Group: TARGET PRACTICE
Member No.: 156
Joined: 28-January 11
WHILE REVIEWING YOUR APPLICATION WE FOUND A COUPLE OF THINGS THAT NEED FIXING.
At the moment, I don't get a very good sense of what Wesley's motivations are. He seems very blase about everything which is unusual in a zombie apocalyse (though if that's what you were going for, you might need to make that more obvious). Please add a bit more about why he's a rogue and not part of another member group (it would be hard for a rogue to get by with a dog, moving from place to place because supplies are low thanks to the Outsiders) and also include a bit about what he's afraid of in the zombie apocalypse or what his greatest desire is - pretty much something that would give a bit of a hint to his personality. <
Anyway, please don't think I'm picking on your character or app it's just that rogues are always the most popular group for whatever reason so their apps get scrutinized more than other member groups.