thanks for letting me." thanked Ray
"It's no problem at all, after all you saved Twilight Town from those monsters." said Leon with a stonic tone.
"Well then lets stop standing around here and go have some fun." said Aerith with a big smile on her face.
"YEAH LETS." cried Yuffie
*The next day*
"Well I really enjoyed spending a day with you guys where I come from you guys are heroes and pretty much are legends" said Ray as he prepared to leave in search of his companion for whom he believes had fallen into the Kingdom Hearts world.
"Are you sure you have to leave so soon?" asked Olette as she stands with the others at the South exit to the Twilight Express
"Yeah my friend is out there with no idea where to go so I plan to find him and help him out but thanks for caring" said Ray with a lecherous smile that would earn him many beatings from his sister.
"Heheheh I'm sorry to ruin this little going away ceremony but I really need to get going myself" called out a familiar voice
"What the-" spoke Ray before he was sucker punched in the face by a Behemoth
"Why you son of a-AHHHHHHH" cried Ray as he is suddenly swarmed by heartless attempting to devour his heart
"RAY!!!!!" cried his new friends
"Ha ha ha ha ha, not so tough are you now boy" laughed Garelith
*Suddenly Ray is now in a dark and very desolate room with no light*
'No I don't want to lose my heart not to these things, I want to live, I'm not ready to die yet'
You do not have to young one
'Who are you'
I am the one who shall help guide you in your quest for peace
Regardless right now you require your weapons, now then call them to you call forth your keyblades
'I have keyblades?'
Yes, but in order to summon them now you must call out their names
*Back in reality*
"I CALL FORTH THE ROAD OF DAWN AND THE ACROSSING OF TWO" screamed Ray as two keyblades were brought forth in his hands; one with the same shape as Riku's Road of Dawn however with a light crimson streak across the blade and the key chain has the head of a fox attached, his second keyblade has the same shape as the Acrossing of Two however the blade is crimson red and has a bright blue handle and a fox head shaped crest, after materializing them he disposed of the heartless with some trouble.
"What!!???" yelled Garelith in surprise
"Hmm now then face the wrath of the Keyblade Master RAY" cried Ray as he charged the Behemoth with his two keyblades.
However just as Ray prepared to strike the beast it grabs both his blades with its clawed hands and simply throws him into a nearby lightpost.
"AAAAGGGG" moaned Ray
"OMG RAY" called out Kairi
"Are you alright" asked Olette
"Dammit wth is going on with me, why can't I fight like I did yesterday" Ray asked no one in particular
"That is because your Gundalf abilities don't activate unless you are holding a real weapon, and quite frankly giant keys don't quite count as weapons" said the cloaked figure from the night before.
"Who are you" asked Ray as he watches the man prepare for combat
"Me....I am the New Dark Knight of the Underworld"
Ok that is the end of that chapter and hopefully you guys won't think it sucked that much because of the battle scenes which btw is all first time done and same with this kind of fanfic/crossover/crappy work anyhow I hope to get some feedback at least.
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 09:05 PM
Group: Leader of the Royal Council
Member No.: 1
Joined: 19-February 06
You're horrible on details. XD
But not bad.
Posted: Jul 28 2007, 10:24 PM
Group: Member of Royal Court
Member No.: 62
Joined: 24-July 07
Elvis, i was itching that entire time to yell at you on MSN for every missed punctuation. If i had, there would be an insane ammount of mesages. Work on that stuff. Otherwise it was a pretty good story, so far.
This post has been edited by CJR on Jul 28 2007, 10:25 PM
Teh Uber Nerd of DOOOM!
Posted: Jul 29 2007, 06:19 AM
Group: Leader of the Royal Council
Member No.: 1
Joined: 19-February 06
Great, thanks, some people agree with me.
