Vanilla Hush, Serval

[Vanilla]

Character Information
Name: Vanilla Hush
Age: 18
Gender: Female

Animal Form: Serval
Preferred Form: Human

Human Description:
Vanilla is not really that tall compared to other feline shifters of her breed. She is only 5'2 but don't let her height fool you. Her hair is coal black and is cut to make her hair cover her face like long bangs, short at the top then long at the bottom, though her hair is very long to where it ends at her mid back. Her skin is tanned, even though her breed is really only seen when the sun is just raising and setting, and there are dark freckles that mask her face. They pop up on her shoulders, tummy, sides, and thighs to lower back. Bright green eyes with a ring of hidden gray and golden around the iris. Vanilla's body happens to be in good shape and her upper body strength is equal to her lower which is actually very strong but not muscular.

Her clothes are just some brown cloth sowed together. The form of it is just to hide her human female parts. It is really nothing more than dark brown cloth circling her chest down to a few inches above her bellybutton. The second part of her clothes is just a skirt that rest on her hips. It does down to her mid thigh with some cuts on the bottom edges. During the winter or when the weather gets cold, Vanilla will usually be in her feline form since her clothes won't cover enough to keep herself warm. Her neck is ringed by long string a few times but nothing more.

Animal Description:
Vanilla is slender in her form from her skinny human body. She still has that thin rope around her neck even when she is in this form. The feline's eyes are backwards as a serval. Most of the eye is gold then gray to a fine line of gray to the iris. There are coal black spots along her fur, some larger and closer together than others, through the spots shrink at her paws, chest and tummy, and around her eyes. A large white spot is behind her large ears. The tail is stripped like a tigers but it isn't dripped white. The whiteness on her fur starts at her muzzle then creeps over to her cheeks then down her neck and chest. It continues to whiten under her tummy and some inner fur on her limbs which is only visible when she moves them. Her nose happens to be two different colors. The pink splits the black parts in half and takes up most of the nose. The black sides are just two dots compared to the pink on her nose. Her claws are always out which makes them sharp and jagged for her prey. Vanilla's ears are large on her skull which makes her hearing extremely acute. Nothing really gets past Vanilla, not even under ground. Her tail is 15 inches long and usually is curled up slightly as she paces around.


Personality:
Vanilla is kind of old fashioned in many ways like she goes by her animal ways a bit more than human. Another one is to get married and have kittens at a young age She loves the water and would spend tons of hours just a river or lake. Rain happens to be her favorite weather so the feline hides away on a sunny day. She could be mostly found late in the day where the sun would set for her hunting. She would spend all night hunting for food to where the sun would raise. Vanilla would hide away and sleep til the hours pass away along with the light. She will mostly hunt down small prey but if large prey comes into view, she would have to join forces with someone since she can't take done a moose or anything in that kind of size. The feline is over all friendly and kind to other if they treat her the same way. If they treat her with harsh words and actions, she would mostly just pad away with mumbled stuff and ears back. On the other side, Vanilla loves kittens and wouldn't mind taking care of a busy mother's cubs while she is gone. It would be completely free, if there is currency, since she would just enjoy little ones. Though, she would love some of her own to take care of and help her shifter breed out with the population. Though, she wouldn't care what kind of shifter it was as long as they loved each other. He could be a moose, a bear, a lion, or even a fish for all she cared. Love was always strange for her but her mother happened to find a serval in the land so why couldn't she. The only problem is if she can find one.

History:
The feline was born in a litter of three. It was just the four of them since her father was such a player and didn't care about his kittens. He just wanted all of the action and none of the miracles after it. Her mother worked hard for all of them to grow up happily and healthily. But, Vanilla had a decent education as well as her brothers, Ruffle and Spat. She spent most of her time in a river. Her mother had shooed them away since it was their time to find a female of their own as well as a land. Vanilla had to take of her mother after she fell sick from cutting herself. Luckily, the mother had survived and finally shooed Vanilla away as well.

Now Vanilla was in search for a new home and found the village here. She lived in the forest most of her life but now she had to change everything. She didn't really have many friends when she grew up so friends were on her list to get first besides a home. Vanilla would also like to find a mate, who would stay with her, since she is old fashioned feline. Hopefully, he'll be a feline as well as herself. This was her life and she wanted to live it as she pleased.

Your Information
Nickname: Vanilla
Other Characters: None

[Admin Grae]

I'm sorry to say it, but there are a few problems with this application.

For starters, the length of some of these items. You need seven more sentences in Personality, and three more in History for the lengths to reach the required amount. The required amount of sentences for each are listed on the form that you copy/paste to fill out.

Second, the clothing. In the rules, it mentions that they are living in a sort of primitive style, meaning no clothing that you would see nowadays and more things along the lines of leather or cloth. Everything will be simply made to last longer rather than look pretty, and rarely do they wear jewelry though a limited amount is allowed. Her hair, as well, probably won't have a decent cut or be colored like you'd find on someone from today. As for the makeup, I'm sure you could find something in nature to use, but I'm not seeing how the nail polish could be found and made here, or the tattoo be permanent.

Another thing, the mention of a lot of modern day inventions, like pianos, violins, showers, television, and movies. There is none of that here. These people are living a life off of the land, only able to eat, use, and make what ever they can with what the earth provides for them and what they can provoke the earth to give them. There isn't any electricity, only flames. There aren't any showers, only the river and the lake. There aren't any instruments, since we currently don't have anyone capable of making rough resemblances of what we consider flutes or drums.

I'm not sure if this will change much of her history, since these people have only been living in the area for at the most a year and a half, but it might.

Sorry for all this, but these changes need to be made for it to be accepted.

[Vanilla]

Okay.
I believed that I fixed everything. I hope that this time everything is okay.

[Admin Grae]

Much better. ^^ Thanks for fixing it.

There's only two things I saw that needed to be done to it now. If I haven't miscounted, there are three sentences still needed in Personality, and one more in History. Sorry if there was a miscount. Feel free to call me on that if there was one.

[Vanilla]

Alright. Done! I hope that now it is okay.

[Admin Grae]

Wonderful. ^^

Accepted!

Sorry for all the trouble that took. You're free to role play now.