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Beautifully_Broken	Posted: Apr 5 2007, 09:37 PM
Villager Group: Members Posts: 41 Member No.: 136 Joined: 29-March 07	Yesterday Yesterday you said you loved me Today you told me lies Yesterday you made me laugh Today you made me cry Yesterday you told me You hoped our love would never end How was I to know You would fall for my friend You both knew all my secrets I trusted you with my heart You promised we'd be together Today we are apart I should have seen it sooner But like they say love is blind Your love took over my heart Over my spirit and my mind I still don't fully understand How I still love you now as I did then But I'll never forget how you took my heart, My love and even my friend eh , not my best but oh well ! --------------------

Windlord	Posted: Apr 6 2007, 10:11 AM
Master of three blades Group: Admin of Wind Posts: 4,130 Member No.: 2 Joined: 2-January 06	it's still pretty good though... kinda sad. -------------------- "You'll get no sympathy from me." -Ike

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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 08:10 PM

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This is one of my favorites you've written, I really like how at the beginning you switch between yesterday/today. I found that really cool.

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Beautifully_Broken	Posted: Apr 9 2007, 09:05 PM
Villager Group: Members Posts: 41 Member No.: 136 Joined: 29-March 07	thanks ! --------------------

princesspea	Posted: Apr 14 2007, 09:02 PM
watch her falling Group: Members Posts: 304 Member No.: 40 Joined: 6-June 06	i really really liked it!!!! its awesome just like you! --------------------

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