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Posted: Jul 29 2007, 06:35 AM
Omni D Zero
Group: Member of Royal Court
Member No.: 17
Joined: 25-September 06
hey....i comented about the punctuation before... o.o tsuji why did u delete it
Posted: Aug 4 2007, 08:11 AM
The Dark Knight
Group: Advisors of the Royal Council
Member No.: 23
Joined: 1-October 06
Ok before Anyone reads this chapter I wanna point out that me and the Kit have quite a few nicknames well I dont but he does rofl. Here are some
DoTDF- Elvis, Davis, Ryu, Black Dragon of Shadow
Swordsmaster-Stephen, Tsuji, Ray, Kit, The King of Blades, Gundalf
These are all that I had thought up of for the time being but it may change so keep an eye out then anyhow here is the chapter
Chapter 3 The Road to the Dimensions
"The......Dark......Knight..........of the Underworld??" wondered Ray as he was trying to slowly recover from his fight with the Behemoth Demon, only to look down at himself to see the damage he had received from colliding with the lamp post, many of his injuries like his cuts and bruises would heal in a few days however, his pride would not heal so easily.
"I really see no point in explaining myself to someone who will die soon enough." replied the Dark Knight, who looks to be in deep-thought about something, just as the Behemoth is preparing to engage his new foe.
"Hmmm the Dark Knight of the Underworld you say....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA don't make me laugh, you could never replace Sparda, so you might as well drop the whole I'm so cool act alrea-" laughed Garelith just before he was hacked into pieces in a blink of an eye.
"Whoa, what just happened there" asked Sora as he looked on fearfully.
"I barely noticed him draw his weapon" said Riku as he examined the Dark Knight's sword: It was a fairly large weapon however if you looked closely at the handle to the tip of the blade, you might think the sword itself was alive, with the way the sword was covered in what appeared to be flesh and embedded at the centre of the blade was a blood colored gem. The blade itself looked about 5"6, which was a little bigger than the wielder itself, if you included the handle and hilt guard, and appeared to weigh well over a ton, however because of the speed that the Dark Knight just used to cut down Garelith, made Riku think otherwise.
"Well regardless we have to help out Ray" said Squall
"Yeah but how?? He's all the way over there, and that demon looks like it going to kill somebody" quaked Donald as prepared to run for his life.
*Back with Ray*
'Dammit Why can't I fight, heck why am I shaking so much.' wondered Ray as he lied down against a wall and watched on as the Dark Knight prepared to fight with the Behemoth, using his large demonic weapon, 'I feel so weak, so inferior compared to him, if only I had the power then I could show this pompous jerk whose the stronger swordsman' thought Ray as he finally took a good look at his marked hand. '"That is because your Gundalf abilities don't activate unless you are holding a real weapon, and quite frankly giant keys don't quite count as weapons"' remembered Ray as he finally realized what was going on.
"YOU!!!!!!" yelled the Behemoth as he pointed at the Dark Knight
"STEP AWAY FROM MY PREY NOW" cried the Behemoth once more as he prepared to unleash his claws on an unsuspecting Ray.
"Unfortunately I can't allow you to kill him" said the Dark Knight as brought his blood covered sword infront of his face in an unknown stance.
"Then....you....MUST DIE" screamed the Behemoth as he vanished from sight only to appear in front of the Dark Knight and thrust his claws at the Knight only to find him gone, as he too vanished from sight at the last second.
"AHHHUH WHERE ARE YOU!!!" yelled the Behemoth as he searched around for his missing prey before he heard what he was deeply dreading.
"Over here" came the last two words the Behemoth would ever hear, as he was hacked into pieces by the Knight and his colossal sword.
"Wow, he took like absolutely no time in dispatching that demon, heck he was even cooler than Ray was yesterday." gasped Sora in shock and amazement, even though his friends and companions were very well mirroring his expression with the exception of Cloud, Squall and Riku.
"OY!!!! WHO ARE YOU!!" yelled Ray as he finally snapped out of his train of thought with Sora's comment.
"As I said before I have no reason to explain myself to someone who I am about to vanquish." replied the Knight as he slowly approached the surprised Ray with his onyx black eyes fixed on killing the newly endowed Keyblader.
However before the Knight could take another step, he was confronted by two young Keyblade Masters, namely Sora and Riku with both Keyblades drawn "Not so fast, We aren't about to let you hurt our friend you got that." spoke Sora with a commanding tone, "I agree, Ray has become a close friend of ours and we are not just going to stand back idly as you hurt our friends." said Riku with his Road to Dawn drawn.
"No, this is my battle and you guys will stay out of it." came the the determined voice of Ray, as he slowly but surely stood straight and faced his enemy in the eyes.
Around him his new-found friends are ever more shocked at Ray's declaration for a 1-on-1 duel with the Dark Knight in his weaken condition.
The challenged in question is currently looking at his opponent with a look of amusement and a grin "I am quite surprised to see that you are still able to stand, let alone be prepared to fight me. Very well if it is a 1-on-1 duel you want, its a 1-on-1 duel you'll get." said the Knight as he brought his sword into his all too familiar stance .
"Ray don't be stupid, let us help you out. Together we can beat this punk." exclaimed Sora in a confident tone.
"Yes, Sora is right, the three of us can easily wipe the floor with this guy." commented Riku as he was quickly thinking up a strategy as to how they can defeat their speedy foe.
"You guys don't really get it...This isn't a win or lose battle, this is a battle of honor, and I....WILL NOT LOSE TO THE LIKES OF HIM!!!" roared Ray as he drew a military knife from his rear pocket, which in turn caused the rune on his left hand to glow brightly.
"As a friend of mine always said, "Be prepared for anything and never give up."(Ok fine so I didn't say this to you but I do say that to other people) spoke Ray as he too vanished from sight only to appear infront of the Dark Knight and unlike the Behemoth struck his foe in the heart with his knife.
The Dark Knight looked down in surprise, and spoke with an all too similar evil smile and said "Well well, I never expected to find you here.......Kit."
Startled by the Dark Knight's comment Ray jumped back 10 metres to separate himself from the Knight, so he could think "Who are you?" asked Ray
"Heh heh heh, I guess I do look different don't I?? Kit, but I'm sure even you could figure out this little puzzle." smiled the Knight as he pulled the knife out of his heart as though it didn't even hurt, much to the surprise and fear of Sora and his fellow companions.
"But that can't be right can it" spoke Ray as he tried to think about the situation as Elvis would.
On the contrary Stephen he is indeed your friend and fellow warrior Elvis Tran, whom is now known as Davis Tran
spoke the mysterious voice.
"It's you again." said Ray as he looked around in search of the voice, only to see a young woman with flowing emerald green hair surrounded by what appeared to be 6 moving robot hands floating 5 metres from him.
"So, you are the Oracle of the Riders." said Davis with a glare.
"Indeed I am Dark Knight, however I am not here to explain about who I am, but am here to take you and Ray to meet your Lords" spoke the Oracle in her mystical and alluring voice.
"Lords?, I answer to no one but myself." spoke Davis defiantly and moves to grasp the handle of his sword tightly only to find that it is missing. "What the!!??" exlaimed Davis as he takes a look around only to find that the Oracle has his sword suspended above the ground infront of a portal.
"If you wish for your questions to be answered please come with me, I assure you that I will not allow them to do you harm unless you so wish for it to be" said the Oracle with a gentle smile as she gestured for the two young men to step through the portal.
"Well then, should we go through Ryu." asked the Kit as he finally calmed down enough to use his friend's old nickname.
"Well she has the Sparda, so I don't so much have a choice, so I say...Let's get going and meet these two lords." spoke Ryu as he went and entered the portal with the Kit following right behind him.
*On top of a mountain/cliff in another world*
A strange and mysterious portal appeared, on top of the Hokage Monument and out of the portal came Davis and Ray.
"Alright, now where are we??." wondered Ray
"To simply put it, you are in the world of Naruto where your training will begin." came the strong and demonic voice of a familiar dark lord.
"Wait a minute, Hades Is that you????" questioned Davis as he noticed a demon rift opening up, to reveal the demonic face of Hades, Lord of the Underworld.
"My my, do I not gain any sort of attention from you mortals." spoke another voice however this one was one of full of wisdom and courage.
"Wait a second aren't you Odin???" gasped Ray as he saw the face of the Father of the Gods in Norse Mythology, who showed to be a aged man with long white hair, wearing old medieval armor and muscles that could rival that of Hercules.
"Indeed I am, My champion" replied Odin in his deep voice
"Champion!!!!" exclaimed the two young men in surprise and in confusion.
"Yes my champion, as much as your young Dark Knight is the champion of Hades." answered Odin as he pointed towards Davis.
"I'm the champion of Hades????" repeated Davis with a rare look of surprise.
"Yes you are my Dark Knight, for I have seen your many survival fights in the Underworld and the suffering you endured to obtain the power you have today, so I have chosen you to be my champion." supported Hades with his demonic voice as the two young warriors are trying to absorb this new and startling information.
"You know I so guessed you were gonna be Hades' champion." chuckled Ray
"Yeah well I never woulda guessed you were going to be Odin's Champion, I mean you the champion of the Father of the Norse Gods." replied Davis with the same kind of amused tone as Ray.
"Well then, now that you two have finally understood your status, now I must explain why you have obtained this status." said Hades
"Yeah why are we the Champions of such powerful gods." asked Ray with a confused kind of look that demanded answers.
"Yes well, the reason why is something your friend is already aware of, except that now his target has become much too powerful for him to take on by himself." said Odin looking at Davis right in the eyes, as if to try see into the very depths of his soul.
"You mean Aries has become that powerful?!" suddenly exclaimed Davis angrily with a clenched fist.
"Yes, he has now drawn forth the powers of the Abyss, and it seems as though it will not be long before he releases the demons and beasts from Abyss and unleash them upon the dimensions." spoke Hades, as Odin was explaining to Ray about how Aries went rouge after his survival at the hands of Kratos the new God of War.
"I see, so the reason the two of us are here is because of Aries and his unrelenting power and his lust for destruction." commented Davis as he was wondering what the former God of War is doing while the two of them are here.
"No, the reason the two of you are here is because of me and Odin, for you see my brother Zeus has become a coward since Kratos came into power, and has refused to intervene in this affair and has prohibited the other gods from interfering as well." said Hades dully
"Indeed Zeus has long since become a shell of his former self, so Hades and I had decided to take matters into our own hands and select our champions from the centre of the dimensions." commented Odin as Ray is effectively lost in this long and confusing talk about Aries, and why he and Davis were taken from their world to help fight Aries.
"Wait, what do you mean the centre of all dimensions??" asked Ray finally out of pure and total confusion.
"Our world Kit, is the centre of all the dimensions. Take Twilight Town for example, that is a dimension, the whole Kingdom Hearts world is a dimension. However back home we find them as a game and semi-cartoon, the reason why our dimension is the centre of all, is because our world has many watchers who use their knowledge to create animes or stories about the other dimensions without fully realizing that they are dictating the real deaths of others." spoke Davis with his logical tone, which again left Ray confused.
"Ray, let me tell you simply. All those animes and games back home are real, however the people from those animes and games don't know about us and what is going on in our world, while we do know what's going on in theirs." said Odin in hopes of clearing the fog.
"Ok, now I get it." said Ray as he finally grasped the situation.
"Now then back to the point of why you are here in the ninja world, the reason is so that the two of you can develop your disguising abilities, for the other worlds that do not have humans as the main species or even as a species at all." explained Hades as he and Odin were beginning to close the portals, to return to their other tasks.
"Alright so we are going to become ninjas right???" asked Ray with a hint of suspense.
"Yes you are." answered Odin
"AWESOME I GOT DIBS ON LEARNING FROM JIRAYA!!" yelled Ray as he jumped for joy.
"Figures you would say something like that, well then take your time finding your sensei because I'm going to go take a look around." sighed Davis as he jumped off the monument to go patrolling for demons.
"HEY, WAIT UP FOR ME....dumb stamina freak." mumbled Ray as he took the long road down the monument, but never the less looking forward in finding his sensei, because Ray already had an idea as to where he could find his new sensei, and thus began his search for the Konoha Hotsprings.
Well that's the end of this chap hopefully I did enough of my minor editing to make some remote difference, however I do plan to edit some of mine so they are easier to read but the information itself will be the same. And yes I know that was a lame fight and battle but come on I fought demons in you know, that place beneath us already do I really need to fight them again with some problems.
Posted: Aug 14 2007, 03:43 AM
Group: Leader of the Royal Council
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Joined: 19-February 06
Awesome, keep up the good work.